S.D. Rasheed

I liked the plot of this book. It made me smile, frown, tear up, rise eyebrows- all things I enjoy feeling when reading. I do wish however it was better defined when the pov had changed. It really interrupted my enjoyment of the book when trying to decipher who's pov we'd switched to. Perhaps the year could be more like 2119 instead of 7 years from now, because obviously this has not become a possibility in the next decade.

I won this book from the member giveaways on LibraryThing.

It has some great ideas and a few really good details, but I don't think this story was ready to be published at all. It could be great, but it needs a lot of work and not just editing - although that would have helped.

To start with it needs to be set farther into the future with more world-building and it needs more emotion. The writing is very stilted. If it had been all from Tears point of view (which I thought was implied from show more the title, but that might just be me) that could have worked in the beginning as long as it changed along with the humanoid as he gained more emotions himself. There were also a lot of holes in the logic and the story that could have been filled in. This was very short (78 pages on my nook).

I think the author has potential, but this story could have been much, much better and I just can't recommend it as is. show less

A story about androids and how they can become very human like with all the good and bad that entails. Sort of a coming of age book with a sci-fi twist. A very good read which keeps your interest.

I was looking forward to reading this book as it sounds like a great story. I was very disappointed. This book is not ready for release, although it is currently available for purchase. The story line is the only thing that kept me reading this book. I wanted to know what happened with Tears.

I'd recommend the author remove the book from the shelves and have an editor go through it. It needs a spell check for one, a grammar check for two, and someone to redo it into a book to read rather show more than the screenplay style writing.

Due to the extremely poor quality of the book I had a hard time even giving it one star. If it was redone, as suggested above, I could give it a much higher rating.

Disclaimer: This book was received a member giveaway at LibraryThing. show less