Adam O'Fallon Price

I received a copy of this ebook as part of LibraryThing Early Reviewers.

As with most short story collections, some stories worked better for me than others, but the overall quality here is consistently strong.

Price has a talent for taking ordinary desires, frustrations, and obsessions and following them just far enough to reveal something uncomfortable or unexpected. The stories are concise and engaging, making this an easy collection to read either in large chunks or one story at a time show more over a longer period.

I was particularly impressed by the title story, "Objects of Desire." At only a couple of paragraphs (and not even particularly bulky ones), it demonstrates just how much can be accomplished in a very small space. Despite its brevity, it felt complete, memorable, and emotionally satisfying.

A thoughtful and well-written collection that understands the power of leaving the reader wanting just a little more. show less

Disappointing, and entirely because the writing was so dull and thoughtless. The book is full of tell-don't-show problems, lazy sentences, and modern anachronisms that I don't think are there wittingly. But beyond that, it lacks the snap and sparkle, the sheer joy of using language, that would have kept this complex story moving — I felt like I was being shoved from scene to scene, versus being led along by my own curiosity and enjoyment. I can tell that the writer liked his people and his show more plot; he just didn't have the tools (or the time) to convey that excitement in language. show less

Summary:

Richard Lazar is advancing in years but regressing in life. After a career as a literary novelist that has ground to a halt and landed him in a trailer in Phoenix, Richard is surprised to find sudden success publishing a gritty memoir about his service in Vietnam. Sent on a book tour by his publishing house, Richard encounters his biggest (and really only) fan: an awkward, despondent student named Vance with issues of his own (an absentee father, a depressive mother, his own acute show more shyness). Soon Vance has volunteered to chauffeur Richard for the rest of the book tour, and the two embark on a disastrous but often hilarious cross-country trip. When things go wrong, Richard and Vance forge an unlikely bond between two misanthropes whose mutual insecurities and disdain for the world force both to look at each other, and their lives, in a more meaningful way.

My take: 5 looks

A beautifully written story of the short crossing-of-paths between an old, curmudgeonly writer with his first taste of fame, and a young writer-in-waiting, still sure that the written word holds for him the promise of a future.

Richard is completely unlikable. He lies, drinks, sneaks, and wears his lifetime of regret like a garment. However, he is very likeable. One of his most introspective moments gave me this great quote:

Of course, it was he who was the pile of shit. He felt, in fact, that he was made of shit. Bullshit, dogshit, horseshit, ratshit, chickenshit. His mental and physical state constituted a sort of Pouisse-Café of shit - an elaborate stratification of shit that comingled to crate a shitty whole that was much shittier than the sum of its shitty parts. Immediate, automatic remorse was the greasy top layer of shit, which bubbled on top of the churning shit of his hangover, which was generously layered on top of the firmer soil bed of his bad health and drinking and desire for alcohol, which itself sat on top of untold, fossilized geological strata of guilt and fear, decades - a lifetime - of shit. Chapter 5

This gives the reader great insight into Richard. He knows how he is. He knows why he is this way. But, at this point, he feels that he is probably too far gone for any significant change. He is honest about who he is, and he offers this honesty to all those around him, giving them the benefit of his experience.

Then there is Vance. Vance is instantly likable as the neophyte fan who volunteers to pick up Richard from the airport, as Richard begins his first ever book tour. Vance manages to finagle his way into a more substantial spot on Richard's book tour; and, you guessed it, we begin The Grand Tour.

The characters and the writing of this book meld into a wonderful journey. You almost wince at places, and want to turn your eyes to avoid what you know is coming next. But rather than being predictable, it is more of a well-worn path that you choose to walk with these two.

A colorful menagerie of complimenting characters add a nice spice to this main dish, and serves to move the story and characters along on their journey.

Available August 9th 2016 by Doubleday, I highly recommend this one. It is on my list of 2016 favorites. Thanks to NetGalley for providing a copy for this honest review. show less

Put simply, this is a tedious story due to the characters who can't get out of their own way. Richard's a Vietnam war veteran/author who finds sudden fame with a memoir. As with most rising stars, the publisher sends him on a book tour unaware of his 'issues'. A drunk with a dim view on life, what follows is both predictable and repetitious due to the identical scenario at each stop. At the first stop Richard encounters Vance, a young aspiring author who soon becomes his volunteer driver. show more Worse yet, Vance struggles with life as much or more than Richard.

When a story's plot is predictable, we can only hope for good characters that will offset the weakness. Richard is not only predictable and depressing, he lacks depth, wit or anything resembling humanity. Vance is equally as lame, since his despair is equal or greater to Richard's.

The story lacks theme, the unexpected or elements we embrace with good stories. I had hoped for humor due to summaries and reviews, but none was to be found nor any semblance. Rather than belabor the obvious, I decided against finishing it for obvious reasons. show less