Unmarriageable

by Soniah Kamal

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"In this retelling of Pride and Prejudice set in modern-day Pakistan, Alys Binat has sworn never to marry--until an encounter with one Mr. Darsee at a wedding makes her reconsider. A scandal and vicious rumor in the Binat family have destroyed their fortune and prospects for desirable marriages, but Alys, the second and most practical of the five Binat daughters, has found happiness teaching English literature to schoolgirls. Knowing that many of her students won't make it to graduation show more before dropping out to marry and start having children, Alys teaches them about Jane Austen and her other literary heroes and hopes to inspire them to dream of more. When an invitation arrives to the biggest wedding their small town has seen in years, Mrs. Binat excitedly sets to work preparing her daughters to fish for eligible--and rich--bachelors, certain that their luck is about to change. On the first night of the festivities, Alys's lovely older sister, Jena, catches the eye of one of the most eligible bachelors. But his friend Valentine Darsee is clearly unimpressed by the Binat family. Alys accidentally overhears his unflattering assessment of her, and quickly dismisses him and his snobbish ways. But as the days of lavish wedding parties unfold, the Binats wait breathlessly to see if Jena will land a proposal--and Alys begins to realize that Darsee's brusque manner may be hiding a very different man from the one she saw at first glance"-- show less

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“It is a truth universally acknowledged that a girl can go from pauper to princess or princess to pauper in the mere seconds it takes for her to accept a proposal.” – the opening sentence of PRIDE AND PREJUDICE by Jane Austen

This delightful Pakistani re-telling of PRIDE AND PREJUDICE starts out with ninth-grade teacher Alys Binat asking her female students to rewrite the opening sentence of PRIDE AND PREJUDICE. Their writings nakedly reveal their societal status and how they have been taught that marriage is their ultimate goal.

Alys’ heart sinks each year as her students, with their brilliant minds, never consider exploring the world and paving their own ways through life instead of seeing “marrying young and well” as their show more only options. Yet each year she uses the reading of Jane Austen’s PRIDE AND PREJUDICE to show how the mother and the protagonist start out with similar views and goals and where and why they begin to separate in those views.

Alys Binat says she will never marry but, like Elizabeth Bennett, life just did not turn out that way when Darsee entered her life. Kamal manipulated the characters’ names to somewhat match the name of the characters in the classic telling. Some of the nicknames were hilarious – Rum, Gin, Hammy, Dracula. I especially loved the characters of Sherry Looclus (Charlotte Lucas) and Farhat Kaleen (Mr. Collins). Sherry is the kind of friend you want by your side through good and bad. The story was utterly delightful and the writing impeccable.

Charming and funny with relatable characters, this unique re-telling of the classic story PRIDE AND PREJUDICE looks at love, sisterhood, class, and marriage with a fresh twist. Kamal provided awesome insight into human relationships, especially within the Binat family of five daughters and their parents. (“O’Connor, Austen, Alcott, Wharton. Characters’ emotions and situations are universally applicable across cultures, whether you’re wearing an empire dress, shalwar kurta, or kimono.”) Some conversations are pretty much universal, heard in families whatever the culture may be. Example: “Both of you, shut up,” Mrs. Binat said. “For God’s sake, is this why I went through your pregnancies and labor pains and nursed you both and gave myself stretch marks and saggy breasts? So that you can grow up and be bad sisters? How many times must I tell you: Be nice to each other, love each other, for at the end of the day, siblings are all you have.” Tell me you haven’t heard some version of that from your own mother.

I enjoyed the historical tidbits about the partitioning of Pakistan and India and the involvement of the English empire. I suspect she used much farce in her descriptions of modern-day Pakistani culture. A truly delightful story. I end with a quote from the book that I think should be highlighted: “We know that friends can be made anywhere and everywhere, regardless of race or religion.”

I received an Advance Review Copy of this book. All opinions are my own.
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This modern retelling of Pride and Prejudice, set in Pakistan at the turn of the millennium, has been on my Amazon wishlist for months and even when the price kept dropping, I wasn't in the mood to download and read the story - until now! P+P isn't my favourite Austen novel - that honour goes to Emma - but I love adaptations and Indian/Pakistan society certainly fits the old-fashioned motifs of Austen's work, so even though the story could have been shorter and the writing more concise, I did enjoy Soniah Kamal's take on what I consider to be Austen's 'primer' novel in the end.

We all know what happens in Pride and Prejudice, and Unmarriageable is a kissing cousin to the original, so I'll just say that I loved the Lizzie character Alys show more Binat, perhaps more than Miss Bennet herself! I'm sort of sad that she had to marry Valentine Darsee at all, after protesting rather too convincingly how she prefers the single life (‘I’ll never be lonely’ – Alys gave a satisfied sigh – ‘because I’ll always have books.’) Her younger sisters call her 'aunty', a less than affectionate name for older, interfering women, because she is always lecturing them about education (she's a teacher in an English language school), independence and not getting married out of duty. Like Mrs Bennet, all Alys' mother wants is to marry off her daughters, to anyone who will take them. Her advice on how to 'grab it' is hilarious:

‘Jena, Alys,’ Mrs Binat said, ‘shame on both of you if this wedding ends and you remain unmarried. Cast your nets wide, reel it in, grab it, grab it. But do not come across as too fast or forward, for a girl with a loose reputation is one step away from being damaged goods and ending up a spinster. Keep your distance without keeping your distance. Let him caress you without coming anywhere near you. Coo sweet somethings into his ears without opening your mouth. Before he even realises there is a trap, he will have proposed. Do you understand?’

The plot follows Austen's novel almost to the letter, apart from a very soap opera twist to the Darcy/Wickham backstory, and Alys is always referring to Austen's work herself, being an English teacher. And she gets bonus points for confessing that ‘Darcy is overrated,’ Alys said. ‘Mr Knightley from Emma won my heart when he defended Miss Bates from Emma’s mockery.’ That said, for all her knowing observations about her favourite author - ‘I’m the omniscient narrator and observer in Austen’s novels' - Alys never recognises that she is living Pride and Prejudice, which is jarring. She even talks about Darcy and Darsee at one point, and I was thinking, 'Come on, now would be the perfect time for an out of body experience', but no.

I also liked how the author built on the double standards in Pakistani culture to make the relationships in Austen's novel work in a modern setting - how women are judged on their 'purity' and pressured to marry and have children - and her commentary on postcolonial literature (I've added Sunlight on a Broken Column by Attia Hosain to my wishlist!) Perhaps a bit wordy in places, but very thought-provoking.
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I loved this book! Being a huge Pride and Prejudice fan, I am justifiably wary of retellings, but this is the best I've ever read. The major reason is that the author has set the novel in a modern culture that right now reflects all the major social issues in Regency England in terms of class, money, and the options open to women. As she uses Austen's story to continue to explore these issues, she introduces us to the wealth of Pakistani culture (oh, the food!!) and postcolonial issues as well for a rich, compelling and entertaining story.

I received a complimentary copy of this book through the Early Reviewers program.
This review was written for LibraryThing Early Reviewers.
Soniah Kamal's retelling of Jane Austen's novel Pride and Prejudice (P and P) was an entertaining read. Pakistan and Austen's world share many of the same constraints on women--especially an emphasis on marrying well over for love and a total unacceptance of premarital sex.

In Unmarriageable, Elizabeth and Jane become Alys and Jena Binat, schoolteachers who have intelligence and beauty yet are spinsters in their early thirties. Jena is shy and sweet; Alys is an ardent feminist who pushes her students to think for themselves.

The younger sisters include the Muslim fundamentalist Mari, the precocious boy-crazy and fashion-obsessed Lady, and the unhappily overweight Qitty. The family is not of the best kind, for Mr. Binat was bilked out of show more his inheritance which brought downsizing in house and budget, and Mrs. Binat's grandmother is rumored to have been a prostitute.

Aly's friend Sherry is forty-one but still has hopes of 'grabbing' a husband and finally experiencing a sexual encounter with a man. Every evening Alys and Sherry meet in the local cemetery, and under the pretense of feeding the birds, enjoy a cigarette and a heart-to-heart talk.

Alys and Jena meet the well-to-do Bungles and Darsee at a wedding celebration. Bungles is obviously taken by Jena. But she won't make 'you-you' eyes at him for fear of being considered a slut. Alys and Darsee, of course, stumble through a series of misunderstandings and dislike.

Just reading about Pakistani wedding traditions is interesting. And the fashions! The food! Oh, how my mouth watered over eggplant in tomatoes, ginger chicken, seekh kabobs, naan, korma, and rose-flavored cake with a cup of chai.

The novel is not a rewriting of Austen's classic but does follow the plot line. We know what is going to happen. But I completely enjoyed this novel for on its own merits.

Kamal channels Austen's irony.

When Jena twists her ankle, Bungles carries her to the car and rushes to the clinic. Kamal writes, "The clinic was an excellent facility, as all facilities that carer to excellent people tend to be, because excellent people demand excellence, unlike those who are grateful for what they receive."

There is a lot of talk about literature. Book titles are dropped throughout many conversations. The characters often speak about Austen in an ironic twist.

Annie Benna dey Bagh comments that she found P and P "helpful in an unexpected way...I decided that, no matter how ill I got, I'd never turn or be turned into Anne de Bourgh."

"Thankfully, we don't live in a novel," Alys comments. And yet Sherry channels Charlotte Lucas in marrying for financial security although she does have the choice to be self-supporting.

Darsee and Alys agree on many points in these conversations about literature and Pakistan's colonial heritage.

"I believe, Alys said to Darsee, "A book and an author can belong to more than one country or culture. English came with the colonizers, but its literature is part of our heritage took as in pre-partition writing."

When Wickaam comes on the scene, English Literature teacher Alys is appalled by his preference that films are better than books. He is drop-dead gorgeous and spins his lies to cover his unsavory history.

Kamal includes loads of nods to Austen. Minor characters are named Thomas Fowle and Harris Bigg-Wither, real people in Jane's life.

Alys often parodies the famous opening line of P and P, such as "it was a truth universally acknowledged that people enter our lives in order to recommend reads."

Thankfully, a Goodreads win brought this book into my life!
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A vibrant read!

I so enjoyed this! Pride and Prejuidice reimagined in Pakistan! Could that be pulled off? Yes, Yes and Yes, most definately! The Binats and the Bennets are unbeatable!
To be brutally honest I quail before the plethora of Austen spin offs. I dislike them (and yet I have no problem with Holmsian off shoots Mmm!). I am so over them!
But "Unmarriageable" is just so different. Rich in cultural interactions, in social mores, in sharp questions beneath the surface of the story, and of characters and their behaviors that throw the original Austen directly into our world of today. So many comparisons of characters can be made, of social customs, of how the author has made the Austen concept work fabulously in this richly flavored show more novel.
These parallels between the Bennets and the Binats are brilliantly displayed, and to my mind given a new lease of life.
"Mr. Barkat “Bark” Binat and Mrs. Khushboo “Pinkie” Binat and their five daughters—Jenazba, Alysba, Marizba, Qittyara, and Lady—[temporarily] move from big-city Lahore to backwater Dilipabad" following a downturn of fortune. That was ten years ago. Alysba Binat (Elizabeth Bennet) is an incisive woman making her way as an English teacher of some talent, as is her sister Jena.
A society wedding is where the family are thrown into association with Fahad Bingla (Mr. Bingham), his sisters and his best friend and Darcy-like personage, Valentine Darsee.
I love the character of Sherry Looclus, Alys Binat's friend, loosely following the character of Elizabeth Bennet's best friend, Charlotte. Her reasons for marrying Farhat Kaleen, the Mr. Collins character are intelligently explained, and I could fully accept her reasoning.
The sharp exposé of Mr. Binat's fathering model in relationship to Mr. Bennet's is illuminating. As are the various, wives, daughters and the dastardly Wickaam. Indeed I could rave for pages with the various character comparisons. They are delightful and insightful. (I have to say I can see the movie playing out before my eyes.)
I particularly enjoyed Alys discovery of shared literary likes and discussions between herself and Darsee. The idea that Darsee puts forward that it's "up for debate whether it’s the nationality of the author or the geography of the book that determines its place in a country’s canon.” And Alys' reply, “a book and an author can belong to more than one country or culture. English came with the colonizers, but its literature is part of our heritage too, as is pre-partition writing.”
Another gem, “That book made me believe I could have a Pakistani identity inclusive of an English-speaking tongue. We’ve been forced to seek ourselves in the literature of others for too long.” Fascinating!
All this coupled with the vibrancy of a world most of us can only guess at, where the sense of color and smell is rampant and the social restrictions and practices as guarded as in Austen's day, perceptively written with a wonderfully understated sense of humor, makes for a brilliant read.
I must say I really think this would make a great book club addition.

A Ballantine Books ARC via NetGalley
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This is a retelling of Pride and Prejudice in Pakistan in the early 2000s. Pakistan is, in many ways, an excellent setting for a modernized Pride and Prejudice. In most modernizations, Mrs. Bennet's (in this version, Mrs. Binat's) obsession with marriage comes across as horribly out of touch, and modernizers generally have a hard time figuring out what to do with Lydia's storyline which, without giving away spoilers[1], is hard to modernize without changing it completely. Thus, the setting is the strength of this adaptation because many of the details that are hard to modernize when set in, for example, the US come across as authentic.

Whenever I read an adaptation of P&P, I consider it successful if it teaches me something new about show more the original. In this case, what I learned is that Mrs. Binat/Bennet is, within her narrow sphere of experience and terrible tactical choices, right: marriage really is the best option for her daughters. Avoiding marriage may seem fine in the short run, but in a society that doesn't allow women real independence, marriage, for good or for ill, was probably the most practical option for most women. As much as we may regret it from a modern standpoint, a P&P that didn't end with Alys/Elizabeth getting married would likely be an unhappy ending for her in the end. And when we see that conclusion in a modern setting, we realize how tragic it is when women have no real choice but marriage. It's easier to overlook that when the setting is in the distant past.

Overall though, I still gave the book three stars because it was a good but straightforward modernization of P&P. For folks who haven't experienced too many adaptations, that's probably fine. It will probably read as fairly fresh. Thus, I blame myself more than the book for my overall, "that was good, but not spectacular" reaction.

One thing that did bug me is that Alys is an English teacher who is very familiar with P&P -- the novel opens with her teaching it -- and she never realizes that her story is Elizabeth Bennet's story, down to the details of her sisters and their fates. Acknowledging this too early would have broken the suspension of disbelief, but there was one point at the very end where she could have noticed the parallels without breaking the story. It's a silly thing to be annoyed over, but it does bug me. ¯_(ツ)_/¯

[1] Can you spoil P&P at this point?
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I adored this! This may be my favorite retelling of Pride and Prejudice yet!! Set in Pakistan in 2000, Alys Binat and her older sister Jena are considered spinsters at the ages of 30 and 31. Since their family's "fall from grace" they've defied cultural norms by teaching at a local English speaking school. Single and teaching! Their mother is positively aghast but they need the extra income. When their family scores an invitation to the city's most anticipated wedding their mother is sure that they can find wealthy men. I could go on but really it's the exact same plot of Pride and Prejudice with different cultural markers, names, food, and modern day variations. I loved it. I would love if they made a Sense and Sensibility set in show more Pakistan. This was so much fun!! show less
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Unmarriageable
Original publication date
2019-01-22
People/Characters
Alysba "Alys" Binat; Jenazba "Jena" Binat; Marizba "Mari" Binat; Qittyara "Qitty" Binat; Lady Binat; Mr. Barkat "Bark" Binat (show all 11); Mrs. Khushboo "Pinkie" Binat; Syeda Shireen "Sherry" Looclus; Fahad "Bungles" Bingla; Valentine Darsee; Jeorgeullah Wickaam
Important places
Dilipabad, Punjab, Pakistan
Dedication
For Mansoor Wasti,
friend, love, partner,
and
Baraaq, Indus, Miraage,
heart, soul, life
First words
It is a truth universally acknowledged that a girl can go from pauper to princess or princess to pauper in the mere seconds it takes for her to accept a proposal.
Quotations
An unmarried woman advocating pursuits outside the house might as well be a witch spreading anarchy and licentiousness.
"But, Miss," Tahira said hesitantly, "what's the purpose of life without children?"
"The same purpose as there would be with children—to be a good human being and contribute to society."
"I don't believe it's for everyone. Marriage should be a part of life and not life."
"It is a truth universally acknowledged that a good girl ought to keep her mouth shut about whether she's been keeping her legs shut."
Mrs. Binat glowed as moneyed folk flitted around.
Valentine Darsee was handsome and he was wealthy, but obviously his upbringing had lacked classes on basic manners and etiquette: He was rude, he was disdainful, and he thought altogether too much of himself. (show all 8)
"I'll never be lonely,"—Alys gave a satisfied sigh— "because I'll always have books."
The clinic was an excellent facility, as all facilities that cater to excellent people tend to be, because excellent people demand excellence, unlike those who are grateful for what they receive.
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(Click to show. Warning: May contain spoilers.)It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife.
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