Jordon Quattlebaum
Author of Breakdown: Episode 1 (A Post-Apocalyptic Serial Adventure)
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Continuity issues abound. Character development of the protagonist could use some work. Grammar, punctuation, and spelling were marvelous though. The basis of a story is there, and I like the fact that Thom (the protagonist) is not a prepper. The fact it was free, also figures in. I will check out the next episode only if it is free. Continuing on after that, depends if I see any improvement in continuity and character development.