Mark Shearman

I do not get where the 5 star reviews are coming from. The plot was interesting if the millions of grammatical and spelling errors can be deciphered. A section on a chef, spelled chief; were for where; multiple combined sentences with no punctuation that took close reading to determine the meaning; wrong names used in the middle of a paragraph about one person. It felt like someone talked into a dictaphone and used spell checker, then never went back and read it for proofing before putting show more it up. Sloppy. show less