John Lyman (1)

I really wanted to love this book, I really did. Especially since I liked God’s Lions: The Secret Chapel so much and am a huge supporter of indie authors. Again Lyman has come up with a compelling plot, but I thought the plot of Secret Chapel was more so. Also, House of Acerbi was much longer, largely due to unnecessary detail about anything and everything that did not further the plot. I scanned over a lot of it. It appears that there will be a third book, and I will read it, but I am hoping for a more tightly formed plot and the exclusion of superfluous details. In other words, something more like Secret Chapel.… (more)