In the near future, the United States is divided into prisons, and the majority of the men in the country -- especially men of color -- are prisoners. The majority of the women serve as guards. People are sentenced to prison for the most minor of infractions committed as children, and then sentence after sentence is piled on top of the already-incarcerated individual for things like insubordination (i.e., talking back to a guard), theft (i.e., taking an extra food allotment), or any number of other potential crimes. Here's the rub, though: virtually everything is a crime. This is "zero tolerance" run wild.

Within the prison, a hierarchy has evolved that determines where one lives and what sort of privileges one may receive. Our hero, 24-year-old Chago, is a poor laborer whose only goal involves seeing his son (by one of the prison guards) as often as he can. When the warden of the prison announces the invention of new technology that can determine one's innocence or guilt, Chago is eager to step through the Innocence Device. He knows he didn't do anything really wrong -- in fact, he's not entirely sure why he's in prison; he only knows he was about six or seven when he was first sentenced -- and he's certain the Innocence Device will set him free. Alas, all is not as it seems, and when a prison riot begins, Chago's entire world is thrown into chaos.

Great premise, right? It's why I signed up for this book through the LibraryThing Early Reviewers program. Sadly, the writing itself failed to live up to that premise. This short novella -- hardly more than a short story, really -- can't seem to make up its mind whether it was written for an adult or a YA audience. The language is simple, perhaps written at about a fifth- or sixth-grade level, but the protagonist is an adult in his early 20s. The copy is printed in large type with widely spaced lines, which is why I say it's hardly more than a short story. Had it been printed in normal-sized book type with normally spaced lines, its length would have most likely been around 50 or so pages: a lengthy short story, yes, but still a short story. Plot development is minimal, character development is somewhat better (for Chago, at any rate), both of which generally can be forgiven in fiction of this length. However, there's a gaping plot hole in the last few pages that, combined with the simplistic grade-school language, left this reader deeply dissatisfied. This plot hole almost feels like the author wrote something else in between the last chapter and the epilogue that he later took out, but he didn't go back and smooth out the edges of the excision.

The premise of The Innocence Device is one I would enjoy seeing rewritten in adult-oriented language, and greatly expanded with more plot development, more character detail, more of the whys and the hows, the politics and the social disorder that must have led to such circumstances as exist within this novel. As I read through it (which took about 40 minutes -- really, it's just that short), I could almost see the full-length novel lurking in the shadows of each paragraph, waiting for someone like Hugh Howey, maybe, or Ben H. Winters, or (be still, my heart) China Miéville to flesh it out and bring it to life.

Too bad one of them didn't think of it. Hey, Mr. Kowalski! Will you sell this idea to China Miéville and make me a happy woman? No? Two stars for you, then. ( )

This was a quick novella you can easily read in one sitting. With the popularity of dystopian novels right now, I feel like this is a book that would be popular with younger teens who are not quite at the reading level for books like Divergent or Hunger Games, but are interested in similar stories.

I enjoyed the book, however, I found that it ended quite abruptly. It also seemed to end just a little bit too perfectly. ( )

This novella is tiny enough to easily read in one sitting. It is a young adult novel, appropriate for middle school students. The dystopian theme, with the world divided into prisoners and their keepers, might be very appealing to young teens. For adults or older teens, however, the story is much too simplistic to hold much interest. ( )

The Innocence Device by William Kowalski

This small book packs a wallop! I usually feel cheated if a story comes in under 300+ pages, but Kowalski jam packs an intense and compelling drama in this quick read. Set in the future, it echoes all manner of problems our current “throw-away” society faces today. It also manages to focus on Chago’s personal fight to survive and retain his sanity when there is no one you can trust. It haunts me with all its evil possibilities. Is there any way we can avoid this slowly marching progress into hell? Perhaps Kowalski will gift us with this knowledge soon. ( )

This book fell short of my expectations. It has a great premise, but is not as well-developed as it could be. The writing style is very basic - although the subject matter is clearly not for children, the writing style is more that of children's literature. Also, the cover blurb takes you almost to the end of the book, leaving little to be discovered in the reading. It's a great story with an excellent message that has great potential, but left me wanting more (and not in the good way). ( )