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Topic:  **Book Review HAIKU 0 / 36 read

Jun 2, 2009, 7:21am (top)Message 1: avaland

Here's a bit 'o fun for the Club Read crowd. When you finish a book, write a review in form of Haiku*.

For our purposes here, our Haiku will be 17 syllables, arranged in lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively. Anyone can do this, one does not need to have acquired a professional poetic license:-) Here's two based on my most recently read books as examples:

By the North Gate: Stories by Joyce Carol Oates

Eden ironic
Rural America seen
Repressed emotions

Four Freedoms by John Crowley

Making planes for war
Ordinary people are
In prose are honored

*we could have a whole conversation on Haiku itself, but the aim here is just to have some fun.

Jun 2, 2009, 8:13am (top)Message 2: dukedom_enough

The City & The City by China Mieville (with spoiler!)

Twin cities, standing
Between mountains and the sea;
Each stands between each.

Jun 2, 2009, 8:17am (top)Message 3: dukedom_enough

But wouldn't other poetic forms be better for some books? Limericks, for instance:

Saturn's Children by Charles Stross

A courtesan robot named Freya,
...

:-)

Jun 2, 2009, 8:17am (top)Message 4: avaland

oooooo! *claps wildly*

Jun 2, 2009, 8:31am (top)Message 5: WilfGehlen

Hey Westford, Cambridge here. I try to offset the length and detail of my reviews with haiku's. Here are some recent offerings.

The Crying of Lot 49 by Thomas Pynchon
Brilliant points of dust/ Dancing in a patch of sun/ Warms the cold within.

Ulysses (Vintage International) by James Joyce
Flower of mountain/ 'Midst high Howth rhododendron/ The sun shines for you.

A Lost Lady (Willa Cather Scholarly Edition) by Willa Cather
A toast--Happy Days! / The wild roses of summer / Their bloom, quick to fade.

O Pioneers! (Penguin Classics) by Willa Cather
Days on the Divide / Spring, summer, autumn, winter, . . . / O Alexandra!

My Ántonia (Broadview Literary Texts) by Willa Cather
Jim's Antonia. / Copper-red prairie: Toooh-neeey, / My Antonia.

The Leopard: A Novel by Giuseppe Di Lampedusa
Don Fabrizio / abed with Princess Stella / Gesummaria!

Jun 2, 2009, 8:35am (top)Message 6: dukedom_enough

Cool. Might have known someone would already be doing that routinely.

Jun 2, 2009, 8:55am (top)Message 7: reading_fox

And in Limericks. I recently came across this one by Adpaton written last year for Miracle at Speedy Motors

Mma Ramotswe, amateur sleuth,
Has reached her ninth volume, s'truth;
The writing is quaint,
Of sleeze there's no taint,
And no trace of language uncouth.

The two proper lady gumshoes
Are having a fit of the blues
As letters unkind
From a poisonous mind
Have arrived without any clues.

Mma Makutsi has bought a new bed -
The heart-shape quite went to her head -
A client is trying
They suspect she is lying,
And cash problems are bleeding them red.

A large fan-base of readers adoring
Love the stories and keep on imploring
For more of the same
And no-one's to blame
If some of us find them just boring

I don't quite have that level of skill.

Carpe Diem
Vampires are invited
Granny will sip her cup of tea
Religion be dammed

Jun 2, 2009, 11:37am (top)Message 8: aluvalibri

#5> Wilf, I particularly like the "Gesummaria" at the end of The Leopard's haiku.

Jun 2, 2009, 12:53pm (top)Message 9: WilfGehlen

#8> Thanks Paola, just taking my cue from the source.

Jun 2, 2009, 1:46pm (top)Message 10: polutropos

Cannot resist a literary challenge:

my current read is Wild Dogs by Helen Humphreys.

Dogs and natures discarded
Free are we or wild
Tumult descends: no answers

Jun 3, 2009, 4:55am (top)Message 11: KimB

One Hundred Years of Solitude

Boy in love with Aunt
Boys first name starts with an A
It happens again

:-)

PS I really did love this book more much more than the Haiku conveys.

Jun 3, 2009, 6:17am (top)Message 12: tomcatMurr

me me me me me
me me me me me me me
me me me me me

Atlas Shrugged

Jun 3, 2009, 7:30am (top)Message 13: dukedom_enough

Nice one, tomcatMurr. My Atlas Shrugged:

Trains, money, metals;
We owe nothing to others.
Where are the servants?

Message edited by its author, Jun 3, 2009, 7:31am.

Jun 3, 2009, 9:07am (top)Message 14: cakefriend

Jonathan Livingston Seagull

Outcast yearns for flight
Higher plane of existence
Desires to teach

Jun 3, 2009, 9:13am (top)Message 15: avaland

Oh, keep them coming. These are great fun.

Jun 3, 2009, 10:50am (top)Message 16: tomcatMurr

Thanks Duke. Like yours too, and the comic strip. I detest Ayn Rand. Does it show?

Message edited by its author, Jun 3, 2009, 10:50am.

Jun 3, 2009, 12:28pm (top)Message 17: dukedom_enough

It does. As for me, I swear, by my life and my love of it, that I am very glad I didn't fall for the Rand stuff when I encountered Shrugged as an adolescent.

Message edited by its author, Jun 3, 2009, 12:29pm.

Jun 3, 2009, 12:45pm (top)Message 18: cakefriend

City of Bones

Jace, Clary, Simon
Magnus, Alec, Izzy, Max
These are the good guys

Jun 3, 2009, 12:57pm (top)Message 19: kidzdoc

Brooklyn by Colm Tóibín

Irish lass heads west
A new life and love await
Will she stay or go?

Message edited by its author, Jun 3, 2009, 1:06pm.

Jun 3, 2009, 2:57pm (top)Message 20: laytonwoman3rd

Adobe was doing this with his 50 Book Challenge last year. He seems to have left us, though. There are some good ones there.

Jun 3, 2009, 4:51pm (top)Message 21: kidzdoc

Frida's Bed by Slavenka Drakulic

Pain, illness, despair
Betrayed by body and love
Art provides escape

Jun 4, 2009, 7:09am (top)Message 22: dukedom_enough

These work quite well at getting us interested in a book, don't they?

Jun 8, 2009, 12:30am (top)Message 23: tiffin

The Ladies of Grace Adieu and Other Stories by Susanna Clarke

The world of Faerie
Illusion, dark heart, and fey
Trust nothing - away!

Jun 8, 2009, 12:32am (top)Message 24: tiffin

A Limerick about a Haiku

Lines one, two and five in trimeter,
With lines three and four in dimeter,
Iambic and anapestic
Sound quite antiseptic
But a Haiku--ahh--you can't beat 'er!

by Tiffin

Ok, dukedom...finish #3!

Message edited by its author, Jun 8, 2009, 12:40am.

Jun 8, 2009, 6:40am (top)Message 25: tomcatMurr

Fantastic Tiffin! I much prefer the limerick to the haiku.

A limerick for The Life and Opinions of the Tomcat Murr

There was a young tomcat named Murr
Who had a remarkable purr
When he purred late at night
His master would write
For the fiddle, and gaze at his fur.

(is enjambment allowed in a limerick, I wonder?)

Message edited by its author, Jun 8, 2009, 6:44am.

Jun 9, 2009, 11:02am (top)Message 26: laytonwoman3rd

Thumbs UP, Tom. (I know thumbs are a puzzlement to cats, but it's meant as a compliment.)

Jun 10, 2009, 7:36am (top)Message 27: dukedom_enough

tiffin@24,

Hmmm...

Jun 10, 2009, 7:37am (top)Message 28: dukedom_enough

tiffin@24,

Hmmm...will need a bit of time...

Jun 10, 2009, 7:53am (top)Message 29: cakefriend

Limericks, huh?

Loving Frank

There once was an architect named Wright
Who fancied a client first sight
They each left a spouse
The papers called him a louse
But in the end two wrongs just seemed right.

Jun 10, 2009, 9:22am (top)Message 30: avaland

The Robber Bride by Margaret Atwood

Evil Zenia
Cunningly takes what she wants
Are we complicit?

Jun 10, 2009, 9:32am (top)Message 31: WilfGehlen

#30 Nice! Made me go to the link. And the reviews. Then was put off a bit by the "girliest Girlybook" comment. Still, nice!

Jun 10, 2009, 4:27pm (top)Message 32: avaland

>31 It's the second time I've read it. This time around I'm roughly the age of the characters. It's a great discussion book. Not sure I understand the "girliest Girlybook" comment.

Jun 10, 2009, 6:18pm (top)Message 33: WilfGehlen

>31,32 See Merry10's review of The Robber Bride for the GG comment. Not that that's necessarily bad. Sometimes the manliest man will enjoy and discuss the girliest Girlbook.

Jun 12, 2009, 2:03pm (top)Message 34: avaland

>33 yes, I just found it and I do understand exactly what she is saying (I hadn't thought about it that way), but one should not be off by from reading it because of the use of that term :-) I have added my ravings to the rest of them.

Oct 9, 2009, 11:46pm (top)Message 35: WilfGehlen

Oct 11, 2009, 5:57pm (top)Message 36: cakefriend

#35

Interesting ending

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