Ceridwen Hughson

The main reason I gave three stars is because this novel would greatly benefit from more editing/proofreading. However, I believe it has a lot of potential. There were many intriguing things that kept me reading, as well as the interactions between the various characters. In addition, although I was not really a fan of the main plot twist, it did take me by surprise, which is rather rare, and may appeal to other readers. If a newly edited version was published, I would recommend it without hesitating.… (more)

Interesting plot line.
At the start I was a little confused, but as the chapter progressed it made more sense.
It gave a rather different take on various Egyptian ideas and put in a totally new world.
Very action packed at times, with good character bonding and the pacing was good.
I liked how none of the characters were really stuck in any real gender roles, everyone seemed just as capable as the other.
There are a few spelling errors in their that had me pulled out of the story, as it was the same sounding word but meant something totally different. (using Taught instead of taut).
Overall I really enjoyed the book, the assassin character was great and the AI was rather cleverly done to enhance the MC.… (more)