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Were there any ways in which the book could have been improved?

Can't really see any to improve it. The serial killer theory didn't carry much weight and the story could have done without it.

I don't believe the serial killer theory or the FBI participation was necessary but it didn't detract from the story either.

I loved the book the way it was written.

Victoria was considered a serial killer as she killed before she met Dan and then married him and then her killings started again with Clancy, and then the 2 sisters. Her motive was older men having sex with younger girls.

Didn't really care for this story. The serial killer bit was just clutter and not believable. The whole Victoria/Laura thing was a stretch.

I was happy to read it just as it is - even though the Laura/Victoria thing was 'unusual'.