Eveningland: Stories

Michael Knight’s most recent short story collection has everything I love in short stories (and nothing that I don’t). The connection among the stories is loose: they all take place in Alabama (hence the cover), and all explore relationships. Otherwise, they are each their own self-contained beautiful story. With only seven stories in this collection, there is not a dud in the bunch. Two of my favorites: “Smash and Grab” is a startling story of a burglary gone wrong --for the thief, that is. And, “Water and Oil” introduces us to a young man who worries about an incoming oil spill, but whose attention is distracted by his attraction to a local waitress. The stories are of varying lengths (another plus in my book) and are full show more of economical but rich characterization. Highly recommended.

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This book is a fantastic collection of short stories beating with the pulse of a place close to my heart, Mobile Bay. The stories don't punch like, say, Flannery O'Connor's would, but they drift dreamily into one another while telling the secrets of those living "lives of quiet desperation." A melancholy mood persists throughout almost the whole collection, maybe at times just wistfulness, but that feeling is strongly countered by adaptation and survival. I heartily recommend this book to ease through in the coming, creeping longer evenings of the spring and summer.

Eveningland is a beautiful collection of six short stories and one novella that all focus on people who share a certain state of comfort and privilege as well as the state of Alabama in common. The central characters range from seniors to teenagers, but they are all from the right neighborhoods and the right suburbs of Mobile, Alabama. Not that they are the idle rich, the first story features a young man volunteering with the EPA to watch for oil seeping into the river from Deepwater Horizon’s spill and later working for his father’s marina. The last story features a man who inherits his father’s shipyard taking an unfinished but seaworthy boat out to try to avoid Hurricane Raphael.

The first story, Water and Oil, sneaks up on you, show more quietly charming you. It’s a story told by an old man living on a houseboat watching a high school senior coming of age, finding his first love–the inappropriate and already committed Dana Pint. In the background there is the high drama of the Deepwater Horizon oil spill slowly invading their home waters and destroying, at least for this season, their livelihood. In the forefront, the story is small, young love, mostly unrequited and the bittersweet memories it will leave forever. The contrast is powerful and the languages is quiet and simple which is where it gets its power.

There are a few stories that focus on violence. Smash and Grab is somewhat comic, a burglar taken out by a teenage girl and a toil tank cover. Her matter-of-fact violence and competency hide deeper emotions, her conflict less with the thief than with her father. Grand Old Party is the story of a couple who love each other, but have forgotten to remind each other of that fact. She’s cheating, he’s going to do something about that, something with a gun. It seems he should have thought this out a bit more, first. Our Lady of the Roses tells the story of a elementary school art teacher at a Catholic school and the nun who seems to disapprove of her quite a bit, but really, it’s a story of a woman accommodating, settling, and perhaps, we don’t know for sure, but perhaps, escaping. In The King of Dauphin Island, a recent widower, the sixth richest man in Alabama, pursues a dream until his daughters decide he must be a few bubbles off plumb. Love and grief combine to give no right answer.

The final story is Landfall. There is high drama thanks to Hurricane Raphael heading right their way. Muriel is filling the tubs with water in anticipation of the power being lost and drinking water possibly contaminated by flooding. She slips, hits her head, and drifts in and out of consciousness, imagining her husband Angus still living, her children still young enough to all crawl in with her when they are scared in the night. Meanwhile, her oldest son Angus (Jr) is risking his own life in the midst of the hurricane, trying to save a big ship they are building. Her daughter, Doodle, is sitting anxiously in the hallway while the doctors struggle to save Muriel’s life from the severe concussion and her youngest son, Percy, risks drowning trying to get to the hospital from the distant hunting cabin her husband built years ago. And that’s not to mention her grandchildren. There is so much love in this story, love and exasperation, which go together like eggs and bacon. I love the completeness of the story, down to the dog sniffing in the wind to find his way home.

I picture Michael Knight writing Eveningland several years back, and then spending the next two or three years cutting out half the words. The language is that spare and that elegant. There is such simplicity. Even in the midst of real peril, there is nothing melodramatic. Downright silly things happen, a man with a gun contemplating blowing his brains out during a hurricane, interrupted by a guy covered in mud. But Knight does not have him threaten the man – not even though in that same story, the young man’s father is shaken to his core by nearly killing a neighbor boy who wandered into his house. Knight saw no need to make a direct parallel, his route is simpler, more likely, and feel more true. Again and again, Knight choose anti-drama, the more real choice, the bolder choice. I really loved Eveningland and recommend it to all short story lovers.

Eveningland will be released March 7th. I received an advance e-galley from the publisher via NetGalley.

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Knight's stories of the Mobile area--all focused on mostly well-to-do families--are well done and really conjure up the area for an Alabama native like myself. While the background may be oil slicks and hurricanes, the focus is on individual feelings. While the book is lacking any real humor, there is a good deal of honesty--but perhaps people here are better than average. Everyone in his or her own way is striving for something a bit more. The only drawbacks of the book for me were the frequent mentions of the University of Alabama. Excuse me, I have to go puke now.

The audiobook narrator takes a minute or two to get used to, then his voice is just about perfect. My only issue is that he keeps pronouncing Dauphin "Doe Feen" in the show more French manner, when growing up in Alabama I never heard anyone say anything other than "Daw Fun". show less

Stories and a novella set in and around Mobile, Alabama. In “Water and Oil” a teenage boy’s loss of innocence and sudden awareness of the harshness of life coincide with the Deepwater Horizon oil spill. A strange dynamic occurs between a college student home for the holidays and the burglar who breaks into her father’s home during a New Year’s Eve burglary in “Smash and Grab.” In “Our Lady of the Roses” a young art teacher contends with changes in her life. In “Jubilee” a successful, genteel, perhaps perfect, couple live their lives in the week leading up to the husband’s fiftieth birthday, with accompanying elaborate party. The novella, “Landfall” tracks a family as a hurricane approaches Mobile.

Marked by show more the south, this collection presents people that could be real, with real problems. “Marcus Weems was the sixth richest man in the state of Alabama but he lost his wife to cancer like everybody else.” show less

The first thing I noticed when I started reading was how smooth the prose was, it immediately put me at ease and I felt that I was in the hands of a masterful author. These stories are set in Alabama, the characters are white and seem to be from the more privileged families of the area. Throughout these stories they come to some kind of understanding with themselves, these are brief glimpses into a particular time, event in their lives.

I loved the first story, Oil and Water, a snapshot of teenage angst, reminded me of summers by the Fox River when I was growing up.

Smash and Grab was another favorite, a robbery gone wrong with an unexpected surprise ending.

The third is actually a novella, Landfall, and a family has an expected crisis to show more deal with just as a hurricane is expected to make land.

Will keep this author on my watch list, he is a superb storyteller and I enjoyed these immensely.

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I really, really wanted to like this book. An entire book of short stories from my home state was so compelling that I downloaded it immediately. The first story was engaging and I was enjoying it ... until the end. Then the second, third, fourth ... I began to see a pattern. The stories proved to be compelling and drew me in, but the endings of almost all of the stories in this collection were so abrupt as to be disappointing. There was so much more to be investigated, more story to be told, additional nuances to be explored. To be left flat at the end of each story left me feeling that the author had reached his word quota and had to end the story suddenly.

This one is not recommended. However, if you are looking for an excellent book show more of short stories, I recommend "The Paper Menagerie" by Ken Liu.

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