I received this as an early review in exchange for an honest review. So, here goes.. This book was painful for me to read. The grammar was horrible. The story line was inconsistent. In one scene the main female character was to meet the main male character. She had trouble closing her truck door which rumpled her shift. She then went inside the Starbucks, arriving first. He then arrived, seeing her and thinking she looked beautiful in her blue blouse and white lace skirt. She must have changed her clothes!? She then waved and he spotted her. Well, hadn't he already spotted her? The choice of words made me think the author didn't know what the words meant. The female character visited her mother ritualistically. Really? I think maybe she visited ritually. This kind of thing makes me crazy! Calling this a romance is a stretch,I may be showing my age, but the love scenes bordered on pornography. If you like childishly written books, this may be for you. But me, I will not be reading anything else by this author. ( )

Title: When I Fall In Love
Author: Emma Kylie
Published: E.K.
Reviewed By: Arlena Dean
Series: The Bradford's #1
Rating: 4
Review:

"When I fall In Love" by Emma Kylie was a sweet, cute, short, 'hot and steamy sweet' romance read. This was a story of Luke Bradford who had lost the love of his life and had 'no interest in meeting any women' until he met Madison Howard. For Luke his life was now worth living, even though Madison did have the weight of the world on her shoulders. It seemed like Madison mother and brother were in need of her help financially, and were constantly as for money, so she was trying her best to get a better paying job so that she could help her family. What a sweet girl! How will this all work out for Luke and Madison because after Luke saves her life from a almost car accident he realizes more than ever that he is in love with her. When Madison finally understand that she is in love with Luke will she be willing to stay even after she is offered a job in another state? To find out you will have to pick up "When I Fall In Love" to see how and if this will happen. I liked the read but it was somewhat choppy in a few places but I was still able to follow this author thought pattern from A to Z. Guy meet girl....sparks fly...its 'hot and steamy' and in the end...well you will have to pick up the reading to find out the ending. With this novel being the first in the author's series I am sure it will be a more smoother read in her next series. ( )

When I Fall in Love is a short quick read. Luke is a rancher who lost fiance to an accident. Madison is a geologist sent to Luke's ranch. Neither is looking for love. Simply written if somewhat what juvenile at points. Too short for good character development. Plot easy to guess. Overall book was okay. ( )