Moll Molone

This book is comprised of three short stories. They are moderately well-written, though every so often I was a little confused about what was happening. The stories have common characters and you almost get the feeling that they were put into the book in the wrong order. They were much too short to get you to feel much of anything. I wasn't impressed.

I found that the characters in this book lacked depth. Much of the interaction between characters did not add to the plot, and I found to be quite pointless. In fact, much of the story had nothing to do with the plot.

But you're not reading this book for character depth and a twist in the plot. You're reading it for the steamy sex scenes, which this book did not lack. The main theme is dominance and submission, but there plenty of other scenes without it.

Overall, I rate this at a 3/5.

Firstly, this is a good book if you're looking for some not-terribly-involving recreational erotica. The adult scenes were crafted with care and attention. If that's what you are looking for you won't be let down.

But... the characters feel thin and, as another reviewer has noted, the scenes bop back and forth in different times and places in a way that's disconcerting. Perhaps if the character were more developed they could've served as a strong connective tissure between scenes, but in this show more case they do not.

Also, while the point of this story seems to be the erotica, some of the descriptions are overdone. I understand the writer's desire to touch upon all the details they can find, but the result feels more cluttered than comprehensive.

Still, this was a fun, highly-charged, read. If you're looking for a little light erotica, this might be perfect for you. show less

I liked the first short story, even though I didn't think there was enough there. But I guess I should have expected that since it's a quick read. The other two short stories didn't hold my attention. They all were written well though.