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Were there any ways in which the book could have been improved?

it was fine as is

I liked this one just the way it was. My copy had all the characters listed in the front and that helped.

I like more history in these books instead of info about weapons, satellites, etc.

I thought it skimmed the action a lot more than usual. At one point it simply said the team had to get through two more sets of guards to get to their destination - in earlier books we'd have been given a bullet by bullet account. This made it seem a bit blasé in places.

>4 EadieB: Agree about the history.

This one felt very formulaic.

History.
Oregon introduced in disguise.
Premise - linked towards end of world as we know it.
Invade a home or works premises.
Juan trapped, will he get out in time.
Descrition of cars........
Finally resolution - looks like can’t save the day, but right at the end they did.
Baddie dies!

Not saying it wasn’t enjoyable but just too formulaic at points. Need a bit more creativity and flair on the themes, and how it is laid out.

I can't improve on what >7 Andrew-theQM: said.