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Loading... The Walk-In : A Novelby Gary Berntsen
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will love Sign up for LibraryThing to find out whether you'll like this book. I felt as if Gerntsen and Pezzullo had some interesting ideas for their novel, but weren't quite sure where to go with those ideas. In particular, it was as if they weren't sure whether the protagonist was a low-action espionage agent or a high-action operative (like a Mitch Rapp). The result was a character who just never quite came of the page as "real". Add to this some extended family plotlines early in the book that completely vanish for the majority of the book and then partially reappear later. I felt as if there must be quite a few deleted scenes that will be in the "director's cut" of the book. Finally, the writing style left something to be desired. Far too often, the authors would use the clunky device of parentheticals to give information (e.g., "his daughter Sally (7)" or NATO (North Atlantic Treaty Organization). Finally, in a book of this sort, it would be much better for the protagonist to "think" for the reader so that the reader has a better understanding of what the protagonist is looking for or planning; otherwise, he appears to be running around aimlessly and falling into situations that advance the plot. Nevertheless, despite all of those criticisms, the basic premise was sound and the plot itself was entertaining. ( )no reviews | add a review
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