Dwayne Alexander Smith

Way too much going on...chapters too short. Insane premise.
Needs a sequel.

It was good, wanted it to be great. Would have worked better as a film, but crazy enough to work in its current form.

Won't talk about the characters because doing so would spoil it, but I will say the protagonist will work your good nerves as he handles the macadamian nuts he encounters throughout the story. He wasn't so much naive, just unreasonable dealing with known fools. You tend to act accordingly once foolishness enters into a relationship.… (more)