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Loading... Rust (edition 2012)by Julie Mars
Work detailsRust by Julie Mars
None. This review was written for LibraryThing Early Reviewers. This review was written for LibraryThing Early Reviewers. This review was written for LibraryThing Early Reviewers.Julie Mars has a little trouble getting out of her own way, though. She can't resist telling the reader when showing would do as well, so we get drawn-out descriptions of everyone's emotions and how this thing that just happened reminds them of this other thing that happened a long time ago. She's working with multiple close third-person narrators, but they don't have distinct voices, and that's a little jarring to the reader. Mars is also working with a lot of stories - Margaret's artist's journey, Rico's marriage, Rico's family history, Margaret's family history, Margaret's dad's disastrous trip to India, Margaret and Rico's is-it-or-isn't-it-a-romance - and she never seems to settle on which one is most important to the action of the book. They each get equal treatment within the structure of the narrative, including the bafflingly boring subplot of Margaret's dad, which is told in italicized flashbacks interspersed with Margaret and Rico having deep emotions about things. It leaves the reader wondering what the story is really about. This isn't a bad book, but it's not a great one, either. I had trouble staying involved enough in the story to finish it, in part because of the degree to which Mars doesn't trust the reader to follow along, but instead feels the need to spell out endlessly how the characters feel about everything, instead of showing us how they're living though it. This review was written for LibraryThing Early Reviewers.Good book! no reviews | add a review
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She has decided to move her art to three dimensions, and, in order to accomplish this, she begins collecting an assortment of rusted machine parts. Her next step involves learning to weld. Rico Garcia, widely known as “El Rey,” because of his skill as a welder among low-rider enthusiasts, agrees to teach Margaret this skill. The two become close friends and sets them on a path of introspection.
Margaret’s parents abandoned her as a young child, and she grew up under the care of her grandfather. Rico’s marriage slowly disintegrates as he tries to figure out why his loving, passionate wife has turned cold. Interspersed among the chapters, Mars describes the life of Vincent. On a trip to India, he has found himself imprisoned for some unspecified drug crime. He begins a journey of his won, which brings him into contact with Margaret and Rico.
Now, my faithful readers might think they know how this novel will turn out, but they would be wrong. Rust is Mars’ fourth novel, and I can assure you, I am already on the hunt for the first three. Her prose shines like the sun in the Southwest desert. Early on, Mars writes,
“On Sunday, Margaret woke up moody. After she had taken her morning shower, for example, she threw her towel to the floor and studied her naked body in the mirror on the back of the bathroom door. This was a sure sign of a coming storm. Whenever she experienced the urge to stand outside herself and technically review her body, which in these moments she tended to equate with her cage, her jail cell, or her hostage closet, she was already in trouble. It meant the restlessness, the discontent, was upon her, and she was trapped in it” (52).
Margaret encounters an entirely new world in Albuquerque, and this world helps her tie up a lot of the loose ends resulting from her unraveling in New York. Julie Mars’ novel, Rust is an interesting and imaginative novel and deserves a look by all serious readers. 5 stars
--Chiron, 11/16/12 (