Wonderful

Wonderful by Jill Barnett is a historical romance set in medieval times as Clio, a young, orphaned ward of King Edward II is awarded to Merrick, Earl of Glamorgan as a bride. Along with Clio comes Camrose Castle, her family’s rundown castle in the Welsh Marches.

At first these two, although attracted to each other, battle over everything. Merrick’s main concern is to repair and fortify the castle, while Clio had dreamt of a romantic courtship. She’s had to wait six years for her knight to claim her as he was off battling in the Crusades. Now her main purpose in life seems to be to goad and annoy him. Of course as time goes by, they learn not only to understand each other, but to love each other as well. The story has some history, show more along with plenty of action and romance, and while I would hesitate to recommend it, this story was exactly the light escape I was looking for.

Wonderful is much more of a bodice-ripper than a proper historical fiction story, the thoughts and actions Clio are far too modern in scope to be believable but there was romance, humor and some descriptions of day-to-day life so although rather silly, I enjoyed the time I spent with the book. show less

I am in love with Jill Barnett’s books. I think she has the perfect balance between funny and gut-wrenching moments. Other romance writers get the balance right as well, perfect example being Julia Quinn. But Jill Barnett does it to such an extreme, it is unbelievable: when I say funny , I am not saying witty or light , I am talking about laugh-out-loud, almost- fell- off- my -chair funny. And when I say gut-wrenching I mean tears streaming down my face, let-me-hold-you-in-my-arms agony. Everything I could hope for in a romance novel and then some more.

Wonderful tells the tale of Lady Clio of Camrose, a young, spirited woman who since very early in life had these wonderful ideas that invariably got her into trouble. The latest one got show more her banished from the Queen’s court in only two days - after which her father managed to secure her future by getting her a betrothal offer from Merrick de Beaucourt a knight who was then fighting in the Holy Land. After 4 years, Merrick has not yet returned, her father falls sick and dies and she becomes the King’s ward. She is then sent to a convent where she waits for another 2 years.

Merrick is a man who has fought alongside the King and is given a title as the Earl of Glamorgan and the opportunity to marry Clio and her lands. He is tired of battles and is prepared to settle down with a quiet wife. Only problem is his new lands are on the border with Wales, a constant threat to the English and his betrothed is the complete opposite of quiet and meek. And she is not happy that she had to wait 6 long years for this man.

They can not marry straight away as he needs to fortify the castle’s defences and they take this time to get to know each other as they try to hold their grounds on what they believe to be each other’s duties. At first he has little time for her and she believes he only cares about wars. She carries on with her wonderful plans. Like the one to try and create the legendary Heather Ale, a special brew that is said to have strange powers and which recipe has been lost over time. And in her way of doing so, ends up concocting different versions of ale that make people sleep or giggle or make poetry. She also works out a way of getting back at Merrick for the years he has kept her waiting – every time he asks to see her, she leaves him waiting for two hours and in twenty years their score will be tied!

They go about their ways bickering and fighting but of course, this being a romance novel they find their way into each other’s hearts and never a wedding night was so sweet as this one, for this time it was the hero who cried at the sight of the woman he cherished.

There is also a cast of wonderfully drawn secondary characters who add to the story , from Roger FitzAlan, Merrick’s best friend and man at arms (the protagonist of the second book in the series) to Thud and Thwack, lady Clio’s companions- the explanation for their names is one of the most hilarious scenes in the book.

There are so many other funny little moments in the book but my favourites are how Clio always has new names for Merrick. If he is in one of his moods, he is the Earl of Grumps or the Earl of Grim; when all he can think of is to build the protective walls around the castle , he is the Earl of Warmonger but funniest of them all is when after a particularly hot sexual encounter, she starts to call him Earl of Lips.

But I also mentioned heart-wrenching moments and Jill Barnett do not shy away from them. These two live in dangerous times where the shadow of attacks are only a few kilometres away and natural diseases can bring death ever so swiftly. All ends well, of course, but we do share a tear or two before the Happily Ever After.

Notable parts/Quotes: Clio has always had a romantic view of war and battles and the place of Warriors in it all. But when she is attacked by a bunch of Welsh people in the borders and Merrick comes to her rescue, she finally sees what is like to be amongst death and destruction. This is a turning point for both of them, when she see who he is and when he realises how much he cares for her when faced with her nearly death:

"Strange how his armor could fend off arrows and slashes of swords. It could deflect the blow of a mace or the jab of a dagger. It has saved his life too many times to count. Yes, his armor has never ceased to protect him.
Until now.
At that instant, a moment of time that was no more than a flicker in the face of Fate, he learned something that would change his whole life. No matter how thick the metal or how masterfully crafted, no matter how many men-at-arms he had or how many weapons he drew, nothing…..no nothing would ever protect him from this one small woman."

Additional Thoughts: I love it when we have a glimpse into the author’s creative process. Jill Barnett got the idea for this book after seeing a beer commercial and in her historical notes she explains that the Heather Ale’s legend was indeed true and chronicled in the history of the British Isles. It seems that most medieval ale was brewed by women and it was a respectable way for a woman to support herself and be independent. Hooray for the medieval women who actually got around to do just this.

Verdict: Wonderful! This book seems to be out of print and I got a used copy from Amazon’s marketplace. It is easy enough and I promise you will not regret it. You could also take the opportunity to get another one of hers which is also out of print, Bewitching, one of the most adorable romances I read so far.

Full Review at:
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I'm sorry to be really critical about any book because I can imagine how a book can be a labor of love for authors, but I have to say that I did not particularly like this. I didn't hate it, but the writing was poor and I found the characters and the story inconsistent.

All of chapter 1 (granted it's only 4 pages) is used to describe Clio. I don't want to be told what a person is like, I want to learn through their actions. And then, frankly, Clio's actions throughout the book were contradictory to the long opening description. I was told she was independent and strong, and then later I kept thinking she needed to grow a backbone.

There were a number of passage that I felt hadn't been fully developed - or maybe the author was show more purposefully trying to be vague (although I can't imagine why) - and I couldn't understand what was happening exactly. For example, when Merrick uses the tunnel to recapture the castle and rescue Clio. There is no mention of a battle and whether or not it was successful. One minute they are escaping through the tunnel and then a few pages later I realized that they were living in the castle again. I had to back track (on this and a number of other occasions) to figure out what I had somehow just missed.

And then some of the writing, I was just like ??? For example:
"Like a field of golden buttercups that hides a prickly hedgehog, Lady Clio's hair hid her true nature." Just, wow.
And unfortunately this line was in the first chapter. I think some of the problems I had with this first chapter really colored the way I saw the rest of the book. show less

I had never heard of this Author before, and let me say how glad I am to have found her! She is such a gifted writer who has the ability to draw you right into her characters' lives. I thoroughly enjoyed this book and have just bought the next on in the series, Wild.

Truly one of the best medieval romances ever written.

Truly one of the best medieval romances ever written.