Noelle Holten

This originally appeared at The Irresponsible Reader.
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The team were deflated – long nights, no solid leads – morale down – they needed to catch a break.

While they waited for more information, Maggie spent the majority of her day chasing up the curfew company, cross-referencing the prison tattoos – which was proving to be a very tedious job – and chasing up Social Care.

While waiting on hold, she recalled a conversation she’d had with her brother about how funny she found it show more that a large majority of the public believed that everything in a murder investigation was so exciting and moved quickly because of the way that it was portrayed in movies and TV – however a big part of her job focused on calls, computer work, research, and reports. She wished it was the opposite!

WHAT'S DEAD SECRET ABOUT?
The book opens in the final fleeting moments of a young man's life, he's scared, beaten, bloody, and desperate for help. And then he's no longer scared or desperate again. Found in a woody area near an industrial estate, his face has some dots drawn on it, but aside from that, there are no other clues—assuming they are one.

Maggie and the rest of her team have barely begun to get into this investigation when their DI drops a bomb on them—their DCI has gone missing. It'd been a couple of days since anyone had heard from him, so some officers went to check him—they found no one at the home but did find evidence that a violent crime had been committed there. Given their staffing levels, they couldn't have some detectives work the missing persons cases and others focus on the homicide, so each detective on the team would be involved in each. Watching the detectives try to balance these cases—which primarily means not dropping everything to focus on DCI Hastings and his family—is good to see, and a needed reminder that actual detectives frequently have to juggle multiple cases at once—unlike their fictional counterparts.

Meanwhile, the domestic abuse shelter that Lucy Sherwood has been trying to start is on the verge of opening. But days before, a "battered and semi-conscious woman in her doorway" led her to get an early start. The young woman doesn't speak at the beginning and appears to be reading lips when dealing with the paramedics. She won't interact with the police, however. It is impossible not to feel all kinds of sympathy toward this woman—and Lucy definitely feels that way. This storyline is a fantastic way to follow up on Dead Inside, the first book in the series, and show how far Lucy's comes since then and why her center is needed.

REALISM
One thing that seems to jump out at the reader of this series is how authentic the procedural elements feel. Sure, events and characters are heightened, clearly played for greater narrative tension, and the like. But you can't avoid how real this world, characters, and situations seem. Like the general public in that quotation above, novel readers are frequently given just "the exciting" portions of the procedural, but here, we see the drudgery, the combing through reports, and endless research before substantial advances in the investigation are made. While showing the reader that research and paperwork characterizes modern policing, Holten still allows her characters to have small maverick streaks that propel the action forward a little faster than the actual procedure can.

Along the same lines, all I know about the British probation system comes from this series and Helen Fitzgerald's Worst Case Scenario . I think if I did, I'd have a better appreciation for scenes in each of these novels. Lacking that (and the drive to do research), I just have to assume that Holten was paying attention during the almost two decades she worked as a probation officer and is giving us something fairly reality-based.

ONE RANDOM THOUGHT
There are six times in the novel that "youths" is used, like: "youths in the area", "gang of youths", and so on. Maybe it's a cultural thing, but I couldn't help but laugh. It was like Maggie had been replaced by Schimdt. It's not worth mentioning, really. But in a book as grim as this, you take the smiles where you can get them.*

* See also two surprising, but effective, TV references. I don't remember this series doing that.

GIVE HER A BREAK
Several times throughout the novel, Maggie thinks about how tired she is—and how little downtime she's had between major cases. She didn't get a lot of time between these cases and the previous books (although she had even less between Books 2 and 3). Maggie needs to catch her breath if she's going to be any good to anybody. Her personal life is a mess, and I'm worried that her professional life is close it one, too. Her physical and mental reserves have to be beyond spent—and you can't help but wonder as you read this book (and the previous one) if she wouldn't have picked up on something sooner if she'd been coming at things with a fresh mind.

It's not much of a spoiler to say that Maggie isn't going to get a whole lot of downtime before Book 5's case takes over her life. But what comes after that? As far as I can tell*, this is intended to be a five-book series—so hopefully Maggie gets to take that holiday she's been thinking about. Even more hopefully, we get to have at least a few more books with her.

* I'm prepared to be shown that I'm wrong—and hope I am.

SO, WHAT DID I THINK ABOUT DEAD SECRET?
I'm a fan of this series—so obviously, I went into this book expecting to like it. But any reader knows that sometimes those expectations aren't met. Thankfully, it wasn't long at all before I knew Holten had, once again, provided her readers with a great read.

You've got a pretty grizzly beating death to start off with and then you the police's natural inclination to focus all resources on the missing DCI—and them not necessarily wanting to follow all the evidence that points to the DCI not being the kind of man they all thought. Just those two storylines would be enough. But then Holten throws in that third storyline—here's a person in desperate need of help, a survivor of (as far as anyone can tell) of domestic violence—a reminder that policing isn't about arrests, it isn't about only maintain social disorder—it's about people like this woman who showed at Lucy's front door, it's protecting and serving the public. This is the kind of thing that both (fictional and real) civilians and the (fictional and real) police need to be reminded of, and here it elevates the rest of the novel by its presence.

I'd largely figured out who the killer was and how it was happening pretty early on. I wasn't prepared for the motive behind the killing until it was clear. Holten also did a good job of revealing enough for readers who wanted to identify the killer early while at the same time writing things clearly enough that even people who didn't want that revelation would be able to enjoy the novel.

This is Holten at her best—I also see this having better commercial appeal than the previous novels in the series and I hope I'm right. Can you read this without having read the previous three novels? Yes. I think you'd be better off starting with the first book, but the important thing is that you start somewhere with this series. show less

Dead Mercy by Noelle Holten
Maggie Jamieson #5

Dark and compelling, gritty and grim, fast-paced story that had me rooting for the murderer and wishing he had not been thwarted in his mission. I wonder what that says about ME?

I see that I have now read three out of five books in this series: 2, 4 & 5 and that is interesting because having missed one and three I still felt fine reading and not out of the loop at all…well…perhaps there were mentions of people and events from those books I was show more a bit clueless about but the book was definitely a standalone story – I had no trouble picking up with Maggie as she pursued the killer.

What I liked:
* The killer: I know…I know…one should NOT like the killer, but I did. I felt empathy for him, understood his pain and his need to kill.
*I wished that the killer had succeeded completely even though I knew that it wasn’t really “right” to feel this way.
* Maggie: focused, professional, skillful, great instincts, team player for the most part, has a temper, in between relationships, intriguing, want to know more about her.
* The team: It was nice to see their interaction and be reminded of who they were and how they worked together
* The police procedural aspects of the story
* The writing: well-plotted and skillfully written
* That even though I read the end first I was surprised about who the killer was
* That the backstory of the killer and others who suffered as he had was not explicit but detailed enough
* The red herrings
* Catching up with Maggie’s family
* Wondering if Maggie might have a bit of a social life/dating in the next book
* All of it really except

What I didn’t like:
* Knowing that the abuse experienced by the killer is all too real.
* Knowing that abusers too often get away with the crime(s) they commit

Did I enjoy this book? Yes
Would I read more in this series/by this author? Yes

5 Stars show less

This originally appeared at The Irresponsible Reader.
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When you’re given the opportunity to confront your mother’s killer, do you take it?

I did.

No words were spoken though.

I just killed him.

Was it worth it?

Absolutely.

Do I have any regrets?

Only that I didn’t make him suffer longer.

WHAT'S 6 RIPLEY AVENUE ABOUT?
6 Ripley Avenue is a Probation Hostel—similar to what we call a halfway house in the U.S.—focusing on probationers convicted of violent crimes (including murder). It's show more been plagued by controversy since before its opening two years ago. The concerns go beyond the typical NIMBY protests because of the violent nature of the residents.

Sloane Armstrong, a freelance investigative journalist, and Helen Burgess, an elderly woman who lives next door to the house, have been at the forefront of the effort to move and/or close Ripley House Approves Premises from the start. Their friendship was forged by this effort but has grown since then.

Now, a resident there—a convicted murderer—has been killed. The investigation into the murder highlights many of the concerns Helen has voiced and Sloane has published—poor staffing levels, inadequate security, malfunctioning CCTV, and more. Helen and Sloane see this as their opportunity to close the facility once and for all and work to uncover as much as they can about the crime and the systemic problems it exposes as possible for their purposes.

On the other hand, Jeanette Macy is the Senior Probation Officer on staff—she learns of the same problems (and more) during the investigation and sees this as the opportunity to improve things both at Ripley House and throughout the system.

The narrative bounces between the perspectives of these women as they investigate the happenings of that fateful night and interact with each other and the police during the inquiry. Will any of them be fast enough in their investigation to ensure the murderer is caught in time to save more lives?

It's almost a locked-room mystery—but if you can't trust the locks on the room...

THE PROLOGUE
I see a lot of hate/antagonism toward Prologues online lately. I'm not sure I get it, but if people want to skip them, I guess that's their prerogative. However, anyone who is anti-prologue probably hasn't read a Noelle Hotlen prologue—they're consistently very good. This is one of her best—it's not Dead Perfect—good, but it's close.

If you read this book, don't gloss over/skim/skip it.*

* I think that should apply to Prologues/Epilogues in general, but whatever. You do you.

ON THE OTHER HAND...
I think the last two chapters could be cut and the book would be stronger. I get (I'm pretty sure) the impulse for them, and they do make sure that some of what was suggested/implied in the text was nailed down. I also wonder if she answers a question or two that would be better left lingering. But I think most readers would either assume almost everything contained there—or wouldn't care. It's like watching deleted scenes from a movie and thinking "yeah, that was good to see, but I see why it didn't make the final cut."

Okay, the last six paragraphs of the penultimate chapter—they're a distinct section—would've made a good, punchy last chapter on their own. But the rest felt like overkill.

Your results may vary, and it's not like these chapters hurt the book significantly. But for me, they took a little of the luster off.

SO, WHAT DID I THINK ABOUT 6 RIPLEY AVENUE?

“Sometimes the places where you are meant to be safe are the ones you should fear the most.”

The violence in this book centers on those places you're meant to be safe—home and family—and what happens when that safety is disrupted. The whodunit of the novel is the focus—but there's a lot said about the ripple effects of (many, but not all, of) the crimes talked about. How the repercussions of a moment of violence or other dangerous choices are long-lasting and alter the lives of those only indirectly affected by them. Crime Fiction in general is getting better at showing this, and few do it as well as Holten does.

Holten's signature style of terse chapters and paragraphs is well-evident here,* jumping from perspective to perspective to make sure the plot is always steadily advancing. This makes the pacing almost relentless and it's hard to put the book down, no matter what the reason for doing so may be. I'm not saying that I burned any meal or let a pot boil over while reading this, but I'd absolutely understand why someone would. Thankfully, the style also makes it incredibly easy to pick back up and get fully immersed in the story immediately. You could easily read 6 Ripley Avenue in one sitting without intending to.**

* Really, does she draft on cocktail napkins? What would happen if she invested in a couple of reams of 8.5 x 11/A4?
**The fact that it took me as long as it did to read this is a commentary on my schedule this month, not the book.

The only problem with the pace is that we don't get quite enough time to see enough of Helen and Sloane's friendship—it'd be easy to see their relationship as Sloane exploiting the lonely woman for ammunition and Helen as desperate for an emotional connection. That's what I saw it as initially. But as the novel progresses, we see actual affection between the two and it'd have been nice if circumstances had allowed us to see more of it. On the other hand, things do allow the reader to change their initial impression of Jeanette over the course of the novel (at least this one did).

This is one of those novels that is strengthened by the use of multiple POVs—the overlapping motives, agendas, and methods of the women looking into the crime and its repercussions, sometimes in alignment, sometimes at odds, but leading to getting at the truth was really well done. I'm not sure that, outside of the first bit of narrative from the Killer's point-of-view that having their perspective present is that helpful—but I'd say that about at least 98% of those that I've read, so take that comment with a boulder-sized grain of salt.

This standalone solidifies Holten as an auto-buy for me, it's a pleasant departure from Holten's series work, displaying her already visible strengths and giving her a chance to show new ones. 6 Ripley Avenue is a fast, compelling, read that will stay with you for a while—you can't ask for more than that. show less

This originally appeared at The Irresponsible Reader.
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WHAT'S DEAD MERCY ABOUT?
The closing chapter of Dead Secret set this up (as Holten is so good about doing): a business has gone up in fire and a body has been found inside—possibly the body of someone Maggie's worked with in Probation. From the start, this case has its hooks in Maggie.

It's soon decided that the body was the source of the fire—and before the victim had been set ablaze, he'd been restrained and had teeth pulled. The show more killer had wanted to punish him, not just kill him.

Soon another victim is discovered—and the team has to race to find a connection so they can prevent anyone else from suffering this fate.

When the link is finally discovered, it suggests potential new victims as well as several suspects. It also shines a bright light on a striking failure of the criminal justice system.

BETHANY AND KAT
Back when I talked about Book 3, Dead Perfect , I wrote that they were overworking PC Bethany Lambert, "Miscellaneous errands, thankless tasks, things requiring technological expertise, and more fall to her. I lost track of how many things Maggie threw her way to do—on top of her own assignments. I have multiple notes about how they're working this woman to death." They've yet to let up on her—however, it's talked about both as the way she likes to work and as something other people are concerned about. This is efficiently done—the characters around her get to be observant and sympathetic, and they can continue to throw too much work at her so Holten doesn't have to create 2-3 more characters to keep the stories moving at that pace.

Dead Perfect was also where DC Kat Everett was added to the team—she's better integrated into the action over the last couple of books now and I really enjoy her. I'm ready to read a spin-off series focusing on her now, either in her same assignment or transferred somewhere. Her brashness would make for a fun protagonist (not that Maggie isn't brash, but hers is a side-effect of her impetuousness).

A REFRESHING APPROACH
With most police procedurals you get the maverick, lone-wolf detective—maybe with a couple of people they trust. Or (particularly with UK-based procedurals), you get a focus on a detective squad. With the Maggie Jamieson books, we get a good look at her squad, probation services, and other social services.

Not just as a drop-in for a convenient bit of information, either. But characters that matter, there's interconnectedness between the groups and it's good to see the flow of information (formally, informally, unauthorized) informing the investigations. I like seeing that approach, and I like to think it reflects reality far more than any lone-wolf thumbing their nose at regulations.

Although, the pathologist still seeming to hold a grudge over one of her staff being (justifiably) questioned a while back seems to be petty. Which, so it's not all super-professional and mutually helpful.

LET'S HOPE THIS IS FICTION
Not every author spends too much time on the motivation behind the killings, but an author that gives a believable motivation separates their work from the pack. This is another of those areas that Holten excels in.

Yes, this is a work of fiction. Yes, things are heightened. But when you read this, there's going to be a voice in the back of your head saying, "I could see that happening."

Not only that, there's a pretty good chance that you're going to be a little conflicted about the crimes. Odds are, you're not going to be hoping that Maggie and her team fail, or that the killer (killers?) gets away with it. Buuuut...once you understand the motive pushing the killer(s), you may not feel that bad about what happens to the victims.

SO, WHAT DID I THINK ABOUT DEAD MERCY?
Holten's got this down now—the characters and world are well established, as are the relationships in them. Despite the relatively brief chronology between books 1-5, there's been some decent character growth on several points, too. So a new Maggie Jamieson thriller is a chance to spend some time catching up with new acquaintances while getting to go for a pretty intense ride as those acquaintances try to stop a brutal killer.

Okay, maybe that's not the ideal way to catch up and check in on anyone, but it's a pretty exciting read.

Crime Reads had that piece a couple of weeks ago discussing "all crime is cyber crime," which was ringing in my ears as I read this. This very visceral series of murders is evidence to support that thesis—cyber-policing wasn't enough to stop the series, either, but it played its part. Holten's always been good at balancing the computer-work and the boots-on-the-ground policing but might have outdone herself here.

The accent does fall on the physical world, of course, given the nature of the crimes. If your stomach doesn't church a little at the description of the murders (likely both as they're happening and as the pathologist breaks them down), you're made of pretty stern stuff. Thankfully, Holten's narration doesn't ever seem to relish in the disturbing details as too many do.

Basically, this is a top-notch thriller with a lot for the reader to chew on as they're burning through the pages.

It does appear that this is going to be the last Maggie Jamieson book--at least for a while. I'm hoping it's just a break, and we get back to Maggie and the rest of the Major and Organised Crime Department soon. If not? These five books are a great set and I (again) strongly recommend them to you. show less