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Terra's Nite Out by Quanah Edwards
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Terra's Nite Out

by Quanah Edwards

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This review is based on the copy the author submitted in exchange for an honest review. (My full review is on The Review Board.)

This is also closer to a 1.5 than a 1.

From an actual TRB standpoint (excluding the KARR segment), this is the shortest work I have ever had to read. However I have quite a bit to say about it in regards to my thoughts.

The first thing that caught me off guard was the actual cover of this work. Even if the author just wanted to use the eyes, couldn’t the title of the work and her name be placed on the graphic? The very image that is up there is the same that is currently on Amazon and Goodreads. If it’s a place holder for an updated cover in the future, I wish that would have been stated somewhere in the blurb. With it looking the way it is, it just seems a bit incomplete.

Each page was littered with a plethora of errors in the following areas:

misspelled words
missing words
misused words


This was disappointing in a work that was this short. One should definitely be more meticulous in proofreading and have extra set of eyes in this as well as the editing aspect.

In this work, Terra wasn’t the only one that had a night out. Exclamation points, italicization, and capitalization went with it. Here’s what I mean. (Apologies in advance if get a bit too revealing in my candor.)

For me the essence of good erotica is making me feel as if I’m there. I’m either holding the video camera as the participants switch positions, or I have binoculars and am zooming in on the action. What can I say? My voyeur must have satisfaction! Plus, my imagination is mad vivid. The dialogue HAS to match the action!

The author should have definitely used more exclamation points to indicate the level of excitement in these sexual escapades, along with sprinkles of full capitalization and italicization.

Another component of Terra’s Nite Out was that the author relied heavily on stereotypes. This glamorization of a particular part of the male anatomy in relation to each body part took some of the spice out of this write and stunted each individual’s development. This author focuses more on implementing action than giving any real style or coherence to the characters or providing any type of strong storyline. It just felt like she just had Mr. Happy as a template but just adjusted him for length, skin tone, and additional adornments (like tattoos and piercings).

Verdict: This work would be appealing to someone who wants to read a recycled porn script of sorts. I don’t think it really fully computes as the type of erotica that (1) should have been published due to the multiple errors in visual presentation in such a short write and (2) the type one pays ninety nine cents for. There are full blown novels that are going for that price yet are better crafted than what I have seen here.

It all boils down to this:

Well displayed dialogue vivid descriptions and dimensions of characters= Panty soaking and grab-a-sex-partner (or a vibrator) erotica



Unemotional dialogue lackluster descriptions and one dimensional characters= I could have had a V8 erotica.
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