*sigh* Okay...pros about this book:
1) The characters. I enjoy the romance between Elizabeth and Nathaniel, and Hannah is turning into a complex young woman.
2) Uh...the setting? It's pretty?
The cons:
1) The plot. What plot?? For 600 pages, there should be plenty of things happening. Basically, some old dude in Scotland wants an heir for his castle before he dies, so he sends his man to kidnap Nathaniel's and Elizabeth's babies, making them sail from New York to Scotland. That's pretty much it. Yes, there are some subplots (Hannah wants to be a doctor - Nathaniel has a previous lover (gasp!) - pirates and Catholics!), but even the things that do happen are quite predictable. Things that are set up as mysteries unfold without much effort.
2) The writing! Everyone has a twitch in their cheek (or their jaw, or their eye) when they feel some strong emotion. Everyone gestures with their hands "palm up" when they try to get something out of someone. Sentences are awkward, making me reread them until I get the meaning. Ugh.
All in all, it's not a bad book, or a bad series. I just don't feel much excitement about it. I actually started and finished two other books while I was reading this—something I almost never do. Hopefully the next book will be better. ( )

Note: This review contains a very minor spoiler for those who haven't read Into the Wilderness, the first book in this series. It also contains a loose summary of the set up for the book being reviewed but no actual spoilers. Skip to the paragraphs below the asterisks if you simply want my opinion.

This historical novel is the second in a series about Elizabeth and Nathaniel Bonner, who live in upstate New York in the late 1700s. Elizabeth was born in England and was raised to take her place in society and at court. Her husband was born in the New World and, though of Scottish heritage, was raised as a Mowhawk. And, as can be expected, their personal histories color their outlooks on life and their relationship as a couple.

The book opens as Elizabeth is giving birth to their twins. Soon after, Nathaniel learns that his father has been arrested and is jail in Montreal. He thus must leave his family and travel to Canada to retrieve his father. Unfortunately, Nathaniel himself ends up in jail, and he, his father, and their companion find themselves in deep trouble. In an effort to save the men, Elizabeth decides to go to Albany to speak with her cousin, who is an attorney trained in British law. Because she can't leave her children behind, Elizabeth travels with her father's housekeeper, who can help take care of the babies.

Of course, nothing is ever as easy as it seems, and the family finds that its troubles have a deeper source than they had ever expected. Through a series of adventures, they find themselves far from home wondering how they will ever manage to return to the people and land they love. Solutions come from unexpected sources.

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Sara Donati's ability to create full and believable characters is one of her strong points. Another is the subtle way in which she helps the reader capture a sense of place and ambiance in many scenes throughout the novel. Furthermore, the story line is complex, and not all the subplots have obvious conclusions. Because the stories are intriguing and the characters have come alive for me, I will continue to follow the Bonners' adventures.

However, I don't understand why I am not compelled to rush right out and get the next book immediately, even though I do want to read it. I like the time period, I like the setting, I like the good people, I don't like the bad people, and I care about what's going to happen next. Yet I don't feel a deep and impatient need to stay in that world . . . though I will return to it in the coming months.

Fun fact: You'll recognize characters from other novels as well as a few historical figures when reading about Elizabeth and Nathaniel. ( )

Book 2. Good series. ( )

Nathaniel and Elizabeth are happily married, Elizabeth has just had twins. Hawkeye has been imprisoned in Canada and Nathaniel goes to rescue him, when he in turn is arrested Elizabeth goes to rescue him in turn. However the twins are kidnapped and brought to Scotland. Nathaniel is the last of a line, a part of a family dying out.

It's not a bad story but there were times when my attention drifted. Sara Donati does capture the essence of the Last of the Mohicans and the wealth of detail in the story but somehow I occasionally felt swamped. ( )

Sequel to Into the Wilderness. ( )