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Genres; Adult(ISH), Paranormal, Romance
2 Stars (Barely)
Missing words & typos.
Descriptions and wording are odd.
Unnecessary info & repetitive. To wordy. A BIG no no for short books. You don't have time to be repetitive! Don't waste your word count that way. It's ridiculous.
"..he cooed." WTH? Is this guy part bird? She keeps having him 'Coo'
"The shock must have still been evident on her face." Um, shock from what? He got a table?
At 22% went in my '2 Finish Later' shelf.
I finally come back to finish it and read this, "Charlotte’s chocolate-colored orbs focused on him..." Orbs? Really? Are we talking about eyes here?
You would think a story this short would fly by. Nope. Meanders with a lot of filler. And very juvenile writing. The whole thing is boring and the end is ridiculous.
I honestly don't know how I did it, but I managed to make myself finish it. ( )