What do you think?

im writing a story! ^^ yay! tell me what you think and if you want to hear more. also if you have any ideas to make it better, please tell me!
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Prologue

They turned up around May. Huge packs of unknown creatures. They stayed around the edges of our very small village, if you could even call it that. They occasionally came out at night. They didn’t attack anyone, but some people said they saw them. I saw one. Not much to see, really, just these really bright yellow-green eyes. You can’t help but look. Knocked me and the others who saw them out like candle lights on a windy day.
I’m Kayla, by the way. No last name, we don’t need them where I’m from. Our village is so small we know everyone who lives there. So little, the population, there isn’t more than one person with the same name. Located in the middle of the biggest woodland left, I guess you could say it is lost to the world around it. We don’t mind, though. Don’t go looking for us. Keep to your own business and we’ll keep to ours.
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Should i add more?

btw this is an idea i got from a dream i had!

i love it

:D

i like it but i feel like ur telling me rather than showing

yeah kind of
know that you mention it renee

the idea of a secluded village in the middle of a vast woods isn't(oops i meant **is**) really interesting, and that there's no need for last names, i would've never thought of that

I loved it it was awsome!

well it was the work of about ten minutes, i never thought twice that it would eventually need revision.

well there's no need to think of revision when ur right, that would distract from your creative flow