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posted by invisiblelizard at 10:30 pm (EST) on Nov 12, 2012
"I am intensely aware, by the way, that this story does not show me in a particularly flattering light. I am aware that, within an impressively short time of meeting me, Rosalind had me coming to heel like a well-trained dog: running up and down stairs to bring her coffee, nodding along while she bitched about my partner, imagining like some starstruck teenager that she was a kindred soul. But before you {there's that fourth wall breaking} decide to despise me too thoroughly, consider this: she fooled you, too."
What bothered me about that was (a) I was not fooled. Perhaps I've seen too many American crime TV shows, read too many formulaic mysteries, but Rosalind stuck out like a sore thumb early on. I pretty much figured out the plot twist by the half-way mark. No doubt others figured it out as well. Yet others, I'm sure, didn't. Regardless, (b) breaking that fourth wall and addressing your reader in the 2nd person like that is very distracting. A useful literary technique, certainly, but you'd better be very careful how you use it. It's not like she littered this text with references to the reader (as if we were reading a confession written by the protagonist). This was the only time she did it. And it felt a little too much to me like the author pausing to point out how clever she was. Which is in itself not being clever. It might have been tolerable if I had been thinking, at the same time, "Wow, she's pretty clever." But I was actually thinking the opposite.
Anyway, just my thoughts.
posted by invisiblelizard at 1:48 pm (EST) on Nov 12, 2012
posted by MrsLee at 4:47 am (EST) on Oct 19, 2012
Mark
posted by msf59 at 8:00 pm (EST) on Oct 18, 2010
Mark
posted by msf59 at 7:30 pm (EST) on Oct 18, 2010
Pat
posted by pdebolt at 9:47 am (EST) on Aug 28, 2010
Have a good day
Jude
posted by jdthloue at 8:32 am (EST) on Jul 23, 2010
ah..but you are in Library Thing/Early Reviewers.....yep, those free books are certainly Perks!
so, WHO, ARE YOU? (shades of CSI)
J
posted by jdthloue at 3:21 pm (EST) on Jul 22, 2010