Wow. That's - um, bad! Highly inconsistent characters, really stupid actions (as in, no one would do that unless the author needed them to), repeated interruptions of the suspense for the romance (read: sex) and the romance for the suspense... just poor. The biggest obstacle to belief for me was - they've talked on the phone just about every day, and in person nearly as often. She's got important information to share with him, and she was in danger. Someone _else_ picks up his phone, and she can't tell it's not him! Yeah, right! 'Sore throat' indeed - that explains why he didn't even comment on her danger? I was having trouble before that, but at that point it just stopped working for me. Just not good. ( )