Tim Bishop (3)

My review of the first book in the series (The Persistent Road) championed the chief female character, Lauren: “[She] is the highlight of the story. Lauren’s personality and enthusiasm helped keep the tale interesting.” Did that ever change in this sequel—by 180 degrees.

In the original, Doug had the main role. In book two, Doug is second fiddle as Lauren takes the preeminence and, because we now get deep into her thoughts, my presumed angel becomes a loser, at least in my show more opinion.

Lauren is supposed to have taken numerous years of her young life serving as an altruistic missionary at an orphanage in Uganda. Yet the Lauren in this story is disappointingly self-centered. She takes a dangerous course away from Doug to trek on her own despite repeated warnings from so many not to. She has no sensible reason for the risk. A real chance of physical and/or mental harm to see nice scenery?

Throughout her perilous escapade, she pines over her wayward fiancé Jeffrey, wonders about “sweet” Doug, and then lusts after a stud named Lars whom she meets on the road. Her fleshly imaginings toward Lars are only intensified by foolishly placing herself in inappropriate circumstances with him.

Amidst all of this, regardless of some “caring” comments about people she meets or platitudes in prayer, she demonstrates only a concern for herself and her love life, and certainly no particular care for the possibility of her also-ran beaus’ fractured emotions. To be honest, I was so disturbed by her relationship with Lars that I nearly tossed the book in the trash.

I finally decided to at least skim the remainder to find some redemption in her story, although I never found it. There are some dramatic happenings later in the book but they only amplified my determination to never ride a bike across America. The gospel is presented, however it is a small element surrounded by a sickening tale of three poor saps fixated on the same self-seeking woman.

I’d like to say I was just in a bad mood the day I read this book, but I read it off and on over two weeks. This “love” story lacks real love. The author is talented, though obviously I failed to find in the heart of Lauren a Christ-centered believer.

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The writing wasn't great and the scenarios not always believable. However, I liked the idea of a cross-country bike ride. And the Bible references were fine with me; I'm a Christian.

However, I disagree with the author's view of Christianity. I found it chauvinistic, homophobic, judgmental, and at times, racist. It also denied science and questioned whether single parents could raise children as well as a married man and woman could.

The motorcyclists are portrayed as horrific people who lie show more and steal and look to rape women.

When Lauren (main character) defends herself against a drunk in a bar, Doug asks where she learned that technique. She replies, "When you're the only woman living among African villagers, some of them pretty tough, you learn all sorts of interesting techniques or you don't get by." (racist)

A few pages later, Doug decides that "Yes, Lauren would make a fantastic mother. So loving and with strong moral character." And then, "A woman with Lauren's physical attributes would be a prime target for a sick man..." (So women are only good for childbearing or their looks or are asking for trouble?)

Lauren is also portrayed as helpless and in need of a man to step in to her rescue several times.

About science: "But did the scientists really think the earth existed in its present form 640,000 years ago? That seemed like a bunch of malarkey. Hadn't they read the Bible?" (and not even accurate as far as denying science; the earth has been around 4.5 billion years)

But it was the homophobia that made me finally put the book down on page 180. Lars, another bicycle rider, is attracted both to Lauren and to a man. "It might embarrass me" he says of asking Jesus a question about homosexuality. The word "abomination" is used. Lauren tells him "your wiring doesn't work the way most people's does . . . homosexuality could be a symptom of a deeper issue."

DONE. I won't waste my time reading a didactic book with such a narrow view of a loving God. show less

Lauren Baumgartner is pedaling her way towards Yellowstone National Park. She meets Doug Zimmer, another lone cyclist, and they decide to travel together at least for a while, especially for safety reasons. Doug doesn’t want to go to Yellowstone, not being a fan of free-roaming bears, but Lauren wants to experience the beauty of the park. So they part ways, at least temporarily. This is the beginning of their adventures, which does indeed include an encounter with a bear, vandalized bikes, show more close calls in heavy traffic, and a life-threatening event on the Golden Prairie Indian Reservation. This novel covers several social problems as well as personal ones. Lauren feels that her fiancé is having second thoughts about getting married, and she breaks off their engagement. Doug is still mourning the death of his wife and wondering about the rest of his life. Lauren meets another man on her trip who catches her interest, especially when he seems to need some spiritual guidance in his life. Through these characters various social issues are explored, including sexuality, abortion, treatment of Native Americans, alcoholism, drug abuse, and gangs. All these issues are seen through the filter of Christian beliefs and morals which are prevalent throughout the story. It’s a well-written tale, with interesting characters placed is an intriguing setting. This book may not send you on a bicycling trip across America, but it may lead you to contemplate what you can do to help others. show less

The Road Unveiled by Tim Bishop combines Christian fiction, Contemporary fiction, romance, and Action & Adventure. This book is the second book in the Bicycle Adventure series. From the very first page, this faith-filled adventure sweeps readers onto the rugged roads of the American West, where every mile traveled is a step closer to healing—and every choice tests the courage to trust again.

Lauren Baumgartner is running on more than tired legs and determination. With a broken engagement show more behind her and a haunting secret weighing on her heart, she pedals forward chasing freedom, answers, and a sense of peace she’s not sure she deserves. Armed with nothing but bear spray, a one-woman tent, and her faith, Lauren’s journey is as raw and vulnerable as it is breathtaking.

Then there’s Doug Zimmer—a quiet soul nursing deep loss and wondering if companionship still has a place in his future. His path collides with Lauren’s on the open road, and what begins as a shared stretch of pavement slowly becomes something far more meaningful. Their connection unfolds gently, built on understanding rather than perfection, and shaped by two hearts learning how to hope again.

The story doesn’t shy away from danger or doubt. As Lauren travels through the Golden Prairie Indian Reservation and encounters men who see her as vulnerable prey, the tension spikes, adding a pulse-pounding edge to this tender romance. These moments reveal the true strength of her faith—tested not in comfort, but in fear.

What makes this novel unforgettable is its emotional honesty. Lauren’s past as a missionary in Uganda brings depth and spiritual complexity to her struggle, while Doug’s quiet, steady presence offers a beautiful picture of grace in motion. Together, their journey becomes a powerful reminder that God often meets us not at the destination—but in the middle of the road.

Why You’ll Love This Book:
✨ A slow-burn romance rooted in faith and healing
✨ Stunning landscapes that make you feel the wind in your hair and dust on your boots
✨ Characters who feel real, broken, and beautifully redeemed

Final Verdict:
This is more than a love story—it’s a soul story. If you enjoy Christian fiction that blends adventure, emotional depth, and spiritual growth, this book will stay with you long after the last mile is traveled. 🚴‍♀️

So, check out The Road Unveiled by Tim Bishop for yourself. I definitely recommend this series.

I received a complimentary copy of this book, but this in no way influenced my review. All opinions are my own. show less