The Shadow Rising

All right. Couldn't take it anymore. I officially quit this series. I got up to halfway through book 4 and realized that life is too short to read bad books. I wrote this as I read the book.

I think a lot of people who compare Tolkien and Jordan miss the point. I'll give Jordan this. He has more than one female character per book and they actually have more than one significant plot line and even interact with each other. That's not to say Jordan is superior to Tolkien, but it's certainly an improvement.

And now that we've commented on the few highlights in this godsawful series...

Yes Rand, remind us that you're not going to dance to anyone's tune. I don't know why you care other than Jordan really wants to remind us that being show more manipulated by the Aes'Sedai is a bad thing. Although I don't know of any situation in the first four books where Rand was actually manipulated by an Aes'Sedai, except in Andor during that random meeting with the Queen, maybe, and he has no clue what he's doing so he's relying on other people's help anyway so how would he even know if he was being manipulated (unless help = manipulation, which just makes me think he's an idiot because from day 1 he was pretty averse to help in case it was manipulation) and unless it's for evil purposes why does he care? The way things are, he just hates being manipulated BECAUSE he hates being manipulated. I think most people do but he doesn't have to harp on it every POV section like he has an axe to grind.

I still have no idea why any of the women like Rand. At least Lanfear kind of makes sense, because she's possessive (probably out of an "I like really powerful men" trope). It's not even an interesting or well-written relationship, it just makes the most sense of the badly written relationships available, which is kind of pathetic. You could argue 'love at first sight' for Elayne, but no. Jordan used too many words for other things to use a Get Out of Jail Free card on romance. He can't write romantic relationships and 'love at first sight' is not going to be an excuse. Heck, the characters in-universe don't even understand what's going on. Elayne has an inner monologue where she admits that she doesn't understand WHY she loves Rand but she's loved him since they first met(???). Apparently she doesn't question that it's LOVE instead of something else (like lust?). And Min, the character who refuses to be beaten by destiny... is defeated by destiny? WHY? And what is with people and assuming that you only do something for a person of another gender if you're in love with them? Everyone from the Amorlin Seat to random innkeepers and merchants. It's really stupid.

Again, why does Rand have such an abhorrence for Moiraine? She didn't make him magical. She didn't throw him at Tear so he could get the sword. She's helped him where she can, saved his life and his friends' lives multiple times, helped point him in the right direction... What, he's angry because another adult with a lot of power and knowledge is treating him like the child he acts like?

I 'love' the line where Elayne says that the pompous politicians in Tear follow Rand because he's a Leader and not because he's the Dragon Reborn. Yeah. Right. Jordan, you can't write women. And you should really not spend the rest of the story demonstrating just how bad of a politician Rand is while strongly demonstrating that the only reason the politicians haven't murdered/ignored him yet is because they're afraid he could murder them on the spot with his power. Yeah. Rand. A leader material.

In this book, Rand confronts taxes. And attempts to take over a country he gave precisely zero fucks about until this book. I understand that the nobles in Tear are pompous and I support people educating themselves but no. This is not how that works. Exactly when did Rand start caring about whether or not a country was run by pompous idiots or how their farmers did or their economy was run?

Apparently PerrinxZarine is a thing now. I still don't understand why and their relationship 'development' is REALLY disturbing ('I should try yelling at her more because that works' - I couldn't make this shit up if I tried; Perrin legitimately thinks that yelling at her is a good idea). This book seems to actually be JORDAN asking why they're a couple. Like... you wrote them this way Jordan. Make up your freaking mind. They seem to hate each other most of the time. And through this relationship we see more of how much of an entitled arrogant egotistical sexist ass Perrin is. I "love" how he manipulates Zarine (for her own GOOD, of COURSE!) and then gets angry when she does THE EXACT SAME THING TO HIM, only not in as cruel a fashion because POOR BABY she TRIES to make him ask her a question and FORCES her company upon him because she wants to help him save his people, while he pretended he was in lust with someone else and insulted her looks. Poor man. He then spends a large portion of the book pouting and acting all put-out over a character (Loiyal) he was barely on speaking terms with before Zarine spoke to him.

"The Shadow Rising", making us continue to ask: WHY IS MAT A CHARACTER IN THIS STORY? Literally all he does is take up space. His story does NOTHING to advance the plot (heck, even in the HUNT THE DAGGER plotline the Heroes were all looking for The Horn, too, so if the dagger plotline was removed nothing would have been lost; Perrin could have blown the horn, Ninaeve, Elayne and Egwene end up leaving Tar Valon anyway and then essentially rescue themselves and Rand saves the day). I don't care about him. At all. I briefly cared about him last book because the rooftop confrontation scene was one of the like three moments in the first four books and the prequel where I cracked a smile but that was it. Also, where is he randomly getting his Badass Weapons Skills? Book 1 he was the Archer. Last book he magically became a master of the staff. Now he's a master knifethrower/assassin? I guess I'd understand if it was more of this "past life" bs but we're never given that explanation. The section where he's sitting and listening to the nobles talk about raping women was really stupid. Yeah, good that Mat stood up to them, sort of. But was ANY of that necessary? Also this book: more examples of how much an entitled misogynistic lecherous ass Mat is, so like... is Jordan trying to demonstrate that "no, he's actually a good guy who respects women but still feels entitled to their attention and objectifies them every chance he gets". I really, really hate his sections.

Why is Tom Merrillin a character? What does he add to anything? He's done about two things in the first four books: teach Rand how to play the flute and allow Mat and Rand a chance to escape an enemy. I know he does stuff later on but it's really frustrating when not just one but two characters are essentially dead weight for the first four books, if not more, in a series. If Moiraine is the Merlin stand-in, what is Tom supposed to represent? Loiyal is the scribe. Moiraine is the teacher. Lan is the brute force and Rand is the magical brute force. The other Aes'Sedai fill in the magical brute strength and Mat and Perrin are around.

I guess if Moiraine ever figured out that even if she "can't" teach Rand how to use his magic, she can teach him other things like politics, etiquette, language, you know, things someone who is destined to be a leader might find useful, then we might end the book series early.

But then the next part happens. I really like that Egwene and Elayne attempted to help Rand learn what to do with his power. It's a lot more than Moiraine has attempted, at least on the page. She's stated that she's going to try to help but we haven't seen any proof of that other than her upbraiding him for being an idiot. It's deserved but it's not that helpful. And again, I ask, WHY DO YOU HAVE TO LIMIT WHAT YOU CAN TEACH TO MAGIC? Why doesn't he get a book on anatomy (so he knows what to do when he's healing)? Social etiquette? Politics? Perhaps a lesson on the make-up of the various governments in the WoT planet? A monster manual so he knows how to fight various enemies and recognize the Forsaken? What about more weapons practice? Language practice since he's meeting lots of different peoples and some lessons on different cultures? Elayne could do that! Yes, we get that the TWO HALVES OF THE TRUE SOURCE are VERY different and don't work the same way and WOMEN CANNOT TEACH MEN MAGIC and blah blah blah Jordan you don't know what education means. Of course MEN can teach WOMEN magic but HEAVEN FORFEND the reverse happen! Rand seems to remedy this by browsing the library at Tear and lo and behold he actually learns some things it's like you can actually learn useful stuff from books who'da thunk?

I "love" the plot point where Moiraine essentially says "Oh, the Ultimate Evil just messes shit up. It happens now." Because that's going to explain bad magic happening. You know. Bubbles in the pattern my ass. Why? Just cause.

Oh is Moiraine speaking/acting in a detached manner/drily? I'm shocked.

Otherwise the book is so. Boring. Again, if this was a series about the female characters alone, I'd probably finish it. There's a pretty neat cast of people there. Maybe with another writer who would take half the time to tell the story and actually write women well but they're pretty neat nonetheless. I'd love a novella where Aviendha and Egwene go on an adventure together. But whatever.

The writing has not improved much at all. There might be fewer nonsensical similes and repetitive prophecies that are never explained and serve no purpose other than to foreshadow to the reader what's going to happen in the next few pages or remind them of what happened in the last chapter, but since there were already a ridiculous number to begin with and "fewer" is a rather small decrease... so what? The book is still focused on this ridiculous gender warfare bs and if a woman doesn't smooth her dress at least once per page featuring a woman, I feel concerned. Have a taste of my 'favorite' quotations:

"Time to die horn sounder." Its voice was an adder's hiss, warning of death. (Reviewer's note: nawwwww I never woulda guessed, too few death references)

Eyeing him in that way women had. (Reviewer's note: ????)

Acrid Trolloc blood, with its stink that burned his nostrils. (Reviewer's note: the definition of 'acrid': sharp or biting to the taste or smell; bitterly pungent; irritating to the eyes, nose, etc.) show less

The Shadow Rising begins slowly compared to The Great Hunt or The Dragon Reborn. Rand seems unsure of what to do now that he has taken the Stone of Tear and drew Callandor and cemented himself as The Dragon Reborn. A Trolloc attack on the Stone pushes him to stop squabbling with the nobles and go to the Aiel Waste to gain more allies for the coming battles. Rand remains paranoid that the Aes Sedai (particularly Moiraine) will manipulate him, causing him to become less trusting and more secretive.

Joining Rand in the Waste are Mat, Moiraine, Lan, Egwene, and the Aiel that were in the Stone. Mat plays second fiddle to Rand this time, only getting some attention when by himself. Moiraine's role is also greatly diminished, although we do see show more her frustration now that Rand leads while telling her nothing of his plans. Lan is just along for the ride. Egwene wants to train under the Aiel Wise Ones to learn more about Dreaming.

It is in the Waste that we get more of Jordan's world building. Aiel culture is greatly shaped by their home, and the history of why they came to live in the Waste is one of the highlights of book 4. The culture shock that all the characters experience in new lands helps bring the world to life. Another interest are the beings in Mat's chapters while he goes into ter'angreal, giving answers or gifts according to some ancient rules we don't learn about just yet.

Perrin gets some much needed development away from Rand and without Moiriane to guide/influence him. From the somewhat indecisive blacksmith's apprentice to leader, even if that role is foisted upon him. Hopefully he'll grow into it, and become less agitated about people looking up to him. Faile seems to be pushing him in that direction.

Nynaeve still tries to bully her way through life, this time without Egwene to stand up to her. Elayne works around her, but I wonder how long she can keep this up before those around her get tired of it.

This one also got me paying more attention to Min's visions, now that at least one came to pass in the White Tower. show less

Mat snorted. “I don’t want to be any bloody hero.”

Bit late for that. For all of them.

“How do you feel about your prophesied destiny? I must know, if I am to compose this epic."

"Feel?" Rand looked around the camp, at the Jindo moving among the tents. How many of them would be dead before he was done? "Tired. I feel tired.”

In [b:The Shadow Rising|9539|The Shadow Rising (Wheel of Time, #4)|Robert Jordan|https://images.gr-assets.com/books/1470841890s/9539.jpg|6591373], there is a feeling of settling. That's not to say that things aren't still happening, oh they very much are. Rand is coming into his own and forging a nation in a way no one would expect, Matt is coming into an entirely new destiny.

Perrin... this is among my show more favorite parts of the series. When Perrin hears about White Cloaks and trollocs attacking the Two Rivers, he breaks away from Rand--which despite all his grumbling Matt was unable to do--and goes to help. While some of his reasons for doing so far a bit mad, he ends up where he needs to be. And Faile. Oh Faile. They're good for one another, even if it takes them forever to realize it.

We're also getting yet more expansion of the world--seeing the Aiel waste as the Aiel see it, along with a direct look deep into the history of the world. We see another of the great cities in Tanchico, along with putting a more human face on the Seanchan. And that storyline in the Tower. Oh how the world is changing. And oh much I know is yet to come.

One interesting thing that I hadn't really put together before reading a few articles before this reread:

Once the main characters split up and leave Tear... we'll not see so many of the main characters together again until the last battle--if then. It's like knowing that one day you will pick up your child for the last time. You don't know it when it happens and there's a whole lifetime yet ahead of you. But it's still the last time. show less

I'm on a re-read though I only read through the first 7 books or so many years ago. The Shadow Rising is where Jordan starts pulling all the strings together. It's well-paced and great writing and the group splits again to go different ways. Perrin and Faile head for the Two Rivers and confrontations with the Shadowspawn, Rand and his party head for the Aiel, while Elayne and Nyneave chase the Black Ajah. It's a heckuva ride.
The only sections that dragged for me were those with Elayne and Nyneave. Up until now, I haven't minded their attitude that turns off so many readers but I was put off by their condescension and general know-it-all vibe, especially when they really didn't know what they were doing. It was a sharp contrast to how show more Perrin and Faile work together or how Rand makes decisions. Hopefully, they'll learn and adjust their attitudes in future books.
I was surprised at how much I liked Perrin and Faile's romance. I didn't remember it much and I've gone along with the general view that Jordan didn't write romance well, but I was wrong. It's a sweet slow burn and Perrin's letter to Faile...well, that and the rush off the battlefield moment just sealed them as a couple.
I'm very much enjoying this reread; I read these originally as they came out and didn't finish, but on to the next book. show less

Ik vond dit boek lekker lezen. Ik kon 's-nachts totaal niet slapen en heb het toen helemaal uitgelezen.
Op de een of andere manier vond ik hier de herhalingen wel prima, de verhoudingen tussen de stukken van de verschillende personen perfect en het verhaal echt lekker spannend.

Ik heb een enorme voorkeur voor Perijn, Faille en Tweewater. Deze plotlijn vind ik echt geweldig. Het past bij Perijn en bij het volk van Tweewater en ik snap Faille over het algemeen heel goed. Mannen zijn soms zo......tsja. Bij de voorbereiding op De Grote Slag bij Tweewater gingen mijn emoties totaal met me op de loop. Tranen met tuiten, vooral bij het huwelijk van Perijn en Faille, maar ook het moment dat Perijn alle mensen bekijkt vlak voor de slag. De show more emoties, de liefde die hij voelt voor de mensen van Tweewater, die voelde ik op dat moment ook. Dat maakt dat dit boek voor mij tot nu toe het beste boek is.

Als tweede komen Rhand en de Aiel. Vooral de speervrouwen en hun omgang met Rhand, nadat hij hen verantwoordelijkheid geeft voor zijn eer, vind ik erg leuk. Egwene en Avienda vind ik ook wel leuk. Vooral hoe ze op hun plek gezet worden door de wijzen.

In dit boek vind ik de stukken met Nynaeve, Elayne, Thom en Juilin wel leuk maar toch het minst. En Juilin die kan me echt gestolen worden. Die man is TOTAAL NIET interessant. show less

Since this is probably the last book of the series that I will read, this review will vent the annoyances that have been building up over the past three. Maybe it's not quite fair to pin them all on one book, but oh well. I've read almost 4000 pages of the Wheel of Time—and so I think I've earned the right to criticize a bit. There are neither beginnings nor endings to the turning of the Wheel of Time. But this is an ending.

I'll dispense with the obligatory plot summary and get right to the snark. The storyline, though complicated in some ways, is pretty straightforward at its core: the bad guys are doing bad things, the good guys (and gals) are out to find out what it is and stop them, and everyone's infighting, pursuing their own show more selfish goals, telling us yet again how untrustworthy and dangerous Aes Sedai are, and just generally not communicating very well with one another.

What annoyed me most was Jordan's ideas about women. Can I just ask, what is up with all the braid-tugging on Nynaeve's part? Does Jordan not realize that women are the same as men in that it hurts to pull our hair? As in, actual physical pain, amazingly enough. Why would Nynaeve react to anything that angers her by pulling her own hair? Seriously? I don't know what to make of all the reviewers who extol the supposedly strong roles that women play in these stories (as compared to Tolkien's works, for example). Sure, they run around and act like idiots just like the men. That's supposed to be a model of a strong woman? Just because she wields power of some kind and dresses seductively?

I think if Jordan would confine himself to telling the story instead of constantly giving relationship advice, the series would be much stronger. Not to mention the fact that the bulk of his advice deals with how to manipulate the opposite sex. There are many, many, many asides about how hard women are to understand (because that's, you know, a highly original and hilarious thought).

I hit the eyerolling stage very early in this volume; the scene with Egwene, Elayne, and Rand was sloppy, awkward, and utterly contrived. Sorry, no one acts that way. It set the tone for the contrived explanations of Aiel culture and marriage customs, which manage to be women-empowering on the surface (they own stuff! they're roofmistresses!) but deeply chauvinistic when you examine them more closely. One word: polygamy. And the polygamy doesn't work both ways, oh no. A man can have multiple wives, but apparently Jordan's broadmindedness on this topic doesn't extend to women having multiple husbands. Funny how that works.

It seems all the women wear either clinging silk dresses they are uncomfortable in, or dresses of sheer material that you can see right through, or they end up naked at some point. Or they go around topless, in the case of the sea people. Or they dance seductively for the men, as with the Tinker women. No matter what else is going on, Jordan always finds a way to highlight female sexuality. To be fair, the sexuality of the ta'veren characters is often noted and they come in for a fair share of ogling, but it's always in the context of prowling women. Even when there are no male characters on set, the women still comport themselves in transparent apparel for the delectation of the reader. Evidently, in Jordan's mind, sex appeal defines women far more than it does men.

I wrote much of the above before I had finished the book, and every transparent-dress description I hit after writing this made me think, "I'm not changing a word, Jordan! I'm letting you have it because you deserve every scathe I can come up with!" But then he had to go and give this volume a cool ending and introduce a fascinating character in Asmodean. I was almost tempted to continue the series! The thing is, I enjoy the world-building (or perhaps I should say, world-borrowing! Perrin's entire adventure in this story is a ripoff of the Scouring of the Shire) and the complex web of politics and nations and powers. Jordan is very derivative, but he does do interesting things with the threads he pulls from other authors.

But in the end, I don't think I can stomach more. So the Wheel stops here. It hasn't been nearly as negative an experience as this review might indicate, and I'm glad to have read at least some of the series so I know what the fuss is about. But if I never read about another woman wearing a low-cut, see-through gown, it will be too soon. show less

In my opinion, this is the book that will make or break whether you finish Wheel of Time. Books 1-3 don't feel like part of a 14 book series. They are self-contained, and the story seems to be heading towards a conclusion in the next couple of books.

The Shadow Rising changes that completely. Here is where Robert Jordan breaks the story wide open and the scale becomes truly immense. Rand's visit to Rhuidean and subsequent vision of the History of the World is one of the best scenes in the book and the closer study of Aiel culture is a wonderful addition. Combine that with Perrin and Faile's rescue of the Two Rivers and this is easily the best Wheel of Time book of first four books.

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