Freewill

Will is a tormented teen dealing with the deaths of his father, stepmother, and several classmates in this obtuse story. I remember hearing people talking about this book when it came out, and figured it was worth a read, since it won a Printz honor, and I've liked his other books. When I finished, I had to look at the reviews to figure out what the hell anyone liked about it. The PW review summed up my feelings precisely: "this airless novel does not reward the effort required to penetrate it."

I found the second-person narrative to be a bit off-putting in the beginning, but not insurmountable. The main question posed by the novel, can you ever know what's in the mind of another person, is potentially profound, but the probing here is show more clumsy and unsatisfying. I found myself hoping that he was a serial killer. THAT would have been much more satisfying; a perfect picture of a truly disturbed individual. show less

2.5

Freewill is a Printz honor and one of those books that you appreciate what the book is trying to do more than enjoy the execution.

Told in the second person, in a sparse and almost repetitive cadence, the story is about Will, who is disconnected from life and whose only outlet seems to be strange woodwork projects that he doesn't even particularly enjoy. When the wood totems show up in a series of suicides, unwanted attention is drawn to him and he must decide if he should speak up or let himself become part of the nothing he feels he has to live for.

I think Lynch made a lot of smart choices in framing. While many people would find the "you" off-putting, it helps reinforce the reader's own questions. However, Will is still so much a show more nonentity and passive character that he is neither a proper cypher for the reader to insert their own desires into nor interesting enough to carry the story's odd and morbid tone the way the narrators of Silver Linings Playbook or Perks of Being a Wallflower manage.

The other characters don't work as complex or lively characters either, partially from the remoteness of Will's relationship with them. This leaves most of their discussions feeling like talking points of the plot, anti-suicide PSAs rather than their own motivations.

This novel is not without compelling moments. While the choice to make the prose simple and sparse, Lynch has passages that are vivid. One example that made me take notice was when Will was taking a shower after forgetting clean himself for three days and remarks on the wonderful feeling of scrubbing skin, reminding himself to remember it because it's a nice small pleasure that is easily forgotten.

Unfortunately, the sparseness and the vagueness work against the story more than help it. The mystery of the totems and the suicides are left unresolved or even commented it on, as the story winds off into a palatable non-ending where Will finally makes a choice not to be so passive. I do like an open-endedness to my stories, but there's not enough to structure to make the suggestion of possibilities. On the bright side, the story is a brisk novella more than anything else and there are some passages that create a thoughtful starting point for the weighty topic.

And perhaps that is all that Freewill wanted to do, was to present the reader with a choice to do so... show less

While Lynch's choice to use second person does give this book a strong feel of immediacy that will probably connect with young adults, I simply did not get this book. I wanted to know more and was mostly frustrated by this one. It oblique and opaque and I never really felt like I understood if Will was crazy or not very bright. I particularly wanted to know what was going on with the teenagers who committed suicide and I know that the whole theme of "you can never really know" played into not finding that out as well as the limits of the narrator but still....frustrating. Definitely interesting stylistically though.

Definitely closer to a novella than a novel--I knocked this out on the trainride this morning. Definitely a book of characters rather than ideas or plot; in fact, it's only Will's character arc that resolves, not the A-then-B-then-C plot.

This got a little too lost in its own stylistic shenanigans for me to really get something out of it, though. Definitely willing to look into Lynch's other books, however.

Freewill is about a teen named will who has some troubling issues. There are teen deaths happening all around, yet no one can figure out why. Will goes through an emotional state of not understanding why he is where he is or why he is doing what he's doing. The title alludes to the fact that will wants to be free from himself, and he has no control over what is going on around him because of the freewill that belongs to everyone. An interesting read for sure, but not my favorite.

This book would be great for an honors high school course, but also good for juniors and seniors who are mature enough to discuss issues like suicide and mental health. At times it is abstract in the way it is written (main character's stream of consciousness), but overall a quick read.

Will, age 17, is in a therapeutic woodworking class. Will is lonely and confused after the death of his father and step-mother. The dark story is told in the second person - Will is speaking to himself. He express himself through woodworking. He places his sculptures at the sites of teen suicides. Then, people begin going to his sculptures to kill themselves.

Other books to try: Rough Waters, Tears of a Tiger

Other books by this author: Slot Machine