Malcolm Kohll

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Alas, Kohll doesn't really augment what is already a weak story in his adaptation. The writing style is too childish, the Stubby Kaye plotlkine appears even more irrelevant (despite his attempts to give it more background) and one is left feeling that while the author thinks it's funny the rest of us don't really get the joke. Indeed the whole setting just doesn't seem Whovian.

However it does pass the Bechdel test reasonably well, with Mel, Ray and Delta conversing about numerous things other than the Doctor or the Bannermen.… (more)