THE DEEP ONES: "Vine Terror" by Howard Wandrei

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THE DEEP ONES: "Vine Terror" by Howard Wandrei

1gwendetenebre
Feb 9, 2024, 2:41 pm

2AndreasJ
Feb 15, 2024, 10:37 am

Can't say I appreciated the writing, but the story wasn't too bad. You could no doubt make a decent horror movie out of it.

The setting struck me as curiously undefined. Set approximately at the time of writing? At first I vaguely assumed, for no very concrete reason, that it was intended up be set in the (then) future, but nothing really turned up to confirm that. No hint what the laboratory was researching.

3RandyStafford
Feb 18, 2024, 9:46 am

>2 AndreasJ: Given that Wandrei was from St. Paul, MN, I kind of assumed the vague setting was someplace in northern Minnesota. There were a great many Finn immigrants in Minnesota, especially in the north part of the state.

While I like tales of vegetable terror, I didn't like this one much. The humor of the opening scene fell flat, and I thought it and the closing scene too long. If Wandrei wanted to push an anti-science theme, it didn't really work.

Like the setting, what Keene was working on is annoyingly ill-defined, and Wandrei doesn't even make an attempt to provide a scientific rationale, jargon, or techno mumbo-jumbo. Rather he goes for the mystical.

Haverland is an implausibly resolute sceptic given what he's seen. That climactic scene where he considers everything that's happened seems to me Wandrei taking an element of his friend H. P. Lovecraft's aesthetic criteria on the weird story -- a violation of the natural order -- and laying it on too thick.

Not a bad conceit at the center of the story, but, for me, it needed a rewrite.