The Witches of El Paso

Rating: 4.5* of five

The Publisher Says: A lawyer and her elderly great-aunt use their supernatural gifts to find a lost child in this richly imagined and empowering story of motherhood, magic, and legacy in the vein of The Inheritance of Orquídea Divina and La Hacienda.

If you call to the witches, they will come.

1943, El Paso, teenager Nena spends her days caring for the small children of her older sisters, while longing for a life of freedom and adventure. The premonitions and fainting spells she has endured since childhood are getting worse, and Nena worries she’ll end up like the scary old curandera down the street. Nena prays for help, and when the mysterious Sister Benedicta arrives late one night, Nena follows her across the show more borders of space and time. In colonial Mexico, Nena grows into her power, finding love and learning that magic always comes with a price.

In the present day, Nena’s grandniece, Marta, balances a struggling legal aid practice with motherhood and the care of the now ninety-three-year-old Nena. When Marta agrees to help search for a daughter Nena left in the past, the two forge a fierce connection. Marta’s own supernatural powers emerge, awakening her to new possibilities that threaten the life she has constructed.

I RECEIVED A DRC FROM THE PUBLISHER VIA NETGALLEY. THANK YOU.

My Review: So satisfying. Slow and intricate, deep and wise. I'm sure some will find the woven timelines...no definitive breaks or obtrusive tricks mark the shifts in the timeline...to be deal-breakingly imprecise, but to me that made this like an oral performace of a mythic tale. I will say that, as this is also a review of the book meant to instruct others in its merits, I've nicked a half-star off because this pigeonholes the Perfect Reader a bit overly finely.

I don't always love it when men take it upon themselves to write about motherhood. Author Jaramillo manages to do this feat without making the commonest mistakes men fall into: flattening the narrative scope into a litany of caretaking chores or glossing over these same chores. The effect is the same either end of the spectrum. It makes the work of motherhood into insignificant triviality. I hasten to add that many women writers have done the same, Gone Girl being a notable example. In this book, caretaking, mothering, is literally everywhere and yet this didn't obtrude into my consciousness until I was reviewing my notes before writing this review.

That's well-done prosody...I'm in the sounds of the story not in the structure of it. As these are the sounds of la frontera, where I grew up, I fell right in and did not notice it. Very well done indeed, Author Jaramillo.

I don't think any one thing worked more in favor of the book than Nena's manner of explaining the past to her modern, harried granddaughter, not as a place of beautiful memories but of deeds undine and consequences unmet. Business to be finished dominates every life, none moreso than that of the oldest among us. I resonated like a struck bell to this thread of the tapestry woven for me.

As a way to add some occult flavor and Hispanic culture to your #Deathtober reading, this works very well. As a lovely story of the intense bonds of a loving family woman, forced by bitter circumstance to choose actions permanent and irremediable, making amends as best she can, it's gloriously satisfying.

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I hate to say this, but I'm just not loving this book like most others. While the different timelines were interesting in theory, they just kept pulling me in a direction that I don't think the author meant for me to go. The differing timelines are not about the same person either. In one, you have a very young Nena; in the modern timeline, you have an over 90-year-old Nena and her grandniece Marta. Sounds confusing? Maybe, maybe not. I suppose it's all about how you cope with all of this. And let me tell you the last couple of chapters confused me even more!

The author tried very hard to explain how one becomes a witch, how one can time jump, etc., but I think he tried just a little too hard (at least for me). The explanations just kept show more making me more confused and frustrated.

I loved the 1700s timeline and learning about life in a convent, even if nefarious practices were taking place there!

This was a fast read that even if it weren't my glass of wine, it would most likely be yours!

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*well-written, easy to read
*strong character development
*kept my interest from cover to cover
*highly recommend

Told in two time parallel times, The Witches of El Paso by Luis Jaramillo tells the story of two women — Nena and her grandniece, Marta — who possess La Vista, a magical power. In the earlier time frame, a young Nena gets carried back in time, and in the contemporary storyline, Nena attempts to right the past wrongs using Marta. Unfortunately, this book did not work for me as I found the writing choppy and the characters very undeveloped.

I cannot stop talking about this book! Elena is such an intriguing character. She was so relatable, in how she handled her situations. The way the author wrote this made it feel like I was hearing a story from one of my relatives. I am already planning to reread this before the end of the year. Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for making this available.

I was going to read this book for a challenge but I am cutting it too close to the end of the year for this level of complexity in the plot. I can't handle this many time jumps, lol.