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See the world of Fifty Shades of Grey anew through the eyes of Christian Grey. In Christian's own words, and through his thoughts, reflections, and dreams, E L James offers a fresh perspective on the love story that has enthralled millions of readers around the world. Christian Grey exercises control in all things; his world is neat, disciplined, and utterly empty-until the day that Anastasia Steele falls into his office, in a tangle of shapely limbs and tumbling brown hair. He tries to forget her, but instead is swept up in a storm of emotion he cannot comprehend and cannot resist. Unlike any woman he has known before, shy, unworldly Ana seems to see right through him-past the business prodigy and the penthouse lifestyle to Christian's cold, wounded heart. Will being with Ana dispel the horrors of his childhood that haunt Christian every night? Or will his dark sexual desires, his compulsion to control, and the self-loathing that fills his soul drive this girl away and destroy the fragile hope she offers him?… (more)
amybroad25: This is about Christian and the way he's mind works
Fifty shades of grey is from Anas perspective
It's nice to hear it and see it the way Christian sees it all
I had such high hopes for this book II really did. I looved reading the bits and pieces of Christian as a child and everything else sort of fell short for me. ( )
This book is dedicated to those reader who asked . . . and asked . . . and asked . . . and asked for this.
Thank you for all that you've done for me. You rock my works every day.
First words
Monday, May 9, 2011
I have three cars.
Quotations
(page 17)
Saturday, May 14, 2011
ANASTASIA ROSE STEELE
DOB: Sept. 10, 1989, Montesano, WA Address: 1114 SW Green Street, Apartment 7, Haven Heights, Vancouver, WA 98888 Mobile No: 360-959-4352 Social Security No: 987-65-4320 Bank:Wells Fargo Bank, Vancouver, WA: Acct. No.: 309361: $683.16 balance Occupation: Undergrauate Student WSU Vancouver College of Arts and Sciences English Major GPA: 4.0 Prior Education: Montesano Jr. Sr. High School SAT Score: 2150 Emplyment: Clayton's Hardware Store, NW Vancouver Drive, Portland, OR (part-time) Father: Franklin A. Lambert, DOB: Sept. 1, 1969, Deceased Sept. 11, 1989 Mother: Carla May Wilks Adams, DOB: July 18, 1970 m. Frank Lambert March 1, 1989,widowed Sept. 11, 1989 m. Raymond Steele June 6, 1990, divorced July 12, 2006 m. Stephen M. Morton Aug. 16, 2006, divorced Jan. 31, 2007 m. Bob Adams April 6, 2009 Political Affiliations: None Found Religious Affiliations: None Found Sexual Orientation: Not Known Relationships: None Indicated at Present
(page 61)
From: Christian Grey RE: Miss Anastasia Steele Date: May 20 2011 23:46 To:J B Taylor
Good morning, Can you please find the following items for Miss Steele and have them delivered to my usual room before 10:00. Jeans: Blue Denim Size 4 Blouse: Blue. Pretty. Size 4 Converse: Black Size 7 Socks: Size 7 Lingerie: Underware-Size Small, Bra-Estimate 34C.
Thank you
Christian Grey CEO, Grey Enterprises Holdings, Inc.
(page 62)
Ana is with me. If you're still with Kate, tell her.
I'm driving back today in your car. Hope that doesn't screw up your plans.
(page 136)
No. I'm coming back to Portland now. Let Taylor know when you arrive.
(page 146)
From: Christian Grey Subject: Your New Computer Date: May 22, 2011 23:15 To: Anastasia Steele
Dear Miss Steele, I trust you slept well. I hope that you put this laptop to good use, as discussed.
I look forward to dinner Wednesday.
Happy to answer any questions before then, via e-mail, should you so desire.
Christian Grey CEO, Grey Enterprises Holdings, Inc.
(page 148)
From: Christian Grey Subject: The Weekend Date: May 23 2011 08:15 To: Elena Lincoln
Good morning, Elena. Sorry not to get back to you. I've been busy all weekend, and I'll be in Portland all this week. I don't know about next weekend, either, but if I'm free, I'll let you know. Latest results for the beauty business look promising. good going, Ma'am . . .
Best C
Christian Grey CEO, Grey Enterprises Holdings, Inc.
(page 148)
From: Anastsia Steele Subject: Your New Computer (on loan) Date: May 23 2011 08:20 To: Christian Grey
I slept very well, thank you-for some strange reason-Sir. I understood that this computer was on loan, ergo not mine.
Ana
(page 149)
From: Christian Grey Subject: Your New Computer (on loan) Date: May 23 2011 08:22 To: Anastasia Steele
The computer is on loan. Indefinitely, Miss Steele. I note from you tone that you have read the documentation I gave you.
Do you have any questions so far?
Christian Grey CEO, Grey Enterprises Holdings, Inc.
(page 150)
From: Anastasia Steele Subject: Inquiring Minds Date: May 23 2011 08:25 To: Christian Grey
I have many question, but not suitable for e-mail, and some of us have to work for a living.
I do not want or need a computer indefinitely.
Intil later, good day. Sir.
Ana
(page 151)
From: Christian Grey Subject: Your New Computer (again on loan) Date: May 23 2011 08:26 To: Anastasia Steele
Laters, baby. P.S.: I work for a living, too.
Christian Grey CEO, Grey Enterprises Holdings, Inc.
(page 151)
From: Elena Lincoln Subject: The Weekend Date: May 23 2011 8:33 To: Christian Grey
Christian, you work too hard. What's in Portland? Work? Ex.
ELENA LINCOLN ESCLAVA For The Beauty That Is You
(page 153)
From: Christian Grey Subject: Working for a Living Date: May 23, 2011 17:24 To: Anastasia Steele
Dear Miss Steele, I do hope you had a good day at work.
Christian Grey CEO, Grey Enterprises Holdings, Inc.
(page 154)
From: Anastasia Steele Subject: Working for a Living Date: May 23 2011 17:48 To: Christian Grey
Sir . . . I had a very good day at work. Thank you.
Ana
(page 154)
From: Christian Grey Subject: Do the Work! Date: May 23 2011 17:50 To: Anastasia Steele
Miss Steele, Delighted you had a good day. While you are e-mailing, you are not researching.
Christian Grey CEO, Grey Enterprises Holdings, Inc.
(page 155)
From: Anastasia Steele Subject: Nuisance Date: May 23 2011 17:53 To: Christian Grey
Mr. Grey, stop e-mailing me, and I can start my assignment. I'd like anoter A.
Ana
(page 155)
From: Christian Grey Subject: Impatient Date: May 23 2011 17:55 To: Anastasia Steele
Miss Steele, Stop e-mailing me-and do your assignment.
I'd like to award another A.
The first one was so well deserved. ;)
Christian Grey CEO, Grey Enterprises Holdings, Inc.
(page 156)
From: Anastasia Steele Subject: Internet Research Date: May 20 2011 17:59 To: Christian Grey
Mr. Grey, What would you suggest I put into a search engine?
Ana
(page 156)
From: Christian Grey Subject: Internet Research Date: May 23 2011 18:02 To: Anastasia Steele
Miss Steele, Always start with Wikipedia.
No more e-mails unless you have questions.
Understood?
Christian Grey CEO, Grey Enterprises Holdings, Inc.
(page 157)
From: Anastasia Steele Subject: Bossy! Date: May 23 2011 18:04 To: Christian Grey
Yes . . . Sir. YOu are so bossy.
Ana
(page 157)
From: Christian Grey Subject: In Control Date: May 23 2011 18:06 To: Anastasia Steele
Anastasia, you have no idea. Well, maybe an inkling now.
Do the work.
Christian Grey CEO, Grey Enterprises Holdings, Inc.
(page 173-174)
From: Christian Grey Subject: This Evening Date: May 23 2011 23:16 To: Anastasia Steele
Miss Steele, I look forward to receiving your notes on the contract. Until then sleep well, baby.
Christian Grey CEO, Grey Enterprises Holdings, Inc.
(page 175-188)
From: Anastasia Steele Subject: Issues Date: May 23 2011 00:02 To: Christian Grey
Dear Mr. Grey Here is my list of issues. I look forward to discussing them more fully at dinner on Wednesday.
The numbers refer to clauses: CONTRACT Made this day _____ of 2011 ("The Commencement Date") BETWEEN MR.CHRISTIAN GREY of 301 Escala, Seattle, WA 98889 ("The Dominant") MISS ANASTASIA STEELE of 1114 SW Green Street, Apartment 7, Haven Heights, Vancouver, WA 98888 ("The Submissive") THE PARTIES AGREE AS FOLLOWS 1 The following are the terms of a binding contract between the Dominant and the Submissive. FUNDAMENTAL TERMS 2 The fundamental purpose of this contract is to allow the Submissive to explore her sensuality and her limits safely, with due respect and regard for her needs, her limits, and her well-being. 3 The Dominant and the Submissive agree and acknowledge that all that occurs under the terms of this contract will be consensual, confidential, and subject to the agreed limits and safety procedures may be agreed in writing. 4 The Dominant and the Submissive each warrant that they suffer from no sexual, serious, infectious, or life-threatening illnesses, including but not limited to HIV, herpes, and hepatitis. If during the Term (as defined below) or any extended term of this contract either party should be diagnosed with or become aware of any such illness, he or she undertakes to inform the other immediately and in any event prior to any form of physical contact between the parties. 5 Adherence to the above warranties, agreements, and undertakings (and any additional limits and safety procedures agreed under clause 3 alive) are fundamental to this contract. Any breach shall render it void with immediate effect and each party agrees to be fully responsible to the other for the consequences of any breach. 6 Everything in this contract must be read and interpreted in the light of the fundamental purpose and the fundamental terms set out in clauses 2-5 above. ROLES 7 The Dominant shall take responsibility for the well-being and the proper training, guidance, and discipline one the Submissive. He shall decide the nature of such training, guidance, and discipline and the time and place of its administration, subject to agreed terms, limitations, and safety procedures set out in this contract or agreed additionally under clause 3 above. 8 If at any time the Dominant should fail to keep to the agreed terms, limitations, and safety procedures set out in the contract or agreed additionally under clause 3 above, the Submissive is entitled to terminate this contract forthwith and to leave the service of the Dominant without notice. 9 Subject to that proviso and the clauses 2-5 above, the Submissive is to serve and obey the Dominant in all things. Subject to the agreed terms, limitations, and safety procedures set out in this contract or agreed additionally under clause 3 above, she shall without query or hesitation offer the Dominant such pleasure as he may require and shall accept without query or hesitation his training, guidance, and discipline in whatever form it may take. COMMENCEMENT AND TERM 10 The Dominant and Submissive enter into this contract on the Commencement Date fully aware of its nature and undertake to abide my its conditions without exception. 11 This contract shall be effective for a period of three calendar months from the Commencement date ("the Term"). On the expiry of the term the parties shall discuss whether this contract and the arrangements they have made under this contract are satisfactory and whether the needs of each party have been met. Either part may propose the extension of this contract subject to adjustments to its terms or to the arrangements they have made under it. In the absence of agreement to such extension this contract shall terminate and both parties shall be free to resume their lives separately. AVAILABILITY 12 The Submissive will make herself available to the Dominant from Friday evenings through to Sunday afternoons each week during the Term at times to be specified by the Dominant ("the Allotted Times"). Further allocated time can be mutually agreed to on ad hoc basis. 13 The Dominant reserves the right to dismiss the Submissive from his service at any time and for any reason. The Submissive may request her release at any time, such request to be granted at the secretion of the Dominant subject only to the Submissive's rights under clauses 2-5 and 8 above. LOCATION 14 The Submissive will make herself available during the Alloted Times and agreed additional times at locations to be determined by the Dominant. The Dominant will ensure that all travel costs incurred by the Submissive for that purpose are met by the Dominant. SERVICE PROVISIONS 15 The following sercive provisions have been discussed and agreed and will be adhered to my both parties during the Term. Both parties accept that certain matters may arise that are not covered by the terms of this contract or the service provisions, or that certain matters may be renegotiated. In such circumstances, further clauses may be proposed by way of amendment. Any further clauses or amendments must be agreed, documented, and signed by both parties and shall be subject to the fundamental terms set out under clauses 2-5 above. DOMINANT 15.1 The Dominant shall make the Submissive's health and safety a priority at all times. The Dominant shall not at any time require, request, allow, or demand the Submissive participate at the hands of the Dominant in the activities detailed in Appendix 2 or in any act that either party deems to be unsafe. The Dominant will not undertake or permit to be undertaken any action which could cause serious injury or any risk to the Submissive's life. The remaining subclauses of this clause 15 are to be read subject to this proviso and to the fundamental matters agreed in clauses 2-5 above. 15.2 The Dominant accepts the Submissive as his, to own, control, dominate, and discipline during the Term. The Dominant may use the Submissive's body at any time during the Allotted Times or any agreed additional times in any manner he deems fit, sexually or otherwise. 15.3 The Dominant shall provide the Submissive with all necessary training and guidance in how to properly serve the Dominant. 15.4 The Dominant shall maintain a stable and safe environment in which the Submissive may perform her duties in service of the Dominant. 15.5 The Dominant may discipline the Submissive as necessary to ensure the Submissive fully appreciates her role of subservience to the Dominant and to discourage unacceptable conduct. The Dominant my flog, spank, whip or corporally punish the Submissive as he sees fit, for purposes of discipline, for his own personal enjoyment, or for any other reason, which he is not obliged to provide. 15.6 In training and in the administration of discipline the Dominant shall ensure that no permanent marks are made upon the Submissive's body nor any injuries incurred that may require medical attention. 15.7 In training and in the administration of discipline the Dominant shall ensure that the discipline and the instruments used for the purposes of discipline are safe, shall not be used in such a way as to cause serious harm, and shall not in any way exceed the limits defined and detailed in this contact. 15.8 In case of illness or injury the Dominant shall care for the Submissive, seeing to her health and safety, encouraging and, when necessary, ordering medical attention when it is judged necessary by the Dominant. 15.9 The Dominant shall maintain his own good health and seek medical attention when necessary in order to maintain a risk-free environment. 15.10 The Dominant shall not loan his submissive to another Dominant. 5.11 The Dominant may restrain, handcuff, or bind the Submissive at any time during the Allotted Times or any agreed additional times for any reason and for extended periods of time, giving due regard to the health and safety of the Submissive. 15.12 The Dominant will ensure that all equipment used for the purposes of training and discipline shall be maintained in a clean, hygienic, and safe state at all times. SUBMISSIVE 15.13 The Submissive accepts the Dominant as her master, with the understanding that she is now the property of the Dominant, to be dealt with as the Dominant pleases during the Term generally but specifically during the Allotted Times and any additional agreed allotted times. 15.14 The Submissive shall obey the rules ("the Rules") set out in Appendix 1 ti this agreement. 15.15 The Submissive shall serve the Dominant in any way the Dominant sees fit and shall endeavor to please the Dominant at all times to the best of her ability. 15.16 The Submissive shall take all measures necessary to maintain her good health and shall request or seek medical attention whenever it is needed, keeping the Dominant informed at all times of any health issues that may arise. 15.17 The Submissive will ensure that she procures oral contraception and ensure that she takes it as and when prescribed to prevent pregnancy. 15.18 The Submissive shall accept without question any and all disciplinary actions deemed necessary by the Dominant and remember her status and role in regard to the Dominant at all times. 15.19 The Submissive shall not not touch or pleasure herself sexually without permission from the Dominant. 15.20 The Submissive shall submit to any sexual activity demanded by the Dominant and shall do so without hesitation or argument. 15.21 The Submissive shall accept whippings, floggings, spankings, canings, paddlings, or any other discipline the Dominant should decide to administer, without hesitation, inquiry, or complaint. 15.22 The Submissive shall not look directly into the eyes of the Dominant except when specifically instructed to do so. The Submissive shall keep her eyes cast down and maintain a quiet and respectful bearing in the presence of the Dominant. 12.23 The Submissive shall always conduct herself in a respectful manner to the Dominant and shall address him only as Sir, Mr. Grey, or such other title as the Dominant may direct. 15.24 The Submissive will not touch the Dominant without his express permission to do so. ACTIVITIES 16 The Submissive shall not participate in activities or any sexual acts that either party deems to be unsafe or any activities detailed in Appendix 2. 17 The Dominant ahd the Submissive have discussed the activities set out in Appendix 3 and recorded in writing on Appenix 3 their agreement in respect of them. SAFE WORDS 18 The Dominant and the Submissive recognize that the Dominant may make demands of the Submissive that cannot be met without incurring physical, mental, emotional, spiritual, or other harm at the time the demands are made to the Submissive. In such circumstances related to this, the Submissive may make use of a safe works ("the Safe Word[s]"). Two Safe Words will be invoked depending on the severity of the demands. 19 The Safe Word "Yellow" will be used to bring to the attention of the Dominant that the Submissive is close to her limit of endurance. 20 The Safe Word "Red" will be used to bring to the attention of the Dominant that the Submissive cannot tolerate any further demands. When this word is said, the Dominant's action will cease completely with immediate effect. CONCLUSION 21 We the undersigned have read and understood fully the provisions of this contract. We freely accept the terms of this contract and have acknowledged this by our signatures below. __________ The Dominant: Chiristian Grey Date __________ The Submissive: Anastasia Steele Date______________________________
APPENDIX 1 RULES Obedience: The Submissive will obey any instructions given by the Dominant immediately without hesitation or reservation and in an expeditious manner. The Submissive will agree to any sexual activity deemed fit an pleasurable by the Dominant excepting those activities that are outlined in hard limits (Appendix 2). She will do so eagerly and without hesitation. Sleep: The Submissive will ensure she achieves a minimum of eight hours' sleep at night when she is not with the Dominant. Food: The Submissive will eat regularly to maintain her health and wellbeing from a prescribed list of foods (Appendix 4). The Submissive will not snack between meals, with the exception of fruit. Clothes: During the Term the Submissive will wear clothing only approved by the Dominant. The Dominant will provide a clothing budget for the Submissive, which the Submissive shall utilize. The Dominant shall accompany the Submissive to purchase clothing on an ad hoc basis. If the Dominant so requires, the Submissive shall, during the Term, wear adornments the Dominant shall require, in the presence of the Dominant and at any other time the Dominant deems fit. Exercise: The Dominant shall provide the Submissive with a personal trainer four times a week in hour-long sessions at times to be mutually agreed between the personal trainer and the Submissive. The personal trainer will report to the Dominant on the Submissive's progress. Personal Hygiene/Beauty: the Submissive will keep herself clean and shaved and/or waxed at all times. The Submissive will visit a beauty salon of the Dominant's choosing at times to be decided by the Dominant and undergo whatever treatments the Dominant sees fit. All costs will be met by the Dominant. Personal Safety: The Submissive will not drink to excess, smoke, take recreational drugs, or put herself in any unnecessary danger. Personal Qualities: The Submissive will not enter into any sexual relations with anyone other than the Dominant. The Submissive will conduct herself in a respectful and modest manner at all times. She must recognize that her behavior is a direct reflection on the Dominant. She shall be held accountable for any misdeeds, wrongdoings, and misbehavior committed when not in the presence if the Dominant.
Failure to comply with any of the above will result in immediate punishment, the nature of which shall be determined by the Dominant. ______________________________ APPENDIX 2 Hard Limits No acts involving fire play, No acts involving urinantion or defecation and the products thereof. No acts involving needles, knives, cutting, piercing, or blood. No acts involving gynecological medical instruments. No acts involving children or animals. No acts that will leave any permanent marks on the skin. No acts involving breathe control. No activity that involves the direct contact of electric current (whether alternating or direct), fire, or flames to the body. ______________________________ APPENDIX 3 Soft Limits To be discussed and agreed between both parties: Does the Submissive consent to:
~Bondage with rope ~Bondage with tape ~Bondage with leather cuffs ~Bondage with other ~Bondage with handcuffs/shackles/manacles
Does the Submissive consent to be restrained with:
~Hands bound in front Wrists bound to ankles ~Ankles bound ~Binding to fixed items, furniture, etc. ~Elbows bound ~Hands bound behind back ~Binding with spreader bar ~knees bound ~Suspension
Does the Submissive consent to be blindfolded?
Does the Submissive consent to be gagged?
How much pain is the Submissive willing to experience?
Where 1 is like intensely and 5 is dislikes intensely: 1-2-3-4-5
Does the Submissive consent to accept the following forms of pain/punishment/disciplin:
2: Not sure why this is solely for MY benefit-i.e., to explore MY sensuality and limits. I'm sure I wouldn't need a ten-page contract to do that! Sorely this if for YOUR benefit.
4:As you are aware, you are my only sexual partner. I don't take drugs, and I've not had any blood transfusions. I'm probably safe. What about you?
8: I can terminate at any time if I don't think you're sticking to the agreed limits. Okay - I like this.
9: Obey you in all things? Accept without hesitation your discipline? We need to talk about this.
11:One-month trial period. Not three.
12: I cannot commit every weekend. I do have a life, or will have. Perhaps three out of four?
15.2: Using my body as you see fit sexually or otherwise - please define "or otherwise."
15.5: This whole discipline clause. I'm not sure I want to be whipped, flogged, or corporally punished. I am sure this would be in breach of clause 2-5. And also "for any other reason." That's just mean - and you told me you weren't a sadist.
15.10: Like loaning me out to someone else would ever be an option. But I'm glad it's here in black and white.
15.14: The Rules. More on those later.
15.19: Touching myself without your permission. What's the problem with this? You know I don't do it anyway.
15.21: Discipline - please see clause 15.5 above.
15.22: I can't look into your eyes? Why?
15.24: Why can't I touch you?
Rules:
Sleep - I'll agree to six hours.
Food - I am not eating food from a prescribed list. The food list goes or I do - deal breaker.
Clothes - as long as I only have to wear your clothes when I'm with you . . . okay.Exercise - We agreed on three hours, this still says four.
Soft Limits
Can we go through all of these? No fisting of any kind. What is suspension? Genital clamps - you have got to be kidding me.
Cam you please let me know the arrangements for Wednesday? I am working until five p.m. that day.
Good night.
Ana
(page 188)
From: Christian Grey Subject: Issues Date: May 24 2011 00:07 To: Anastasia Steele
Miss Steele, That's a long lost. Why are you still up?
Christian Grey CEO, Grey Enterprises Holdings, Inc.
(page 189)
From: Anastasia Steele Subject: Burning the Midnight Oil Date: May 24 2011 00:10 To: Christian Grey
Sir, If you recall, I was going through this list when I was distracted and bedded by a passing control freak.
Good night.
Ana
(page 189)
From: Christian Grey Subject: Stop Burning the Midnight Oil Date: May 24 2011 00:12 To: Anastasia Steele
GO TO BED, ANASTASIA.
Christian Grey CEO & Control Freak, Grey Enterprises Holdings, Inc.
(page 190-191)
From: Christian Grey Subject: Tour Issues Date: May 24 2011 01:27 To: Anastasia Steele
Dear Miss Steele, Following my more thorough examination of your issues, may I bring to your attention the definition of submissive.
submissive [suhb-mis-iv] - adjective
1. inclined or ready to submit; unresistingly or humbly obedient: submissive servants.
2. marked by or indicating submission: a submissive reply.
See the world of Fifty Shades of Grey anew through the eyes of Christian Grey. In Christian's own words, and through his thoughts, reflections, and dreams, E L James offers a fresh perspective on the love story that has enthralled millions of readers around the world. Christian Grey exercises control in all things; his world is neat, disciplined, and utterly empty-until the day that Anastasia Steele falls into his office, in a tangle of shapely limbs and tumbling brown hair. He tries to forget her, but instead is swept up in a storm of emotion he cannot comprehend and cannot resist. Unlike any woman he has known before, shy, unworldly Ana seems to see right through him-past the business prodigy and the penthouse lifestyle to Christian's cold, wounded heart. Will being with Ana dispel the horrors of his childhood that haunt Christian every night? Or will his dark sexual desires, his compulsion to control, and the self-loathing that fills his soul drive this girl away and destroy the fragile hope she offers him?
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In Christian's own words, and through his thoughts, reflections, and dreams, E L James offers a fresh perspective on the love story that has enthralled millions of readers around the world.
Christian Grey exercises control in all things; his world is neat, disciplined, and utterly empty—until the day that Anastasia Steele falls into his office, in a tangle of shapely limbs and tumbling brown hair. He tries to forget her, but instead is swept up in a storm of emotion he cannot comprehend and cannot resist. Unlike any woman he has known before, shy, unworldly Ana seems to see right through him—past the business prodigy and the penthouse lifestyle to Christian’s cold, wounded heart.
Will being with Ana dispel the horrors of his childhood that haunt Christian every night? Or will his dark sexual desires, his compulsion to control, and the self-loathing that fills his soul drive this girl away and destroy the fragile hope she offers him?
Characters: 7.5
Setting: 4
Prose: 4 ( )