Concept is great, but that writing was so hard to get through. YA for sure, the last handful of chapters were so boring and repetitive.
I enjoyed the premise and thought it would be an interesting read. It was actually kind of a struggle to get through, there are several inconsistencies that ripped me right out of the story.
It feels like each portion of the story was written by someone different, like a handful of people wrote it and didn't read each others work before adding their own.
The lead character feels a bit bipolar from section to section. Responding to situations can differ from case to case, but her reactions are intelligent to idiotic. From being a competent nurse to failing basic first aid.
The dialogue is also confusing at times. The scene may be a time sensitive moment and the author seems to forget that, having characters interact for pages while immediate danger waits around to continue.
It feels like each portion of the story was written by someone different, like a handful of people wrote it and didn't read each others work before adding their own.
The lead character feels a bit bipolar from section to section. Responding to situations can differ from case to case, but her reactions are intelligent to idiotic. From being a competent nurse to failing basic first aid.
The dialogue is also confusing at times. The scene may be a time sensitive moment and the author seems to forget that, having characters interact for pages while immediate danger waits around to continue.