Empress of the World

Feels Oddly Incomplete

Like other "gifted" students her age, fifteen-year-old Nicola "Nic" Lancaster has elected to spend her summer at the Siegel Institute, pursuing her passion: archaeology, in her case - or garbage, as her professor unglamorously describes it. She expects to spend her vacation exploring a career path, rounding out her college resume, maybe even squeezing in a little fun. What she doesn't anticipate is falling in love. For the first time. With another girl.

The second she spots the improbably named Battle Hall Davies across the auditorium, Nic is infatuated:

"For a while I forget where I am. I'm trying to be like Dad, to look at her the way he looks at things when he draws. He says he breaks objects up into forms: like show more he doesn't see a head, he sees an oval.

"But I just keep seeing this girl."

(Even if it does take her head a few weeks to catch on to what her heart knows almost instantaneously.)

The daughter of a failed actor-turned-minister, Battle comes from a home not broken by divorce (like fellow students Katrina and Isaac), but by religious strife: her older brother Nick ran away when he was just 17, rather than put up with their father's new rules and regulations. Shaken by his absence, and increasingly resentful of her parents, Battle has some serious intimacy issues. Hardly ideal when you're starting a new relationship; doubly so when the very fabric of the relationship is uncharted territory for both travelers.

Both have thus far mostly/only been into guys. Nic is readily accepting of her feelings, and soon comes to self-identify as bisexual, even as she decries the need to label and categorize people at all. (Ironic, since Battle takes issue with Nic's need to label, categorize, and explain everything and everyone: "It felt sometimes like you wanted to vivisect me.") Battle...well, we don't really know what Battle thinks, since the story's told entirely from Nic's point of view - much to the story's detriment, as I'll soon discuss.

Nic and Battle's romance is inevitable and intense - and seemingly over before it even started. On their two-week anniversary, Nic gives Battle a well-intentioned but ill-conceived gift, sending her into the arms of "Kevin the Inarticulate Composer," the fifth member of their quartet. While the kerfuffle doesn't quite come out of nowhere - Battle drops copious hints of discomfort and dissatisfaction - her reaction does seem a little disproportionate, if not outright confusing. This is where the story lost a little of its shine, imho. I'm still not completely sure how I feel - or if I even liked it overall - which is unusual for me.

A few other reviewers seem puzzled as to why Battle was so upset over Nic's gift; and, while I think I understand, it would have been helpful to get Battle's perspective. All we know is what Nic knows (or can guess), which isn't much; she seems as clueless as Battle is closed off. Given the story arc, Battle feels at least as much an MC as Nic; but without a voice, her part seems incomplete.

What's even weirder is that Goodreads lists this as the first installment in the "Battle Hall Davies" series; and indeed, there's a sequel that seems to focus on Battle exclusively (The Rules for Hearts). Naturally I can't know for sure until I read book two, but this gives Empress of the World the feel of a prequel.

Either way, I'm on the fence. There are pieces I really liked - Battle shaving her head; the different reactions Nic encountered when she "came out" (tacit approval from the Angst Crows; snide muttering from the homophobes: "I guess I should be getting angry, or upset, but more than anything it's just odd - what has changed about me, that makes these people now want to call me this name? Do I look different?"); Nic's field notes; Doug, who looks "just like my ex-girlfriend from the back"; Katrina & STEM; Nic's parents (she's a scientist; he's an artist); the general diversity of the cast (in addition to the LGBTQ elements, Kevin is Asian; Isaac is Jewish); the costumes Katrina styled the crew in for the end-of-summer dance. Plus its content must have been rather groundbreaking back when it was first published, some fourteen years ago now. But when assembled, all the shiny bits don't quite make a satisfying whole.

3.5 stars, reluctantly rounded down to 3 where necessary.

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Know what would be really cool? If I could go back say twenty years and head out to a summer camp for gifted kids. Oh yeah, I could sign up for cool seminars on archeology, classical music theory, and other -ologies or theories. Which already makes this an uber cool book because that's exactly where it takes place.

Nicola ends up at Siegal Institute's Gifted program over the summer to explore her interest in archeology. She ends up making some friends while there, a pretty cool geeky group actually. One new friend is Battle, this gorgeous North Carolinian who has major hidden issues.

And then there's summer love. Unexpected summer love. (But I probably led you to the the unexpected part, huh?) Nicola and Battle end up realizing that they show more are into each other more than friends. This happens to be a first for them, since neither has had a girlfriend before.

I really dug this book. Not only did the characters remind me of the good ole WB18 days of Dawson's Creek and Gilmore Girls, but the interactions were so right on real. I loved how Nicola questions her feelings toward Battle and it wasn't just a quick "oh yeah, I'm into her" realization. She has this moment where she thinks back to who else she's liked, realizes that it's been both boys and girls, and viola we have an ALMOST bisexual character in YA lit. (I've only seen a bisexual character in Brent Hartinger's books).

Plus there's not any HUGE I will love you forever moment when summer comes to an end. Yay for Honest and Delivery.

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I enjoyed this book, although not as much as I thought I was going to. Even though the point of the book was Nic and Battle's relationship, I had a hard time seeing it come about because as the story is told from Nic's POV, she seemed to be pretty circumspect about falling for Battle until she hits us over the head with it. It was nice to see the easiness of the relationship and the fact that Nic didn't really care about labeling it--very refreshing.

The best first ya novel to come down the pike in sometime. Everything about it works: the characters, the dialogue, and the trappings of the teen romance experience. It will get hyped because it is a story about a bi teen, but the real story here is that Ms Ryan has written a touching, funny, totally heartbreakingly honest book about falling in love, with all the strings which come attached to that particular item. As good as Wittlinger's Hard Love, and that is some fast company to be in. Review originally appeared on Amazon.

Battle Hall (her parents named her after a building) and Nicola (Nic to her friends) meet at a summer program for gifted students. While Nic thinks she'll be spending the summer learning how to be an archeologist, she learns a lot more from her new friends and from her relationship with Battle. What's a girl to do when she thinks she's attracted to guys and finds herself falling in love with another girl?

The good: Being intelligent, going to class and taking your studies seriously is seen as a good thing.

The good: Acknowledging that, in most school-type situations, kids who demonstrate intelligence and take their schoolwork seriously are usually the lunchroom and social outcasts.

The good: The author acknowledges that you can be super-smart *and* dress like a weirdo (or like Weetzie Bat).

The bad (which is bad enough that I took a star off of this):
Of the 4 friends that the protagonist makes, the ONE kid of color is not only spacy, but self-absorbed. He also becomes the Bad Guy partway through the book.

Nicola Lancaster is spending her summer at the Siegel Institute, a hothouse of smart, intense teenagers. She soon falls in with Katrina (Manic Computer Chick), Isaac (Nice-Guy-Despite-Himself), Kevin (Inarticulate Composer) . . . and Battle, a beautiful blond dancer. The two become friends--and then, startlingly, more than friends. What do you do when you think you're attracted to guys, and then you meet a girl who steals your heart? A trailblazing debut, reissued with an introduction by acclaimed author David Levithan, and copious back matter, including three graphic novel stories by Sara Ryan (and artists Steve Leiber, Dylan Meconis, and Natalie Nourigat) about the characters.