John Reeves (9)

I am beyond furious. I paid for this piece of utter crap, and 'crap', is exactly what this is. This is rife with typos and dire grammatical sins. Add to that a weak plot, poor character development (and that is being generous, I should say LACK of character development), shoddy story that is TOLD rather than SHOWN, and frequent POV hopping (combined with the poor grammar and punctuation, leaving me often confused).

Mr. Reeves should have employed an editor because as it stands, after paying show more for this, I surely would NOT purchase any of his other stories. show less

I am beyond furious. I paid for this piece of utter crap, and 'crap', is exactly what this is. This is rife with typos and dire grammatical sins. Add to that a weak plot, poor character development (and that is being generous, I should say LACK of character development), shoddy story that is TOLD rather than SHOWN, and frequent POV hopping (combined with the poor grammar and punctuation, leaving me often confused).

Mr. Reeves should have employed an editor because as it stands, after paying show more for this, I surely would NOT purchase any of his other stories. show less