So, the third Merchant Princes book. The change in this novel from the previous two is interesting; it suddenly goes a lot darker, a lot more political. Miriam is a pawn trapped in the royal court, cut off from her business ventures and her friends, forced to live the life of an idle noble lady, and alienated from her one ally in the power structure. After a brief attempt to regain the upper hand, her options keep diminishing through family intrigue until, by the end, a forced marriage becomes the least bad option open to her.

One thing leapt out at me; as so much of the book revolves around Miriam being lost in society, we get a lot of play with people talking only in a language she doesn't speak very well. When a character does speak in English rather than the local language, it often has quite dramatic implications - why do they know it, and why are they using it? The problem is, there's no textual indication as to which is which. Occasionally it's noted in the text - the first and most dramatic case where someone speaks English is done this way - but usually, it's just left unnoted, save that there's no confused faltering, and even that isn't uniformly applied. The result is that you often have to read a paragraph, think that the conversation seems very lucid, read back, and try to work out if X secondary character's meant to be speaking in English or if it's just the narrative style. It's trivial, I know, but it bugged me.

The other darkness is in the "real world"; the US Government has realised vaguely what's going on, and decided not to treat it as a law-enforcement problem, but as a national security one. After all, these people are magically transporting crateloads of cocaine into major cities - what happens if they do the same with bombs? So, we get the dramatic thriller-ish response you'd expect; people rushed off to top-secret organisations with cryptic acronyms, doors kicked down, etc etc. Except... the book was written in 2005, contains a thinly veiled description of the then-current administration down to its powerful Vice-President, and has some entirely plausible but deeply unpleasant assumptions about just how this sort of response would go - very wrong, very fast, through "enemy combatant" and out the other side. (At one point, a lawyer muses on how easy things would be if your opponents were somehow able to be deemed technically not human... and seems quite enthused by the prospect)

We could have done with a lot more in the third world; it's interesting, and well-developed, but gets short shrift this time. Still, it manages - if possible - to casually outdo the others in looming unpleasantness, with the last throwaway line about it...

Not cheering, any of it. But it's well-realised, it's better executed than the first book even if there's a bit of sloppiness about recapitulating the plot, and there was only really one glitch where I lost suspension of disbelief.

Miriam was born on our side, raised by adoptive parents in an America where women are equals. Suddenly drawn back into the plotting and politics of the great families on the other side Miriam finds herself not only restricted, but subject to blackmail and the political machinations that any female world walker is fated to deal with. With her modern views and sense of personal freedom this does not sit well and Miriam continues to fight the system, even while her alter ego Helge is making a pretense of trying to fit in.
Back on our side Matt has defected taking his knowledge of the second world and it's cross world drug smuggling to the DEA in return for witness protection. Of course that doesn't go quite to plan.
Stross is a sharp, witty writer with a wonderful imagination, creating new twists on the staples of fantasy, a feudal system & royal plots, blending with post 9/11 terror conscious America. ( )

This book was a good installment in the Merchant Princes saga. I liked how Miriam tried to keep her dignity and sense of self even when things look bleak. I look forward to reading the next book in the series, The Merchants' War. ( )

Book Three of the Merchant Princess series. I was disappointed that it didn't keep the pace of the other two. Miriam's imprisonment just took the energy out of the story. ( )

Another enjoyable read, as things get nasty and more things explode. Though nothing much happens to Helge as she spends most of the book locked up in one place or another. The weakest of the volumes so far. ( )