BJ Slippy

3.5

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A strange orb falls from the sky and lands in the swamp where Jason lives. He fishes it out, but when he accidentally touches one of the buttons he suddenly finds himself turned into a woman. Hearing a helicopter he races back to his cabin to hide the sphere. Before he can figure out how to get his own body back his buddy John knocks on the door. What was he going to do?

Not badly written, this story took me by surprise. I’m not sure why I thought it was show more monster porn other than it takes place in a swamp, but instead of monster sex I got gender swapping. Fairly creative with decent sex scenes I would definitely read more about Jason, John and the mysterious sphere. That would be pretty cool to have as long as there were no bad side effects. show less

First half (or maybe 40%) was kind of slow. Getting a rough vague idea of the main character. And first date that just involved meeting in a park. Then things picked up. Erotica-wise. hmms. Picked up in terms of eroticism.

Ah. Good. Drama. See, this is like a typical romantic comedy movie. Must add weird tension in the form of misunderstandings and slightly wrong word choices. I'm being slightly sacastic if that isn't clear.

In this case, after "going down" (no idea why I'm putting quotes on show more that), the blind woman tells the fat one that she doesn't have to go down on her. The fat one (what, the fat one's size, and the blind one's blindness are important to the story . . . fine) . . .. After Sandra goes down on Missy, pushes her to climax, she adjusts herself and sits on the sofa next to her. Causally commenting that Missy didn't need to return the favor. She just wanted to make sure that . . . right, I didn't really get it, but meh. She wanted to make sure her guest had fun with the blind women, basically. Missy misinterpreted that to mean tat Sandra was pitying her for being fat. Or something. And storms out. See, tension and drama.

Cute story. The overall story was interesting. The graphic sections read a little mechanically. Just a little. At times. At other times not.

Ended a little . . . well, not abruptly. hmms. Ended quickly? Bah. It was a short story. It had a discernable beginning, middle, and a . . . um, something of an ending. I suppose it says something that I want to know more. To follow more of their story. I suspect that isn't going to happen. Oh well. show less

Um, wait, is there some formula to these stories? Well, I can't really say that after only reading two, but . . .. Two people meet. They seem to hit it off. Suddenly one freaks and splits. The other is confused and obsesses over the one that freaked.

Um. What? Girl freaked because . . . . reasons. Something to do with she didn't think the guy was serious (which is vaguely similar to why the woman freaked in the other story I read by Slippy). Then the second time she sees the guy, after a show more week of ignoring him, she gives him a blowjob the first second she sees him. Oookay? Hand job. Blow job. This is insanity territory. Not in an of itself just . . all of it together.

'Without saying a word, I bent my head down and took one of them [nipples] into my mouth, sucking it like a small penis' - the guy sucks on the girls nipples.

Sucked on her nipples like a small penis. Sucked . . small . . . penis . . . what the fuck? show less