Rhonda Lee Carver
Author of Second Chance Cowboy
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First Ride Cowboy Collection — Contributor — 3 copies
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The Cowboy's Son (Tarnation, Texas # 2) by Rhonda Lee Carver
Ok this is a bit better than #1... but still some seriously odd word choices ... editing could be better. Sex is less explicit than most.
This was a kind-of enjoyable read. There were some really odd word choices that might be editing issues in some cases. I found the FMC to be not very relatable and kind of bitchy. The MMC was mostly not accessible then suddenly accessible. Bit of an odd trope, though the author included some good hooks for later books.
The sex is completely off page, almost ellipsis (i.e. "he closed the door with his booted heel.....) then abrupt change of chapter. There were some other abrupt transitions.
I will probably read the rest of the series.… (more)
The sex is completely off page, almost ellipsis (i.e. "he closed the door with his booted heel.....) then abrupt change of chapter. There were some other abrupt transitions.
I will probably read the rest of the series.… (more)
the end needs a little work and I still see some editing issues with wording. But overall the quality is improving.
FInally able to connect more with the overarching story. Still a bit "ugh" with the dad that had kids with two different women at the same time. Yuck.
Ending is still abrupt, and there are still kinda major word editing issues.
Ending is still abrupt, and there are still kinda major word editing issues.
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