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Any other thoughts, comments or questions on the fourth section?

I feel like this book has become so repetitive. It easily could have been cut in half. On the plus side there are plenty of potential bad guys, all of them claiming to be good guys.

It is quite a convoluted plot line. Less parts to it now that Cotton and Luke are together and I think this helped the story flow together better in this section.

Unfortunately been busy with support work for schools past two days so a little behind with section 5. Will get them up as soon as possible.

>4 Andrew-theQM: No ptoblem!

No problem for me. I'm just catching up.

Yes! Ditto, finally catching up.

I think this book has been quite scattered, and a lot of reliance on strange dark shapes of men with guns. I keep forgetting who is working for whom with the different POV's that go from chapter to chapter.

I’m catching up! I thought all would be finished days ago. I’ve also been struggling with the multiplying bad guys…or are ony of them good guys? 🤔

I’m now counting pages, never a good sign when I start doing that!
I agree with Lynda >2 Olivermagnus: the book could have been cut in half. It has been too convoluted, IMO.