The Hum and the Shiver

Rating: 2 out of 5

edited rating 3/16/23. Downgraded from three stars to two. The benefit of the doubt was not warranted for this book

This book is the first of six novels in the Tufa series. A distinction must be made. The Tufa in this urban (or would this rather be rural?) fantasy are not spires of rock that formed when minerals bubbled up into a lake, rather they are an isolated group of people distinct from other residents of Tennessee. The story follows the character of Bronwyn Hyatt, wounded on the field of battle in Iraq, as she returns home and to her pre-enlistment life.

Summary of review

I enjoyed reading this book, and once I got into it was an easy page turner. The first two-thirds of the book set the stage for the action show more packed and fast paced plot of the last third. A somewhat implausible fantasy of rural Tennessee would not normally pique my interest, but this book was worth the read. Well written prose and beautiful lyrics made this book a good story, however it was hampered by some world-building issues which require a larger suspension of disbelief than I normally entertain. Overall, I was a bit disappointed but will continue reading the series.

Plot: 2.5 out of 5

This book is rather short, according to Goodreads the ebook is 349 pages and it only took me a little more than six hours to read. For so short a book a lot of characters are introduced and sketched. This is definitely a slow burn, at about halfway through the plot begins to develop in earnest, and in the last third the action begins to take place. I wasn’t super impressed with the plot, it was underwhelming, but well executed nonetheless.

Throughout the book several sexual encounters occur, none depicted in great detail, but all of them were more or less bizarre.

Bronwyn, in her 20s, and Terry-Joe, 17, have sexual tension between them. It starts going somewhere before Bronwyn backs off of the pedophilic plotline a bit. Also, Bronwyn walks in on her parents making love. What kind of adult married couple has sex in their living room whilst their children are at home, especially considering that they have a perfectly adequate bedroom down the hall?? Sure, this drove a plot point, but it could have been executed in a better and less creepy fashion. Then we have the whole Dwayne/rape/abuse plotline, but I digress. Setting: 2.5 out of 5

This book is set in rural Tennessee, but for what its worth, it could have been set anywhere. The world-building was in the Tufa tribal dynamics and their uh, fairylike abilities. I found the veil of mystery surrounding the Tufa a bit misplaced. As readers we are aware they are not normal humans from the get go, but the author makes a point of teasing what the Tufa are throughout the plot-line. This really wasn’t necessary, and the lack of information was rather frustrating. However, a lot of things were hinted at, and as this is the first in a six book series I’m hoping that the future books properly flesh out the Tufa, their landscape and their non-human nature. With the benefit of this doubt I’ve given the setting a rating 2.5 out of 5, if the other books don’t dramatically improve the world-building I’d have to rate this a 2 or 1.5 out of 5.

Characters: 2.5 out of 5

Yeah this is a lot of 2.5 ratings, but these were fairly middling aspects. The protagonist Bronwyn, is somewhat well developed, but many fundamental questions about her motivations and reasonings were unanswered, and many of her actions and sentiments make no sense. Chloe and Deacon, Bronwyn’s parents are more or less a shadowy enigma, Deacon more so than Chloe.

While Craig wasn’t very well developed, I really liked his character. Craig is the pastor of a would be Presbyterian church near the Tufa homeland. He is a sincere Christian, but not a rabid fundamentalist or a judgy snob. It was clear that his faith was near and dear to him. A positive and reasonable Christian is always appreciated in a book set in the rural south. Sadly, the inside of Craig’s head isn’t delved into and he was flatter than necessary.

Dwayne, the antagonist, wasn’t relatable or understandable at all. He didn’t develop beyond the sex crazed drug junkie stereotype. A crooked perverted cop, a grumpy patriarchal old man, and a reporter almost out of job wrap up the stock characters.

I didn’t feel particularly connected to or empathetic of any of the characters with one exception, Chloe on the death of her oldest son . I’m hoping the characters deepen in the following books.

Writing Style: 4 out of 5

This is the aspect in which the book excelled. The prose was captivating and entertaining. Sentence structure was logical without being overly effluviant or basic. The insertion of original lyrics and poetry was delightful and well done.

Personal Enjoyment: 3.5 out of 5

As I’m writing this review, I’ve had to wonder why I liked this book as much as I did. It must have been the writing style. I was able to overlook a lot of nagging questions and plot holes while reading but they’re cropping back up. I will certainly be reading the second book, but if the issues I mentioned aren’t resolved I can’t say that I would continue reading the series. show less

Bronwyn Hyatt has returned to her small town in the mountains of Tennessee a hero. She was the only survivor of an ambush that killed most of her fellow soldiers. She killed many of the enemy soldiers before being rescued on live TV and becoming a celebrity. But Bronwyn's small town is different than others. She is a full blooded Tufa. The Tufa are a people that are their own ethnicity. Legend says that the Tufa were living in the mountains of Tennessee before any other people came there. Bronwyn must now adjust to life back in the small town with the obligations of being a first daughter of her people, an obligation that she went to war to escape.

I really enjoyed this book. It is a bit of urban fantasy (without the urban part) and a show more bit of magical realism. The Tufa may have their special magic, but they come across as real people with small town problems rather than magical beings. It is really about a young woman chafing from the responsibilities of her family and her small town life being forced to return and face the constraints that drove her to leave in the first place. It is a human story with a bit of magic and fantasy. I look forward to reading more books about the Tufa. show less

move over Charles de Lint because Alex Bledsoe is definitely a new urban fantasy writer deserving of attention. The Hum and the Shiver is pure Appalachian Fantasy - modern, subtle and enticing. He puts a new twist on an old myth of the folk faerie without being wildly extreme. It is one thing to write fantasy in which all creatures of magic and mystery are out and in the open, but to write of the hidden and haunted takes talent. Bledsoe doesn't disappoint and the intertwining theme of song into the mythos is superb.

I was lucky enough to snag an ARC of this excellent book which doesn't debut until September 2011. The Hum and the Shiver tells the story of Bronwyn Hyatt, American war hero, newly returned from the Middle East because of her injuries. Bronwyn is welcomed back into the bosom of her family and the rural Tennessee community where she grew up. She's also a member of the Tufa, described as being there in those hills long before the first white settler came upon them. Mr. Bledsoe does a fabulous job of capturing the mystery and unique nature of the Tufa while still showing them as mainstream people trying to make their way in the world. The book is an excellent blend of magical whimsy mixed with a side order of dangerous. PRE-ORDER this show more book. You won't be disappointed. show less

Overall summary: Very, very disappointing.

I really wanted to love this book. I like the concept, I love visiting the Smokies so the setting was a definite plus, and I quite like several bits and pieces in this book. But in the end... that's nearly all it was: a concept, a setting, and a few bits and pieces, mostly feeling random and not very interconnected.

The plot - well, there really wasn't much. Bronwyn Hyatt returns an injured war hero to her home clan; but beyond a few 'her? she's not a hero' comments from her nearest and dearest, and using the injuries as an excuse to re-evaluate her life some... this didn't really feature. It was pretty much entirely unnecessary to the rest of the story, which seemed to be meant to be about half show more revealed local politics in which Bronwyn has some part - but beyond a couple of half-hearted inferences, nothing ever came of that, either.

The characters - well, again, there really wasn't much here. Bronywyn was a little all over the place, but okay, she's just returned home after a traumatic experience (and I include the 'hero' aftermath as part of that trauma), I can cut her a little slack. She's having difficult integrating who she used to be to who she is - and deciding who she wants to be - today. This could have been an interesting piece of character development but instead it just felt like muddled characterisation, with the character forced by the plot, instead of the plot driven by the character. The villain was a one-note asshole which was annoying, but could have been made to work if you'd seen less into his mind and he'd been allowed to be a little less totally ineffective. But my biggest pet peeve in characterisation here is Bronwyn's mother, Chloe: there is a total lack of consistent characterisation here, which made the relationship between Bronwyn and Chloe - a key part of the story - a complete pain to read. How are Bronwyn and her family meant to come to any kind of believable resolution when her mother's basic characteristics change according to what Bledsoe thinks the plot needs at any give point, and not according to any kind of consistent internal coherence? She's not a character, she's a plot device for a plot that doesn't even really exist. For a character who spends so much time onscreen, so to speak, this is really unforgiveable.

There are also several subplots and strands that go nowhere -- I'm guessing the side-story with the reporter was meant to help introduce us to the Tufa, but it's pretty much tangential to the whole thing, and we don't learn anything with Swayback that we haven't learnt elsewhere. The state trooper - bad caricature, and unnecessary. (Also thoroughly dislikeable.)

But what bugged me most of all: I like the idea of the Tufa. I've no objection to an amount of mystery around a central culture of a story. But I want to feel as though the author, at least, has some direction on it... and beyond a few clumsy pointers that the Tufa equate to the Tuatha de Danaan, I don't think Bledsoe has a clue himself what comes here. It leaves me feeling as though he may already have written himself into a corner on it, despite not having really committed to anything yet, and that's just not conducive to a good story. show less

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95 points/100 (5/5 stars!)
Alert: Gushing Incoming

Former wild child Bronwyn Hyatt is returning from Iraq a hero, a bit more broken than she was before she left. But, she doesn't feel like a hero, she feels lost. Since she returned, death omens have been stalking her family, and with her hurt and broken, she has to heal quickly because she refuses to let it happen.

This. was. amazing! Oh my god, guys. How have I never read this before? Heck, I didn't even hear about it until late last year! Someone really needed to tell me about this sooner. I'm actually angry no one told me this existed sooner.

It has been no secret that I love fae. Bledsoe has such an amazing take on show more them! At first, I wasn't quite certain if they're fae or something he made up entirely new for this series. It is left a bit ambiguous because of the way the story reveals itself. I absolutely love the way they are built. They are mysterious, even to themselves sometimes. Even by the of the book, we don't even know anything close to everything about the Tufa.

Alex Bledsoe manages to take me back to a time right after 9/11, when the military and its soldiers were right in the public conscious and when they came home it was a big deal. I had to double check when it came out, because I thought it could have been 2005, not 2011. Even though they aren't that distant in time, it still manages to catch the fervor of that time.

Bronwyn doesn't feel like a hero, still. She likely never will. She still feels like the wild child she was. It doesn't help that she doesn't exactly remember the events they call her a hero for. She knows what happened, but she doesn't remember. She is torn up inside because of everything, the expectations of others, and the fact she never really wanted to come back.

There are a lot of plots that are connected together in The Hum and the Shiver, though. The main plot is about Bronwyn as well as the death omens. Bronwyn finding out who she is again is a minor but vital part to this book. The death omen plot is scary and depressing. There is also the story of Don Swayback, who is finding his Tufa heritage. It is interesting, and it manages to give a way for Bledsoe to introduce the fae from a more outsider perspective, since Bronwyn already knows, and the third character that I'm about to mention can't really know. The last is a newly appointed methodist minister, Craig Chess, who was sent to the area that try and convert the area. Craig is a great character, with a very strong sense of how he wants to present himself to the world with his calling. All of this unfolds piece by piece, layer by layer, to create a magical whole.

This is a blending of magic and music and religion. The book runs off magic and music. The magic is a mystery, we don't know what it can do or how (yet). The music is a calling. Every Tufa hears the music, lives the music. It is beautiful, even if the music doesn't call to me. The religion is new to the Tufa, and it isn't really their way. Yet, it is a part of Craig, and he wants it to be a part of the Tufa. They aren't derisive about it, it just isn't a part of their traditions. It is an interesting blend of the three.

The ending made this. As much as I want more, it is because I always want more. I loved Bronwyn and Craig, I even liked Don by the end. Yet, it still ends at a great place. This isn't a light, fun story. It is heavy and thrilling and just plain odd, and the end reflects that.

Audiobook Update: If you're looking for a new audiobook with a great story and a wonderful set of narrators, this is it! The Hum and the Shiver features two narrators who do the job perfectly. show less

This book particularly appealed to me because it takes place in a thinly-disguised town in the next country from where I grew up in East Tennessee. And the Tufa people are a fantasy re-imagining of the Melungeon people who do, in fact, live in the area.
That said, I enjoyed the story, but only modestly. I may well read the sequel because Bledsoe does such masterful job of evoking my homeland. But it isn't a burning ambition at the moment.
[Audiobook note]: The audiobook is performed by two readers: one when the narration mostly comes from a female character; the other when it comes from a male. While I can understand why the producer chose to do this, I'm not sure it was the best decision. The female reader (Emily Janice Card) does a much show more better job of capturing the mountain accent. And the story might have been smoother without the back-and-forth transition between readers.] show less