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First of all, this was an awesome idea! I don't usually read random science fiction kind of things, but the idea of people being sort of computer-ish and not knowing about it... that was very interesting. I liked the story of the characters too, though some of the changes in character seemed to happen a little fast. Also, there was a bit where we jumped out of the book and went into "reality" where the publisher was emailing the writer or some such thing. It made the story itself seem a little more real, but I'm not sure that it really did anything for or against the actual plot itself.
I didn't make many notes because I didn't think any one thing was really very memorable over another, but I made a few..
Aeden blushed a bit, sweeping his hand through his hair, "Well, uh ... thank you?" he grinned, the teenage boy peeking through the facade of a man in charge.
That was the only line that I highlighted. The rest of the things were mentioned above. Not a bland book, but not something that was highly quotable. And, as I said, a very interesting story line. I would probably read the rest if they were given to me to review.
http://www.librarything.com/review/99927802
I didn't make many notes because I didn't think any one thing was really very memorable over another, but I made a few..
Aeden blushed a bit, sweeping his hand through his hair, "Well, uh ... thank you?" he grinned, the teenage boy peeking through the facade of a man in charge.
That was the only line that I highlighted. The rest of the things were mentioned above. Not a bland book, but not something that was highly quotable. And, as I said, a very interesting story line. I would probably read the rest if they were given to me to review.
http://www.librarything.com/review/99927802
