[b:Mine Forever ~ Simon|16173764|Mine Forever ~ Simon (The Billionaire's Obsession, #1.3)|J.S. Scott|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1374238152l/16173764._SX50_.jpg|22022560] by [a:J.S. Scott|2777016|J.S. Scott|https://images.gr-assets.com/authors/1372111586p2/2777016.jpg]
Genres: Adult, Romance
2.5 Stars

Paced slowed down by repetitive thoughts and dialog.
To much cheesy sickly-sweet dialog.

The sex scenes would have been hotter with more action and less talking. Although there is definitely steam, the dialog took away from it.

Just to much OTT instances for me.
Truthfully, it felt like it was losing its maturity by the page.

I'll be putting part 4 off for a while. ( )

I skip read most of this book. Between the typos, grammatical errors and the 'telling instead of showing' shit, I just couldn't read it word for word. I found this book (serial) to be very boring. The drama was so weakly presented it was very hard to care about any of the characters. I just never got emotionally involved because the writing style was so rough that I couldn't get past it. I spent most of my time reading noticing the strange sentences, the grammatical errors, and the weak build up. Tepid about sums this book up for me (and the previous two. Uninspired would be my second choice. I doubt I'll read anything more from this author. Not so bad as it just didn't do anything for me. Instant obsession, instant love, instant marriage, instant (fill in the blanks). And a constant bore. I feel badly saying this because, again, the author wasn't really out right bad, I just found it weak and uninspiring. ( )