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Death watch by Ari Berk

Death watch (edition 2011)

by Ari Berk

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Title:Death watch
Authors:Ari Berk
Info:New York : Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers, 2011.
Collections:Your library, Read in 2013 (inactive)
Tags:mine, fiction, read in 13

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Death Watch (Undertaken Trilogy) by Ari Berk



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Couldn't get into it; didn't finish.
  mtlkch | Jun 21, 2016 |
sorry, this book just wasn't for me.
  kara-karina | Nov 20, 2015 |
Ari Berk's Death Watch is, without doubt, one of the most beautifully-written books I've had the pleasure of reading. His prose is lyrical, gothic, and drenched with meaning. The discussions of life, death, and family are thought-provoking and touching. For the prose alone, this book is a hundred percent worth reading. Berk has massive talent and, though I can't say this series, is perfect for me, I will be keeping an eye on his career.

The catalyst of Death Watch is the disappearance of Amos Umber, Silas' father. Silas and his mother are turned out of their home, for it belongs to his Uncle. With little recourse available to them, they agree to move back to Lichport, the hometown of both his parents and his own birthplace, to live with his Uncle. There, he must confront his father's disappearance and his destiny, and try to help Lichport in the process.

The world depicted in Death Watch feels both real and fantastical, modern and historical. Lichport feels like a place out of time, a town where the realm of the dead is closer than anywhere else. Ghosts roam the streets, inhabit houses, and attempt murders. Berk captures the eerieness perfectly, but also the magic. Ghosts are like people; they aren't all bad, and they come in all sorts of forms. In fact, some ghosts are even corporeal, lingering almost like zombies, simply unwilling to accept that they're dead. The world building is fantastic and rich, full of ghost lore. The family dynamics are like Lemony Snicket meets Hamlet, which basically means it's dark and messed up, but a bit fanciful. Actually, much of the story recalls Shakespeare or classic literature.

Where Death Watch came up short for me was in plotting and characterization. So far as the plot goes, I would have liked more of it. Death Watch is hefty at over 500 pages, and it felt long too. There's a lot of meandering to the plot, and, despite that, I felt like most of the actual plot elements were dealt with so swiftly as to be unsatisfying. Berk focuses more on the quiet reflection than on the active moments, like Silas having to separate from his ghostly girlfriend and the takedown of the villain.

Though I like Silas, I don't feel any strong emotions towards him, and I can't be bothered about anyone else in Death Watch. I felt a definite distance from him that never diminished. He also never really does much growing through the course of the book, and certainly the others don't. His troubled relationship with his mother is never really resolved or satisfactorily confronted. His brief courtship of the ghostly girl is told in such a way that it elicited no feels from me, though it is a tragic experience for him. He's a character I feel I should have liked, but the story focuses so much more on the writing and world building than on building up characters. Also, on a side note, this novel really doesn't strike me as young adult and, if anything, would fall more under the new adult umbrella, as Silas is over 18 and deals with issues of becoming an adult, like finding a profession and moving out of his parents' home.

Anyone who enjoys ghost stories or gothic literature will be doing themselves a disservice by not reading Death Watch. ( )
  A_Reader_of_Fictions | Jun 30, 2013 |
I think I'm going to wait a couple of days before I rate this book in terms of stars. For now, I just want to voice all of my thoughts and frustrations with this 428 page book. I will probably return in a few days to adjust this review, but here goes...

Setting: At first, I really wanted this story to take place at some time during the late 1800's. The way that the author described the town of Lichport, I really feel like it was a town forgotten by time and the rest of the world. I envisioned the story taking place in another country (probably in an European country), and I imagined the characters dressing a particular way, and I expected the whole thing to have a very late 19th century, early 20th century feel to it. Even Silas’ name sounds like it’s from an older time. I was immediately taken a back when the author mentioned suburbs and shopping trips in Florida. While I liked imagining the story my own way, I feel like trying to put a time stamp and realistic location on this story actually did it a huge disservice.

Characters: I think the author did a good job of fleshing out the characters. I think that Silas, his mother (Dolores), Uncle, and Amos, all had very distinct personalities. The conflict between Silas and his mother and Amos and Dolores was very real. Uncle’s insanity was evident from the moment we’re introduced to him, and I think it continues to build throughout the story. Bea’s story was told, but I don’t think the relationship between her and Silas was developed enough. In general, though, I completely understood where each characters emotions and thoughts came from, and this is one of the few things that I did like about the story.

Job descriptions: It took entirely too long for the author to describe the role of undertaker. I think that the role of such an important position within the town should have been explained to Silas before he took on the job. I hated having to wait until I was 250 pages into the story to find out what was expected of Silas. I disliked having to wait even longer to find out what Mrs. Bowe’s job was, and even now, I’m still a little murky on the details.

Plot: The overall plot of the story, which is to respect the dead and traditions, is extremely repetitive. I appreciate didactic literature as much as anyone, but from beginning to end, you're bombarded with this idea that you have to remember your deceased loved ones, and quite frankly, I think it's too much, and I don’t agree with the book’s message. Life is for living…not remembering ancestors from hundreds of years ago. If we spent all of our time consumed by the responsibility of remember all of our dead kin, then that doesn’t leave much time for living our own lives. It also seemed like the author was particularly against the idea of moving away and leaving our deceased loved ones to rest peacefully in the ground. The moral of the story is actually a bit stifling—staying in one dead end place to be near our dead kin so that we’ll always remember them…

Conflict Resolution: I still feel like some things were unresolved. I would have liked to have known more about Bea and what became of her. I suspect this will be a series (which I will not continue reading), and it’s becoming a rather annoying habit of series writers to leave a bulk of the story unfinished because they want to carry it over to the next book, and they don’t even provide temporary solutions to certain conflicts within the story. The situation with Bea was an unresolved conflict.

Miscellaneous: Silas is told by Mrs. Bowe that his father's house belongs to him too. At one point in the story, Silas absolutely has to get out of Uncle's house. He takes his belongings and roams the streets for some time because he's unsure about where to go. I'm sorry for pointing this out, but this is totally unrealistic. If you're 15 years old and someone gives you a house, you don't just forget that. You're first natural instinct would be to go to the house that you now own! Right?

This book contains a lot of poetry and descriptive language. I almost feel like the author enjoyed writing poetry more than developing the plot. I don’t think I minded the poetry…this is just an observation.

Also, the eBook is riddled with an alarming amount of typos. The publisher really should have taken care of this before releasing the book. There are numerous sentences throughout the book that just don't make any sense.

Overall, I think the story should have been reigned in in some places. For the first 300 pages of the book, the story is all over the place and doesn’t really take on a set form in terms of introducing the characters, setting, conflict, and rising action, and then resolving the conflict. I was thoroughly disappointed with the story’s conclusion. The situation with Uncle was resolved entirely too easily, and I’m still not entirely sure what he wanted with Silas—perhaps a companion for Adam’s ghost (who was a minor character)? The author also assumed that her audience knew too much about the world she’d created. The bees and their purpose were never fully explained. The author should have assumed that the audience knew nothing. I feel agitated at having to write this review because I found the story long and tiresome to read, and the story seemed to jump all over the place, and as a result, it’s extremely difficult for me to pinpoint anything that was good/bad about the story. I’m not remembering events in a sequential order because the story didn’t have a rhythm to it. I think I have a general disdain for the story because I spent so much time wandering the town with Silas, waiting for something to happen, waiting for him to find out more information about his father, waiting to find out what uncle was hiding, and in the end I was let down.
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  russell.alynn | Apr 16, 2013 |
Death Watch is an enchanting story that brings meaning to the rituals that enhance the grieving process for those who have lost a loved one. In Silas, Mr. Berk has created a most unlikely but lovable hero, and it is with great pleasure the reader watches Silas step in to fill the role his father once held. Any reader who may be frightened of the idea of death is immediately assuaged by Lichport and the seriousness with which the town goes about its duties of official grieving. Even though it is part of a series, Death Watch is more like a stand-alone novel, with almost all mysteries resolved and the main plot tidied up nicely by the end of the story. There is something decidedly simple and refreshing in this departure from typical paranormal novels, and I look forward with pleasure to the release of the second novel of the series.
Acknowledgements: Thank you to the Great Lakes Independent Booksellers Association for my copy!
  jmchshannon | Feb 12, 2012 |
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When seventeen-year-old Silas Umber's father disappears, Silas is sure it is connected to the powerful artifact he discovers, combined with his father's hidden hometown history, which compels Silas to pursue the path leading to his destiny and ultimately, to the discovery of his father, dead or alive.… (more)

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