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Loading... Erotic Seductionby Moll Molone
I enjoyed the premise of this more then I enjoyed the actual book. I was left feeling like I was missing something. Firstly, this is a good book if you're looking for some not-terribly-involving recreational erotica. The adult scenes were crafted with care and attention. If that's what you are looking for you won't be let down. But... the characters feel thin and, as another reviewer has noted, the scenes bop back and forth in different times and places in a way that's disconcerting. Perhaps if the character were more developed they could've served as a strong connective tissure between scenes, but in this case they do not. Also, while the point of this story seems to be the erotica, some of the descriptions are overdone. I understand the writer's desire to touch upon all the details they can find, but the result feels more cluttered than comprehensive. Still, this was a fun, highly-charged, read. If you're looking for a little light erotica, this might be perfect for you. So, a book where the main theme is of an adult nature. I'm not one to judge whatever a writer is drawn to, however this book, while leaving the subject out of the equation, was not written well. Isobel, the main character in two of the stories, is hard to visualize in the real world, and Jay, the main protagonist, isn't believable, in any way, shape, or form. Also, for a trilogy, the first two stories could be linked via, what could be described as a weak plot link, but the third story didn't make sense at all. I won this on a LibraryThing giveaway. This is the start of three stories. Isobel is seeking attention, maybe approval thru Jay who is more than happy to oblige. But he has his own insecurities to deal with. This was a nice touch to the main stories that will follow.
The Next Fifty Shades of Grey, but beautifully written and without the gasping, lip-biting, and repetition.
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The first story is in fact three sexual encounters, which aren't to much related. The first two encounters were sensual, but the last one was not to my taste: to much male violence. I did not finish this story.
The second story is a preprequel to the first one. The theme is a unhappy wife lost in Marokko that finds a hero. Not erotic, just romance. Not special.
The third story is more a teaser and does not finish. Pity.
All in all not my taste. (