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The structure of the novel is so chaotic that I had difficulty finding what the author's motive was---or the characters! Gemma complains about being lonely, then is thankful for having friends, then she hates her friends, then she loves her friends the next day, then hates them again and hates Kartik, then loves Kartik and hates her family, then....everything was just too fickle! Gemma spends the entire book roaming around without any clear purpose. She seems to be a strong independent thinker, but she never really has the energy to physically carry out independent action. So many times I wanted her to stand up for herself, be it to her friend or the Centaurs and she never would.
The books seemed to to skip from events too abruptly. They were very rushed and I think about half of them could have just been left out all together. I loved the series, and the whole idea behind the story. I also love how the author describes situations and makes her readers think deeply about the confinement Victorian women suffered...and this book had so much potential (why I hate to give it less than 3 1/2 stars)! Sadly, it just seemed like a bunch of writing without any thought behind editing to make the story more accessible to its readers. (