
Jeremy Laszlo
Author of Awakening
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The Monster Within 2 copies
The Crowned 1 copy
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This was a kindle freebie, and it's a decent read. The pacing is pretty good, the characters are reasonably believable and the author has done a good job of differentiating between action-man jock older teenage brother Jack, thoughtful gothy younger teenage sister Sam, and grade-schooler Will, giving them distinct voices. The novel does switch POV between the three, although only rarely giving the same action from different POV's, so it's not redundant.
In particular, for a male author, show more Laszlo has done a really good job depicting Sam. She's a little philosophical in that oh-so-self-important way only teenage girls can really pull off, wavering between trying to be motherly to youngster Will, and screaming like a little girl at occasionally the wrong moments, mourning the loss of twitter before remembering she has no friends to tweet to any more, and obsessing hilariously over her hair and make-up even when sleeping in a pile of boxes in an abandoned convenience store walk-in. I realise that made her seem very shallow, but she's also the smart, practical one, who often has the smart ideas and keeps the group together and moving forward in as good spirits as they can manage.
Once the kids are out of the bunker, they are faced with a destroyed city, and no idea what happened, who did it, or if anyone else survived it. Their first couple of days are a bit of a mess, as they trek through the ruined city, trying to get to a place that was always safe in their childhood, and hoping it might still be so.
I thoroughly enjoyed the fact that they had no idea what was going on, or if they could trust anyone they met, if they should meet anyone. Youngster Will insisted it was monsters, Jack that it was a war, and Sam thought it might be aliens, so they compromised on a war with alien monsters. By the end of the book, they still don't know - and neither do we.
It does end on a cliffhanger, of sorts, but I'm considering picking up the next book in the series, once it's complete, so I can read it through if I still like it.
Relatively well-edited, compared to most of the tripe out there. Only one instance of jewel-eyes and checking ones-self out in the mirror, and it's right up front in the first chapter. (Also, it pains me that I feel I need to mention these days, when a book is readable, and fairly typo and grammar-snafu free, but, that's the brave new world we're living in.)
3.5 stars rounded up because a) I do like to support indie authors who are doing good work, and b) I really appreciate on principle a YA targetted novel that is not full to the brim of ... well all the usual stuff YA novels are generally full of lately. show less
In particular, for a male author, show more Laszlo has done a really good job depicting Sam. She's a little philosophical in that oh-so-self-important way only teenage girls can really pull off, wavering between trying to be motherly to youngster Will, and screaming like a little girl at occasionally the wrong moments, mourning the loss of twitter before remembering she has no friends to tweet to any more, and obsessing hilariously over her hair and make-up even when sleeping in a pile of boxes in an abandoned convenience store walk-in. I realise that made her seem very shallow, but she's also the smart, practical one, who often has the smart ideas and keeps the group together and moving forward in as good spirits as they can manage.
Once the kids are out of the bunker, they are faced with a destroyed city, and no idea what happened, who did it, or if anyone else survived it. Their first couple of days are a bit of a mess, as they trek through the ruined city, trying to get to a place that was always safe in their childhood, and hoping it might still be so.
I thoroughly enjoyed the fact that they had no idea what was going on, or if they could trust anyone they met, if they should meet anyone. Youngster Will insisted it was monsters, Jack that it was a war, and Sam thought it might be aliens, so they compromised on a war with alien monsters. By the end of the book, they still don't know - and neither do we.
It does end on a cliffhanger, of sorts, but I'm considering picking up the next book in the series, once it's complete, so I can read it through if I still like it.
Relatively well-edited, compared to most of the tripe out there. Only one instance of jewel-eyes and checking ones-self out in the mirror, and it's right up front in the first chapter. (Also, it pains me that I feel I need to mention these days, when a book is readable, and fairly typo and grammar-snafu free, but, that's the brave new world we're living in.)
3.5 stars rounded up because a) I do like to support indie authors who are doing good work, and b) I really appreciate on principle a YA targetted novel that is not full to the brim of ... well all the usual stuff YA novels are generally full of lately. show less
Oddly enough, I couldn't put this book down. There's great story telling, coupled with surreal imagery, which left me on the edge of my seat after nearly every page. I'll admit saying to myself, several times, "this guy's dead" only to be completely wrong. I'm anticipating the next book with unyielding eagerness, in this series.
A good YA book with well thought out characters and vivid descriptions. Jack, Sam and Will emerge from their family's bunker to find the world as they knew it destroyed.
Terrifying depiction from a young audience's perspective of the possible end of the world. When three siblings are locked in a vault by their father and told to stay as long as possible...six months becomes a lifetime. Finally, running out of clean water and food, the decision is made to leave their shelter, only to discover a devestation only found in their worst nightmare. A journey is embarked upon to find out what has happened to their world and is there anyone else out there. This is a show more really good start to a series I can see myself getting into. show less
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