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IF YOU'RE TIRED OF REJECTION, THIS IS THE BOOK FOR YOU. Whether you are a novice writer or a veteran who has already had your work published, rejection is often a frustrating reality. Literary agents and editors receive and reject hundreds of manuscripts each month. While it's the job of these publishing professionals to be discriminating, it's the job of the writer to produce a manuscript that immediately stands out among the vast competition. And those outstanding qualities, says New York literary agent Noah Lukeman, have to be apparent from the first five pages. The First Five Pages reveals the necessary elements of good writing, whether it be fiction, nonfiction, journalism, or poetry, and points out errors to be avoided, such as * A weak opening hook * Overuse of adjectives and adverbs * Flat or forced metaphors or similes * Melodramatic, commonplace or confusing dialogue * Undeveloped characterizations and lifeless settings * Uneven pacing and lack of progression With exercises at the end of each chapter, this invaluable reference will allow novelists, journalists, poets and screenwriters alike to improve their technique as they learn to eliminate even the most subtle mistakes that are cause for rejection. The First Five Pages will help writers at every stage take their art to a higher -- and more successful -- level.… (more)
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The First Five Pages: A Writer's Guide to Staying Out of the Rejection Pile by Noah Lukeman (2000)

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I did this as an audio book. I don't recommend that. The premise is that most novels are rejected by editors within the first 5 pages, so what are the dealbreakers? It is informative to put onself in ths position and imagine being the editor. There are many good tips, with each section fincluding several examples of bad work. These are egregiously bad and teious to listen to. I'd have skipped over if I had a physical book. Each section ends with exercises, some of which are useful. There is nothing especially new in this book that hasn't been said by others, but it is a refreshing perspective to get into the editor's mentality. ( )
  brianstagner | Apr 16, 2023 |
Very basic. My 10 yo daughter is finding it much more useful than I did. ( )
  bjsikes | Jan 30, 2023 |
Lots of good writing info with helpful examples. ( )
  DebCushman | Aug 25, 2022 |
One of the best books I've read if you're sending off to agents and publishers and if you're self editing.

As you might guess from the title, Lukeman explains exactly what agents look for in order to reject your mss by reading as few pages as possible. It starts from the mechanics of presentation and then works through the other hurdles in rejection potential order from micro things like too many adjectives all the way up to pacing, character arcs and loads more.

Good exercises and examples throughout to help you avoid these rejection reasons. ( )
  garethmottram | Oct 27, 2015 |
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Most Honorable Sir,
We perused your MS.
with boundless delight.  And
we hurry to swear by our ancestors
we have never read any other
that equals its mastery.
Were we to publish your work,
we could never presume again on
our public and name
to print books of a standard
not up to yours.
For we cannot imagine
that the next ten thousand years
will offer its ectype.
We must therefore refuse
your work that shines as it were in the sky
and beg you a thousand times
to pardon our fault
which impairs but our own offices.
- Publishers

Rejection letter from a Chinese publisher, from Louis Zukofsky's "A"
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For my mother, who, with unhesitating generosity, showed my first (terrible) novel to her agent when I was 16, and has supported my writing with equal fervor ever since.
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IF YOU'RE TIRED OF REJECTION, THIS IS THE BOOK FOR YOU. Whether you are a novice writer or a veteran who has already had your work published, rejection is often a frustrating reality. Literary agents and editors receive and reject hundreds of manuscripts each month. While it's the job of these publishing professionals to be discriminating, it's the job of the writer to produce a manuscript that immediately stands out among the vast competition. And those outstanding qualities, says New York literary agent Noah Lukeman, have to be apparent from the first five pages. The First Five Pages reveals the necessary elements of good writing, whether it be fiction, nonfiction, journalism, or poetry, and points out errors to be avoided, such as * A weak opening hook * Overuse of adjectives and adverbs * Flat or forced metaphors or similes * Melodramatic, commonplace or confusing dialogue * Undeveloped characterizations and lifeless settings * Uneven pacing and lack of progression With exercises at the end of each chapter, this invaluable reference will allow novelists, journalists, poets and screenwriters alike to improve their technique as they learn to eliminate even the most subtle mistakes that are cause for rejection. The First Five Pages will help writers at every stage take their art to a higher -- and more successful -- level.

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