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Any other thoughts, comments or questions on the second section?

This was the part that, despite all of the action bits, did kind of drag on. Maybe introducing so many new characters and motivations? But Berry is good about keeping the characters relevant to the plot, and it will make sense here in a bit.

>2 threadnsong: Often happens around the second / third sections in these books before building to a culmination in the following sections.

>3 Andrew-theQM: Yes, that's true.