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I suspect that Ballantyne started with an interesting resolution to the Fermi Paradox and worked through the implications from there, and this core idea is quite interesting. The problem is in the execution: with powerful superhuman intelligences calling the tune, the main characters (who are all rather disconnected from the world to begin with) are mostly spending their time discovering how helpless and irrelevant they really are. I never really connected with the main characters, and finished the book because I wanted to find out what was really going on rather than because I cared about what happened to them. A good ideas book, not much of a story. ( )

either the author was confused, or it was me. ( )

I bought this book after seeing a review of it at Errant Dreams Reviews which for some reason caught my attention. I thought it was a good romp, especially for a first novel. The three plot lines kept me going, and I especially wanted to understand more about Eva. For these reasons I do recommend it to anyone who might be interested.

However, I think he could have done more with the theme of recursion; in many cases it seems just to be occasional plot repetition, inheritance, etc., without making any interesting point about the essential idea of recursion. This would have pushed the novel from good to great. Similarly, I think he missed some opportunities with Eva's brother, Constantine's intelligences, and Herb and Robert's further development. These all felt a little pro forma to me. On the whole, character development was slightly weak. Perhaps he will do more with these in the sequels.

Also, there were just some awkward moments. For example, when they said "non-Turing machines," my reaction was not, oh, something more powerful than Turing machines, but rather, wow, something weak enough to not be a Turing machine! This is, in fact, something they are called in the literature, but I find it an unfortunate name, one that he could have dealt with by encapsulating some of the current discussion of hypercomputability. Perhaps this would only bother those of us who know a little but are not specialists in that area; however, those who do read more spec fic than I are more often than average also within this knowledgable amateur range, and I think it could be worthwhile to clarify that. ( )

http://www.strangehorizons.com/review...

This first novel is an ambitious exploration of the future development of artificial intelligence through three viewpoint characters separated by decades in Ballantyne's future history (2051, 2119 and 2210), but sharing the problems of an intrusive nanny state and also a consistent uncertainty - extending to the characters' perception of themselves - as to who is human and who is an AI. However, I was left unconvinced by the external world-building - on the very first page, one of his central characters accidentally destroys an entire planet, which raises for me important questions, never answered, of how you can locate planets that can be so casually destroyed. In addition, I felt that the author's prose style simply did not rise to the level needed for such an ambitious plot. ( )