I love a good horse book, and when I received this book through the LibraryThing Early Reviewers program I was thrilled. Renegade Champion is the "dramatized" biography of a girl and her horse: Jane Pohl Rust, and Fitzrada, champion showjumper/hunter of the 1940s. The author, Jane's son, says in his author's note that he had to choose from different versions of certain scenes, and he made it read more like a novel by giving us Jane's thoughts and by inventing likely dialogue. But all of the major events really took place, so it is mostly biography, and it is a fascinating read.

Much like The Eighty-dollar Champion by Elizabeth Letts, the book takes you to the horse show world of the 1940s (a decade earlier than Letts' book), and in particular, talks about how very few women rode jumpers at the time. It was a military-based sport and considered very dangerous, thus was dominated by men. Also, they actually forbade women from entering some of the shows, and women weren't allowed to be professional riders! Rust explains how Jane made inroads to that. Also, much like Snowman in Letts' book, Fitz was not from a wealthy stable, and had that disadvantage. He started out as an Army Cavalry horse, but after accidents and rough handling, became so jaded and intractable that the Army was ready to put him down. But luckily a General at Pearl Harbor needed a new horse, and the Army guys took a chance and shipped him Fitz, wanting to get Fitz out of their hair but not willing to kill him. Jane met Fitz in Hawaii, when she was 17 and he was already an older horse at 11, when she was asked to try to calm him down enough for the General (or anyone!) to ride him. Thus began quite an interesting and fruitful relationship, although it took her five years of patience and hard work to get him to show quality. I loved the details of Army horse life, and then the trials of Jane and Fitz as they worked together, and the details of showing back then.

Jane was one tough woman! Not only did she do everything for her horse, from feeding and grooming and boarding him and driving him to shows, to of course training and riding him, but they also foxhunted for years, and sometimes to get home from a show or a hunt, it was easier for her to just RIDE HIM HOME MILES IN THE DARK! Once they even got stuck in quicksand! And when Jane became pregnant, as an unmarried Catholic woman in 1947, it was right in the middle of show season so she kept showing and jumping her horse (even after a fall where a horse rolled onto her!) so as to keep her condition secret... and also to not miss winning points toward his championship. (They had to win enough to qualify for bigger shows.) (The baby was fine, he's who wrote this book ☺) Amazing. Then she had trouble getting non-horse jobs as a scandalously single divorced mother, in the prim and proper late 1950s. Throughout the book you get to see her fierce personality and work ethic, and her son's love for her and her accomplishments. I think the book's title and subtitle are misleading; it should have been called Renegade Champions, plural, and included Jane's name, as it is really all about Jane. Her successes led to the inclusion of women riders in shows and the Olympics, although sadly she never got to compete in the Olympics herself.

The only thing that keeps me from giving it five stars is that it really needed some editing help: several times there are scenes repeated almost verbatim, as the storyline goes forward and backward in time from Jane's prime years with Fitz to her later years as an old woman, and it became repetitive. I'd think, "oh I know this story, he already told us this in that flashback," so why repeat it? If he wanted to put it in its proper chronological spot in the story, then he should have only hinted at the contents in the first mention of it. Or vice versa. I have no quibble with the jumping of timelines, it was well-written in that regard. But there was too much repetition; a good editor could have said "how about rewriting this paragraph so that it's not so identical" or better yet, skip the repeat stories, just allude to them on the second time through. But this is his first book (and only book, as he died the same year it was published), so I don't like to be nitpicky. Compared to the beautifully professional work of the writer Elizabeth Letts, who included extensive source notes and bibliography in her Snowman book, Rust's book is certainly more amateur, as it was written using mostly memories, newspaper clippings, and interviews with people who knew his mother. (And that was another thing I think an editor should have caught: the way every quote from a fellow rider or family friend would be introduced by stating "X was interviewed in 2010". This is unduly repetitive; footnotes would have been the better way to acknowledge the source without having to say this every time. But a minor thing!) But overall I loved the book and didn't want to put it down. It astounded me to learn of some of the grueling things showjumpers had to do in those early shows, especially some practices that would be totally against today's modern safety practices. But I sure would have liked to see horses do the "Skyscraper" class, where they were asked to jump the same bar set successively higher and higher; it looks crazy impossible for a horse to jump straight up over a six feet ten inch high obstacle! I have looked this up and I guess now it's called High Jump or Puissance competitions, but I don't know how often it's done any more. But little Fitzrada (15.2 hands) jumped 6'10"! That's a jump that stands one foot 8 inches taller than himself! Also in his repertoire: "the Pen," which sounds crazy to me--a series of quick jumps, sometimes U-turns even, to jump a prescribed course in and out of a square box or pen formed by rails. It took him four years to master it. Amazing horse, and amazing gutsy groundbreaking rider. Caveat for sensitive animal lovers who may read this book: there are two very sad scenes. ( )

As the author mentions in "Note to the Reader," this is a dramatized biography. The author is probably too close to the subject (it is his mother, after all); but the detail and emotions build an almost tangible narrative. There are two parts about this book that are extremely painful: Fitz's death and Sindy's euthanasia. Both events are perpetuated by Jane. Both avoidable and sad. This is well worth the read, but you may find parts hard to continue.

**This was an advanced reader copy won through the LibraryThing Early Reviewers program.** ( )

Renegade Champion is a wonderful book for horse lovers, for lovers of horse sport, for riders, for just about anyone who is interested in the history of a sport, or even for those who are interested in the history of women in sports. It is much less about the horse than it is about his rider, Jane, but it is still a very good story, which is also very well told.

As a fan of horse sports and a lover of horse stories, I was very happy to have been given a chance to review this book and I dove right in. Though the book is written by the author's son, it is (for the most part) written in the third person. The storytelling is catchy and calmly draws you in to the lives of Jane and her family. There is some jumping around in history, as the book begins in the recent-past, then moves to the beginning of Jane's life with Fitzrada, and concludes with what has happened after Jane's passing. (I give nothing away in that statement, it is clear from the beginning that she has passed away.) But the jumble of history isn't difficult to handle, in fact it flows very well.

I had one serious issue with this book, which came after what I thought should have been the ending. Please keep in mind that I had an early review copy of this book and it might change before it is sent out for the general public, but I was very upset by the change in tone at the end of the book. I am not going to surprise anyone to say that the horse is no longer alive, so I will say that after the death of Fitz, the story takes an unusual twist and turn. It continues with the story of Jane Rust until her passing and then becomes a rambling of sorts on the author's experiences in dealing with feelings and the estate and whatnot after his mother's passing. The storytelling in my early review copy starts jumping at that point from third person to first person and back again, making for very frustrating reading, and giving the feel of being more of a pile of notes from the author's journal, than anything that should be called a book. Part of this overly emotional, odd rambling is a certain situation right after Jane's death that I thought was completely unnecessary to include and I found it somewhat offensive on top of that. It is one thing to take actions based on someone's last request, it is another thing to admit to such things in front of the public and put them on display in front of those who could be a sensitive audience. The incident put me off of the rest of the book. Though I finished it, I couldn't feel comfortable with it any more.

I am confident that readers will enjoy most of the book, but if your copy of this book continues on beyond Fitzrada's passing, you might want to stop at a good point soon after. The book seems to have one ending after another and most of the book is just too good to taint with a jumbled, overly emotional ending. I don't mind being moved as a reader, but I do mind being forcibly thrust into an author's state of emotional flux. I felt as if I was invading his privacy. ( )

I really enjoyed this book. Strong woman, strong horse, great pair. A time in America that will never come again. ( )

The tale of Jane Pohl and Fitzrada is one of true sportsmanship, of a woman proving herself as strong and capable in a man's sport, and of a horse so intelligent and obstinate that it was almost his undoing. Fitz had nearly been ruined through rough handling and developed an intense fear of men and most people; it took Jane over four years of constant effort to win Fitz's trust. The book excels at describing the culture of jumping and foxhunting through the 1940s into the 1950s. Horse shows are evoked through vivid, visceral detail. Jane is a complex character herself. The author is her son, and he does a fairly good job of keeping his distant to tell the story with both the positive and the negative. Family dynamics and pressures of the time period (i.e. proper things a woman should do) constrained Jane and her career.

At times, though, Rust is too close to the story and the details are excessive. This especially bogged down the end of the book--it lost focus after Fitzrada's passing. In particular, I really didn't want to know about Jane's deathbed request regarding her beloved dog and it made the book end on a very sour note for me.

That said, it's worth reading if you love horses and history. It's fascinating to find out how the military's horsemen participated in the Olympics up through World War II, after which the equine divisions were dissolved. At some point I'd love to use the horse show details as a backdrop for a story of my own. ( )